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Reviewer: tarin22 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Modern Myth

Even though it's sad, it's also hopeful as well. Alice is one of my favorite characters and you've nicely added another layer.

thanks. N.

Reviewer: Evanescent Wishes (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Modern Myth

I like how you talked about the whole 'black hole' thing. But my favourite line was:

Something I am confident in, yet utterly scared of. Nothing is certain.

It sounds so strange, like the world is constantly shifting. :D

Author's Response:
You are so right! That was part of what I was trying to portray when she did talk about her uncertainties with her ability! Congrats! haha.

Thanks so so much for reading and especially for taking the time to review! I appreciate them all!

Much love,

Tashia xo

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Modern Myth

Woah, an impressive piece of work, that's for sure.

It's a rather interesting take on one of the brightest characters of the story. I love how it's a real clear look into the heart of Alice. Your use of bolded words was excellent.

Yes, I really am impressed by it. What really struck me is how badly Alice feels she needs to maintain the facade and how she can let it down with Bella around.

Great work.

Ta

MAster of the Boot

Author's Response:
First, thanks for taking the time to read AND review! Reviews are my crack and I have to admit that I'm a wee bit addicted! haha.

I almost didn't bold the words, but I did want to keep the...dominance that is Alice present in the piece, so I added that characteristic to the type.

And I love that you see how Alice isn't always the "happy-go-lucky pixie" everyone always describes her as.

Much love,

Tashia! xo

Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Modern Myth

very good, every one knows you can't be happy all the time and i enjoyed seeing this side of alice.

Author's Response:
thanks so much for taking the time to read AND review! reviews are my crack and I totally appreciate that you took those few seconds to review too!

much love,

tashia

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