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Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 21
so......sounds like he nailed it...........why do I have this sinking feeling that Victoria hasn't handed in her cards, so to speak???????
Reviewer: nanlovestwilight (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really like the story and I'm down for a sequel. Please don't let Edward mess with Victoria. I think Bella is pregnant. Will she tell Edward or will misunderstandings keep the lovebirds apart? I just love happy endings so I am voting for you to keep them together. Maybe make the sequel about Bella and Edward working through their relationship with her pregnancy?
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 21
keep it coming
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 21
I am glad the Victoria knows that Edward isn't available. I just wished he would have told her. I didn't understand why he was being evasive. I thought he did a great job with his presentation too.
Reviewer: Tamae (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 21
Please don't have Edward cheat on Bella, I'm begging you! I think it would just ruin the whole story =( So far he's said no, but he seems very affected by Victoria - which imo he shouldn't be if he really cares so much for Bella!
Reviewer: vampirenites (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 21
i don't like victoria she sounds like a leech get rid of her personally and get bella and edward together in a more intimate and closer relationship i want her to call him and for him to tell her how he really feels for her
Reviewer: OCDE (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 21
why hasnt either off them called each other yet. ugh. oh and im glad edward didnt give into victoria or just let her do what she want and not pull away, because what if bella would have magically walked in and so them, she would have been proud like i am of our man, lol.
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 21
Will there be a cat fight? Will Victoria back off or step up her game? Will Edward remain monogomous? HMMMM.....
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 20
It's not only Edward who is a little apprehensive about Bella and Victoria working on the same project, soo... let's see if and how Edward is going to extricate himself from her clutches. And yes, a sequel would be fun.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 18
oh hell, what now, is Emmett going to tell on Edward, too, only Bella left in the loop?
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 17
that was dramatic - want to know what's next
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 16
yeah, thank you for the Jacob part
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 15
close call with Emmett, they're so being found out soon
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 14
still don't understand why Bella can't clue her friends in; and I have the suspicion that Alice saw the condom-wrapper and now thinks Bella had sex with Jacob
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 13
so nice to give Jabba to Rose, feel so sorry for Edward, want to know what Tanya did to him
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 12
Rose in Roy's car makes me uneasy, still hate jealous Jessica and Mike
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 11
bow chica wow wow for sure - first they're serenading each other, then they can't keep their hands off each other! I like Emmett and Rosalie making up, 'bout time too
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 10
Bella again under the influence of alcohol and Edward Cullen - I like it, but hate to think about the gossip that will probably start when they both show up late or not at all
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
Jess trying to hit on Edward, Rose dating all the wrong men, Mike Newton woring fot the Cullens and Jacob as the blind date -well, this is going to be interesting.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
Jessica the office viper - he, he. Bella has to go on a blind date, poor girl.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Bella working with Em, that's nice. Wonder what Edwards issues are. Jessica lamenting 'sour grapes' - sounds familiar. Want to readmore.
Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 20
Just came across your story and it's great! Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank yoU!! always great to hear from a new reader! :) xoxo!
Reviewer: kb8883 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 20
A SEQUEL!! Definitely!
Reviewer: momof4luvntwisaga (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 20
I found this fun, and yummy fic last night and read it non-stop(well as non-stop as I could with 4 kids) to get caught up. I really like this story line and can't wait to see how this plays out! They all are so much fun together and enjoy getting POVs from all the characters and alone time with all the couples!
Please update soon because I want to know how the whole Edward and Victoria meeting goes and what he finally tells Bella! Also what is going to happen when Emmett and Edward finish their conversation.
I know that I'm new to your story and reviews, but I like this one so much that I would really like to see a sequel. I would prefer a story with all the usual suspects instead of the prequel sans Edward and Emmett.
Great job and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: You just totally made my day! lol. thank you so much for the sweet review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story! :) I'm fairly certain that I will be continuing on with this story, so you'll have much more to read :) i look forward to hearing from you again! xoxo!!! -Dark
Reviewer: whitt96 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 20
Please write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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