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Reviewer: xoxoJalicexoxo (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 09:20 AM · On: The New Hellion

WOW!!!! can u make another one? like the continuation of this? (if you have)

It was awsome by the way

Reviewer: melaniemarks (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 11:26 PM · On: The New Hellion

I absolutely LOVED this story! It's sweet and sexy and I wish there was more to read!

Reviewer: TeamEdwardFanpire (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 02:04 AM · On: The New Hellion

i LOVED this! Awesome writing, it seems totally believable. You should deffinetly turn it into more than a one shot, it is great.

Reviewer: charliedee (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:43 AM · On: The New Hellion

i loooove this story! please write more, you can't end it like that... its too good. so sweet and sexy.

Reviewer: Jazz_fan (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:53 PM · On: The New Hellion

WOW!!! that was absolutely amazing and very sexy!! Please, please, please write more!!!

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:36 PM · On: The New Hellion

This story was awsome i really hope you would continue!!!! It rocked!!!

Reviewer: stacyc19791 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:03 AM · On: The New Hellion

loved it loved it if you write more to this story I would love to read it.  Thanks for the cute and steamy story.

Reviewer: cag4288 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:20 PM · On: The New Hellion

Loved it!  Don't usually read alice/jasper stories but this one was excellent! Please continue!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 01:04 PM · On: The New Hellion

This was great! I love Alice and Jasper so much, and they don't get enough love! :) 

I really liked how you went back and forth from the present time to the flashbacks.  It was great to read some of the backstory.

Shower lovin'...always a good time! 

Excellent job! 

xo Jenn

Reviewer: sagewoman (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:30 PM · On: The New Hellion

jasper is so my favorite!! i really loved the story. it was hot without being to much. i was sorry to come to the end, i would really love more.i am going to put it on my favorites so i can read it again.

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:55 AM · On: The New Hellion

i loved it! oh my god, i laughed and laughed, and got a little turned on, haha ;P it was a great story.

Reviewer: wahine (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:26 AM · On: The New Hellion

I really liked it and I would like to see more!  Please consider making this a full-blown story!

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