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Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Great story please write more.
Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
i love this story(: but are you ever gonna update it again?? :((
Reviewer: golden_eye_girl (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Prolugue
I loooove this story. Rosalie should kick Tanya's arse before it's over!!
Reviewer: lovetoplay (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
I've really enjoyed this story- you're an amazing writer! Your Edward is one of the best, truly a Prince Charming! I'm excited to continue this story & hopefully to see how 'what comes around goes around'! And I definitely rated it a 10! Thanks for a very entertaining read! :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Glad you brought Jake back. Too good a literary tool to ignore! :D
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Cabin
But, but, but......oh, alright! I can't disagree with your rating reasoning. (But I can whine and pout about it! lol)
May I suggest an out-take for us grown-up (horn dogs)? ;D
Love the feel of getting Isle Esme, but in WA. Good balance between canon and doing what this story requires.
Thanks for working so hard to entertain us!!! :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 18: Unwanted Visitor
I really like the twists you take with your stories (in a sense they aren't really twists just the natural conclusion of the story, but without being able to see them coming from so far off as to wreak the story!)!
Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 14: Shiner
lmao at Emmett!!! (Are you sure you didn't channel my family?! The unmerciful ribbing is just too familiar!!!) ;D
Author's Response: My hubby is like that too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 9: Getting in Line
Humina, humina, humina...that kiss...then chapter left me having trouble forming coherent thought1
Thanks!!!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Alice in Wonderland
Sad or not, you've got to set the stage, right! Very realistic modern Cinderella story. Sadly, probably fairly true for more people than we'd like to know about! Nice set-up.
Glad I finally get to finally take the time to read more of your writing!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
ooh that was the wrong thing to do to bella. i cant wait to read the next chapter and i hope tanyas family gets what they deserve.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
So typical of a guy to speak before thinking.
I know how those crazy schedules feel like. My daughter is back in school and pretty soon the hubby's vacation time is up....i'm dreading it!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Wow...good thing Edward is in medical school...maybe he can get some help removing his foot from his mouth! What an idiot! He's tired, he's frustrated, and he doesn't know how to balance everything because while he may be a genius, he's still young and has things to learn. Unfortunately, Bella happens to be the guinea pig. Good luck on this one, Eddie Boy!
Kat
Reviewer: danced_in_the_rain (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fairy God Alice
OMG you found a new button for me
Nerd!Edward
love it
Author's Response: Try Nerdward! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
oh boy.. i really hope she doesn't get together with jake...
Author's Response: Never.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Wow- Edward doesn't know when to keep his mouth shut!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
He FORBID it? Damn that boy is in trouble.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Edward has a nerve does she look like his child.
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
OMG, that was so funny!! I think we all tend to forget that as much as we love Edward, he is only 19 years old and OCD to boot (lol). Seriously, "I forbid it" (hehe), he's lucky Bella didn't brain him with the roasting pan.
I sympathise with Bella about wanting to spend time with Edward but, as someone in the medical field, I can vouch for the fact that free time does not exist when you're studying. If you want to socialise I have fun, you have to compromise with yourself about just how much sleep do you really need. Trust me, I know (lol). The girl just needs to understand that they are adults now and have responsibilities.I hope she doesn't do anything crazy like fall for Jacob Black when she's so vunerable!
Aww, I'm going to be sad that your're ending this story - I love it. But I have desperate hope that you will be writing another E&B story, right? Can't wait to read what happens next in Cinderbella....
Author's Response: I have several other stories, in case you haven't read them. I'm currently working on a sequel to one and a completely new one, which I don't know if I will publish. I'm trying to finish up my stories by December because I want to start writing a novel at some point.
Glad I got the part about the no time thing right. I did some research about what to expect when you are a med student, and the articles I found all said what you said--you have no life. My college roomate was a nursing major, and I've never seen someone study so hard. She'd pull all nighters a lot. And she would come into our room at times with the face of a zombie and tell me that there were people in her class barely scraping by with C's, and they were going to people's lives in their hands. Yeah--I've seen it too.
Yes, this is an E & B story. I never do Jacob stories because I don't like him much. This story will probably cast him in the nicest light yet.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Edward is an idiot... don't know what else to say, but Edward is an idiot... he may have all the brains in the world, but sometimes...
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Hey cool chap =] poor bella and edward =[
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: First Spat
Tsk! Tsk! Edward you never forbid a woman to do anything...Won't you ever learn? LOL
I was worried at the beginning thinking oh no, what type of drama now, but it's jacob..Shouldn't be too bad right?
He needs to find some bal. if I was a genius, I wouldn't studying like that..Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Kimberly. And you're right. Never forbid a woman to do anything. Ultimatums aren't a good thing.
Edward is much younger than his peers, and he feels a lot of pressure because of that. He's always been driven and focused, knowing what he wanted to be when he grew up. But now that Bella's in the picture, he isn't sure about anything. And Jacob is coming back at a very vulnerable time for him. He feels guilty about spending so much time away from Bella.
He'll talk with Carlisle who is going to give him some great advice. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Cabin
You're back!! Thanks, I've been waiting impatiently.
That was very sweet and beautiful, Edward and Bella are so sweet and innocent that more smuttiness would have been a bit OOC I think, this was just perfect.
So now we just need to deal with the evil stepmother and -sisters!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I've had my kiddos home all summer, and it is a little hard to write when they are home because of their age. So, I hope I can get moving on this and bring it to a close soon. Thanks.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Cabin
NOFANGSALLOWED IS BACKKKK!!!!! *jumps up and down*
Is it weird that I love all of your stories so much? I certainly hope not. Because I do. I was actually pretty upset that you hadn't updated in awhile.
I hope everything is going well with you :D I can't wait to see where you're going to take Cinderbella and Gifted!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I've been writing and hope to update my other stories soon. Thanks for hanging with me. I had a great summer, and I hope you did too.
Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Cabin
I just read the whole story...wow. It caught my interest simply by the title. My parents nick-named me cinderbrella and or brittanybrella when I was young. It brought back some laughs on that part. I really enjoyed the story very much; you really do not miss a beat with your borrowed characters. GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Try some of my other stories, espcially "I've Been Waiting for You for Forever."
It's cute that your parents nicknamed you that. You must be their little princess. Thanks for reading.
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