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Reviewer: CuLLeN_VaMp1918 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 10:12 PM · On: Oneshot
Reviewer: CuLLeN_VaMp1918 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 10:11 PM · On: Oneshot
Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 03:24 PM · On: Oneshot
Aw! Very aweet. I really liked the ending there and I really liked the idea as a whole with Edward turning human, though I'm finding it kind of impossible to imagine how it would have happened. Well, I guess that's why you didn't write it in huh?
I have now found myself warming to the idea of them having two kids. And how helpful Alice would be in this situation, though I'm sure Edward and Bella would make her keep any information to herself... now that's an image!
I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!
Reviewer: knightmuzic (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 04:11 AM · On: Oneshot
Wonderful! This would've been a much more satisfying ending to the series than we got in Breaking Dawn.
And I just love dirty-talk!Edward (maybe we should dub him Cussward?). :D
Reviewer: waterborn09 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Oneshot
Good one. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Oneshot
I absolutely loved it especially the last part.
Author's Response: Why thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! ;)
Reviewer: jillgib (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Oneshot
A friend recommended this website, specifically your stories and I have to say they are absolutely brilliant.
Author's Response: Aw, lol, thanks so much - to you & your friend! I'm so glad you weren't disappointed! :D
Reviewer: clarinet166 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Oneshot
- I love this story.
- I think this story should continue.
- I know this story will not continue.
- It's a well written story.
- Someone knew what they were doing when they wrote this story.
- I'm a big fan of Edward and Bella stories.
- This story is awesome.
Reviewer: Lulabell75 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Oneshot
That was hot! I've always liked the idea of Edward changing back into a human. This would be an awesome story to continue (or go back).
Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Oneshot
*SIGH*
Noticed that you're more into writing heavy *ahem* scenes... and when it comes to slow tender ones you just sum it up in one single paragraph tops... ( well, this far into reading your work... :P )
The "human moment" for Edward... lol! nice!
Now... the way you ended it... great, wonderful, perfect...
And also, I have three questions... (maybe four) keeping in mind that there ARE vamps, then there also ARE the Quileute wolves;
1. Did Jake still imprint on Renesmee?
2. The other 6 Cullens are still vamps, right?
3. If that nmbr. 2 is YES, They'll (I'd think) be taking care of Edward and Bella's descendants, through the years after they pass away right?
(4. I can fantasize about how Edward became human, what's your version?)
~E~
PS. Ok, maybe even 5 Q.: when will we have update on IPoN? (what happened to Felix? & as it was like my heart returned to its place when Jake turned out to be alive, then, Ness will be too? PLZ?
Reviewer: GraceBlack (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Oneshot
I love this story! I read it months ago, and have searched and searched for it. So, I've added it to my favorites so I won't lose it again. I don't usually like Edward (canon Edward, anyway) but I love your depiction of him. I love your descriptions of him as he's aged...very sexy.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'm glad you found it again, lol! ;)
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Oneshot
I loved it. The idea of Edward actually aging and to experience things along the lines within his age bracket instead of forver being comformed to stick with the things of his age group. Example, never having to say he was NEssies brother or some cousin. Great!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know! :)
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Oneshot
Sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Melinda the Proud Bookworm (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Oneshot
This was great. It would make a great story if you wanted to continue it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Although continuing it is a good idea and has occurred to me before, I think I'm going to leave it, as I have quite a bit on my writing plate at the moment. Again, thank you very much for reading! :)
Reviewer: Melinda the Proud Bookworm (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Oneshot
This was great. It would make a great story if you wanted to continue it.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Oneshot
THIS WAS GREAT - HOT AND SWEET!
Author's Response: THANKS! :D
Reviewer: murasaki86 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Oneshot
blushing. really good.
Author's Response: Lol, I made you blush? ;)
Reviewer: wishiwasacullen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Oneshot
Kari,
I don't know if I ever told you this, but this was the first of your stories that I ever read. I love it now just as much as I loved it the first time that I read it.
I have to tell you, you are truly the queen of lemon writing. Your writing is flawless and so descriptive. It is like I am watching a movie take place the entire time that I read it.
You have such a wonderful gift. It is truly amazing to read what goes on in your head. I don't know how you do it, but you should be proud.
I look forward to more from you, Lisa and Mari! I know how beautifully you all write and I love that you all have decided to get together and give us all this wonderful gift of your writings.
Now that I have "puked" all over your review page, I will say Thanks again and look forward to more.
*MWAH* Chy
P.S. Just a suggestion for a smutty one-shot........naked Twister for the DHGs!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL, naked Twister, huh? That would definitely make an interesting crackfic!
Anyway, I'm so glad you love my smut so much! What, it doesn't make you toss your cookies? LOL
Love ya!
-Kari
Reviewer: achelle131 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Oneshot
i wish i had saved my review from your original post. it was much longer. I think i said something along the lines about you being my favorite Fan Fiction writer. you still are by the way.
i love that you left it up to the reader to think up their own way of how edward became human... and i htink this would have been a great AU ending to twiilight rather than everyone going immortal, lol.
oh and that was madd sexy! you've got to love a mis-shaven rugged manly edward GIVING it to bella, with a thumb in her ass! LOL! very hot, and of course, a mix of sweet and tingling aww at the end as they conceive another child.
good times, good times
what a great first addtion to twilight after dark!
Author's Response: you've got to love a mis-shaven rugged manly edward GIVING it to bella
Lol, I couldn't agree with that statement more! Aww, I'm your favorite fanfiction author? *blushes* You're too sweet! Yeah, it really sucks that I lost all the original reviews to this fic, because I had like 22, I think. Oh, well. Glad you liked it! ;)
-Kari
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Oneshot
Whew! Hot sex and romantic Edward all in one. Great job!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! Glad you liked it! :D
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Oneshot
Wow Kariann that was well......hot! You make me want him in my hallway with his arms crossed in silk pj's too! Really that was amazing, you did a beautiful job writing this oneshot and I can't weait to read more! Thanks for sharing! Melissa
Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much, Melissa! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D
-Kari
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Oneshot
I'm sure others have asked, but... how did Edward become human again?
And yes, the story was awesome! I'd like a birthday present like that! Edward is a hot 17-year-old vampire, but I can just imagine how much hotter he'd be as a fully developed, rugged, sexy as hell MAN! hmmmm... :)
Author's Response: Lol, actually, I have no idea. I got the idea for this "glimpse" while I was reading the series because I thought somehow Edward was going to end up becoming human somehow. ;)
Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Oneshot
Oh wow, I loved it. I hope it's not just a one-shot!!
Author's Response: Lol, glad you loved it! And yes, it is a oneshot - but it's also the first entry in a series of oneshots called Twilight After Dark by me, cfmom, and achelle131. Anywho, thanks for reading! ;)
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Oneshot
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I gotta say, I´m not the most motherly woman but if Edward said " “I want to impregnate you” I wouldn´t have much problem running around babies with green eyes and unruly hair! ;)
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, that would be difficult to resist, wouldn't it? ;) Thanks for reading!
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