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Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Stolen Away

Really enjoying reading! They both have their work cut out for them.

Author's Response:

Oh, that they do!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 11:28 AM · On: 2009-Ordinary World

So incredibly sad that Bella would withdraw to that degree. They were so much more than friends and she just cut him out of her life. Edward was wrong but Bella really broke them.

Author's Response:

She was broken, as was he, long before this happened.  Really, they broke each other with their overreactions.  You'll get a little more info on the impact of his words and her leaving in future chapters.  They were not all fueled by his harsh words.  That was just the straw that broke them both.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 02:52 PM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Heartbreaking is right.  I can only say that I am glad that there are many more chapters to read.



Author's Response:

And many more unwritten!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Far Away

Damm...tried to do too much and lost my review.  Since I don't feel like retyping it - suffice to say you ladies have done a fantastic job and I can't wait to read more.

I spent the last 18 hours doing little more than reading this and admit, you had me going into heartfailure a few times!  I was pissed at B for her insecurities (although I get it and where and why she does what she does) and almost threw something at my monitor when Edward almost cheated.  I liked how he chased Tanya down to return her business card.  Most guys would have kept it or thrown it away; even if they had no intention of calling.  The way Edward reacted left no doubt in Tanya's mind that he was not interested in any type of relationship with her ever!  I'm guessing Edward's last email was on a Sunday since that's when most NFL games are played so I'm hoping Jasper will still be there to talk Bella down from the ledge as I'm sure she'll not react well to Edward's email.  Also hoping the therapist will be able to give valuable insight to Bella so she won't "run".  Open communication folks...it's the only way! 

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:20 AM · On: 2000-Christmas

My heart is breaking...never expected that to happen.  Poor Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

It was a terrible thing to happen... to both of them.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:04 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

Charming...absolutely charming! 



Author's Response:

Not a bad first kiss, especially for a dare, hunh?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:31 AM · On: 1998 - The Dance

Really sweet and wonderful!  That is the foundation of a beautiful relationship...even if there are rocks and crab shells along the way.

Reviewer: alys (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Far Away

great story. love Jasper... so does Em get his jeep back? they could be a two car family. LOL

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:09 PM · On: 1998 - The Rescue

That is really a beautiful friendship.  Really something.  Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:27 PM · On: 1997-First day

Love that they became friends all on their own...no Alice intervention.



Author's Response:

Yes, their friendship was *all* of their own doing....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 05:57 PM · On: 1997-New kid

I have had your story on alert for some time and just started to read!  So glad I did!



Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!  We hope you enjoy the story!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: teamedwardfan (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Prologue

Not to pressure you or anything, but when, oh when will the story be updated??? I am dying here!



Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!  RL happened and we were unable to update.  However, the next chapter went into queue on Monday and should be up momentarily!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Far Away

So glad that he gave the card back and that he went to talk to someone! And is workin on getting better!

Congrats to Rose and Emmett!

I look forward to seeing what happens next!!! Would love to raate this story higher than 10!!!

Reviewer: BellaMarie4 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Prologue

I just picked this up to read and I know I'm gonna love it!!

Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!

 

We hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 06:06 AM · On: 2001-Grand Gesture

Ouch, that was heartbreaking... :)



Author's Response:

NOT easy, that's for sure!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:44 AM · On: 1997-New kid

Cute. Great start to a friendship. :)



Author's Response:

They did have a great start to their relationship.  So open and honest, as only kids can be....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Prologue

Sounds like its gonna be good. :~)



Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!

 

We hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Far Away

no!!!!!! need more

Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Changing Channels

ah mother trucker!!!!! this shit is soooo sad... makes me tear... good stuff! i'm addicted



Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!

 

Bella's definitely a sad chiquita....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 04:46 AM · On: 2001-Goodbye to You

that was the most mother truckin saddest things i have read... but  i would of been the same as ed at that age... i'm a big person that's why... n i wasn't very confident either... shitty deals with having low self esteem.

 

haha n i'm listening to

Til I Get Over You

Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!

 

Teenagers tend to see things in extremes - either it's the worst thing that ever happened or the best.  And their reactions are  based on those views.  Both Edward and Bella, in mature adult terms, over-reacted.  But what they both do from here is quite "normal" for a teenager.  They took their pain to the extreme and acted.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Far Away

I am so relieved he didn't act on his self doubt and really screw up any future he may have with Bella.  Thankfully Alice was there for him! Moving up his therapy was also a good move on his part with " Dr. Imoan" imean Naomi, that was hilarious!

Glad Rose is pregnant, and traded the jeep for a minivan! Good for her!

Hopefully Bella will take his confession well but I don't think she will, not at this time. Great job as usual ladies!

Reviewer: eclipse_1918 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 05:25 AM · On: 1999 - Camping Trip

nice ;D



Author's Response:

Sorry we are so behind in answering reviews!

 

Not bad for a first kiss - particularly an unexpected one!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Far Away

Still kinda hate... soo... you´re back from your hiding spot.... hm... epov next again?   ;)

Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Far Away

Well I'm sure Bella will react in her insecure way and think that she will never be enough for Edward at least at first, but I hope that she will really hear what he is saying in the email and forgive him and put a litttle more trust in him. He did walk away after all. I just really hope these two can get their act together and become the coup;e we all want them to be and soon. I understand the need for the seperation and the healing but there is too much heart ache going on. I can't stand seeing them this torn up. I want to wave a fairy wand over the both of them and say," poof, your healed". "Now go have fun like bunnies!"

Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Far Away

I think he is working on getting himself right and Bella needs to work on hereself too. I don't hate him

Great chapter

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