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Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
happy :) I don't know why Alice had them wait, but ... reading on.
Author's Response: :-)
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 12
it's unfortunate how many more stories are like it ... in today's world, as well as in history
well written chapter <3
Author's Response: Thank you. Domestic violence against women, and children, is an age-old problem. ...
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 11
YAY!!! I *do* love your Rosalie!!! whoot!!
Author's Response: Yay!
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh, I do hope I like your Rosalie. *am a happy fangirl at the moment
Author's Response: Ha. I hope you like her too.
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 9
She gave in sooner than I thought she would ... or should for that matter, but I understand that she's grieved, and is still grieving for Mark. Why put more into Edward than she really needs to?
Author's Response: Edward is not top of her list at the moment.
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 34
What a beautiful chapter. Your story is just lovely!
(And I voted for you!)
Author's Response: Thank you -- on both counts!
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow, a lot has been explained here. I'm glad for that. I'm pleased that Bella has the spine to stand up to them and ask much needed questions.
Cannot wait for Edward to show up and explain himself.
Author's Response: Ha. I hope you enjoy his explanation. I tried to do something a little different.
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 7
This seems so confusing for Bella. I'm glad she's angry; she has every right to be. Alice and Jasper seem so matter-of-fact about everything.
Author's Response: They're finally treating her as an adult!
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
I believe your earlier readers were too engrossed to take the time to review. I know I'm engrossed, but I enjoy leaving reviews. So ... this chapter is pure Bella. I love that she's interested and into looking for clues. This seems 'real' to me. I like that aspect of it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved how, in the books, her first response is CURIOSITY. It's great. It's such an academic's/scholar's reply. Ha!
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 5
oh, the sadness in this ...
Author's Response: It gets better!
Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 34
Awww, finally she's feeling the flutter..... It's like riding a bike. *Sigh*
I love the pace at which you are proceeding with the their reintroduction.... Bella needs this time to get used to the idea. Perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, she's feeling the flutter.
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 4
*sniff*
Author's Response: Sorta sad, true.
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm glad she told him off. The nerve really, but ... *happy sigh
she needed him
Author's Response: Yup, he's back. :-)
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, wow! What a heart-wrenching thing to come home to. For her to be so lost ... I can almost feel her loss. :) well done
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: DeeMichelle (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Here because of twilightenablers on LJ. They're pimping your fic, and I'm glad they did!
Great start. I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for letting me know! Tell them thank you!
Reviewer: bella mcc (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 34
Oh goody goody goody!!!!!!!!!! On Bella and Edward moving slowly forward and on your nonmation!! I got to go vote.
Excellent touching chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad. This chapter was fun for my little romantic heart.
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 34
fantastic as always...things are definitely moving forward! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, moving forward at last.
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 34
This was such a sweet, peaceful chapter. And I'm thrilled for your nomination- looks like I've got some voting to do!
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, despite the tension, there is a certain peace to it, one Bella makes her realizations. And the voting is going to be hard. There are several categories where I'm REALLY torn, as to what to vote for.
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 34
Well once again you have out done yourself. I am very thankful that you chose to write this story, but just not that. I guess I enjoy it so much more because they have matured and grown. I understand that Edward's love for Bella has never changed and he would still love her even if she was still married to Mark.It was unfortunate for her to lose her husband and to be alone, but I feel that perhaps Bella and Edward's time has come for them to be together. He wanted her to have her human experiences and she has. Even though isn't hasn't been all roses and sunshine. I am sure they can get past all that and maybe appreciate each other that much more because they have been given another chance. At least I hope that is where your wonderful story is headed. So update soon and congrats on the nomination. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very relieved this chapter seems to have worked for readers. If it hadn't, the story was sunk. Ha! When she finally realized she was ready to move forward, it needed to make sense and feel like the logical conclusion -- not rushed.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 34
They're still working on the baby steps, but I couldn't be happier.
Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you! And at least the baby steps are going forward. Ha.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 34
Congrats on the nomination. Great chapter, as usual!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 34
brilliant chapter as always. i so look forward to this and being you are from here i enjoy it even more LOL
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 34
Thank you for the update. This story just gets better and better with each chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 34
We're finally getting there! Yippee. I thought of you today when I said shorter and the lady gave me a mom cut. Humphf. (I'm old enough to be a mom, I just didn't want this short of hair!)
Author's Response: LOL! I'm sorry about the hair. Mine is about chin-length. But it's that limp, fine, almost-blonde hair and this is about all I can do with it and not look like a complete dork. If I get mine cut too short, it's flat as a pancake. I've always imagined the Bella has nice, full hair!
Reviewer: AccioChocolate (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 34
That was just plain ol' sweetness. Lovely sentence: "The notes curl around her, soft and pure..." The whole paragraph is lovely, actually.
So much about them has changed since the Forks days. She reads him so much better, or maybe he lets her see more, or maybe both.
Speaking of those awards, I just voted this morning, as a matter of fact, and was I ever thrilled to see your nomination in that category! Remembering what I wrote in my first review of this story, there was no hesitation about which story to vote for. In my mind that you already OWN that award!
Author's Response: [blush] Thank you. Although the two other stories in that category that I've read are also two of my own favorites. So I really wouldn't mind if they won either. The other I actually haven't read yet. But I'm glad that readers do appreciate the editing. I myself don't like reading stories full of errors.
And yes, Edward and Bella have changed a lot since Forks. I think she does read him better -- and he does let her, too. :-) He's learned to be more open and honest.
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