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Reviewer: amanda_1747 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Gotta love Jasper!



Author's Response:

Jasper's the bee's knees:)

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Okay, I am REALLY mad right now!  AHHH!  We STILL don't know what Edward did with Tanya.  *Deep Breathes...*



Author's Response:

Alas, that is how this story works.  Alternating each chapter, and we couldn't change that now.

 

HOWEVER, you will get the answers to your questions in the next chapter.  Promise!

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Yay! Great chapter. Jasper made some very good points.



Author's Response:

Jasper is just what she needed.  The perfect balance of compassion and tough love....

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Yeah Bella is finally going to get some help! Glad to see it was Jasper that got through to her and found someone for her to see. Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

She's wanted to get help all along, but she needed the support and nudge Jasper could give her.  Now we're on the right track...

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Ellie (and Tammy)--I'm still loving the emails and the vast amount of communication that they are able to share with each other.  I wish Edward wouldn't doubt Bella, esp in light of how much she is trying and sharing.  (though I know he is broken too)

Love that it was Jasper who came to visit...it makes sense, esp with B's struggles to find a therapist.  I still wish that Renee could show her more support, but in reality (well, BtS reality), she likely doesn't have it in her.  I just want her to redeem herself! 

Still hoping that all is okay....but admit that I'm scared to read the next chapter and find out what happened with Edward....

Great job!

--Melanie

 



Author's Response:

*hugs you*

The emails almost seem like a separate world, don't they?  Almost like they're safer in cyberspace than they are on the phone or together - so much more is shared.  Hopefully, one day, they can have this face to face.

 

Jasper was just what the doctor ordered.  Just the right amount of compassion mixed with a little bit of sternness.  Exactly what Bella needed.

 

Hang in there.  All the Edward questions will be answered soon!

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kmfroggi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

good ol' jasper!!! thank god for him.  i am so anxious for epov, man i hope he wasnt so stupid!!!! great bpov!



Author's Response:

Jasper was just what the doctor ordered!

 

You will get all your answers about Edward in the next chapter!  Hang in there!

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Ok Edward better have a damn good reason for not answering his calls...grrr i just don't understand him some days. I realize I'll get in his head soon but at this time its just how i feel.

Three cheers for our favorite southern boy! I am glad he is such a fuckawesome friend. I do hope Bella and Edward start pulling their shit together because they are miserable without each other.

I will anxiously await the next chapter



Author's Response:

You'll definitely get the reason Edward didn't call back in the next chapter.  It may not be what you're thinking...

 

And Jasper to the rescue!  He was JUST what Bella needed to move forward and get back home.

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Hey Mrs P

So glad that somebody made a trip down to see Bella, cause she needed a good slap upside the head.  I know that she is depressed but you would think that being well again so she could get back to Edward would be enough of a motivation, but apparently not.  That is what makes me cranky about Bella.  She has a wonderful guy who loves her & wants her back and that's still not enough for her GRRRRR!! She frustrates me and annoys me and I want to pummel her.  I'd be happy for her to just stay in Florida and continue to wallow and we find someone fabulous for Edward. I know this great gal from Australia. She's fun & outgoing with no issues, she'd be perfect.

Annette



Author's Response:

Hmmm... well imagine it was your good friend suffering. Someone you knew that was this depressed and needed help. Would you be frustrated with having to be patient with them? Probably. Would you be angry with them? We doubt it.  If it was your best friend or sister or child or mother, would you still want to pummel them?  Or would you see someone who needed help and try to support them?  

 

Just food for thought;)

 

Don't worry, I still love ya, even though you diss on Brokella all the time!  Just remember, if you're mean to me, I'll prevent Chubward from traveling Down Under.  And I mean DOWN UNDER! 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

WTF is her problem?!? She needs to buck it up & deal with life already!! Ok...Ready for another awesome chapter...Bring it on ladies!! :)

Author's Response:

Hmmm... well imagine it was your good friend suffering. Someone you knew that was this depressed and needed help. Would you be frustrated with having to be patient with them? Maybe. Would you be angry with them? We doubt it.

 

Her problem is that she is mentally ill and , regardless of whether or not it's her fault, has no support system in place.  People in this position can't just "buck it up and deal".  They often don't even know how.  Bella needed help and Jasper was just the nudge she needed.

 

We do totally understand your frustration though!

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

oh ladies!! Another fantastic chapter. LOVED getting Bella's side as to how she is handling the separation from Edward and how she truly wants to get better but is struggling with where to start. LOVED that Jasper came to her and is helping guide her in the right direction. I AM DYING  for the next update and so help me God if Edward does anything with Tanya, I will castrate the fucker! I hope he has some sense in that thick skull of his and knows that if he does fall back into the destructive pattern that he was in, that he will ruin any chance of having a relationship with Bella. I have faith in you girls! I am sitting here patiently waiting to see where you will take these two next!! Thanks for the shout out! LOVE your story and cannot wait for more!!!!!! HUGS!!



Author's Response:

*hugs you*  Thank you for understanding where these mixed-up kids are.  Bella does, definitely, want to get better but that level of depression often muddles the mind so much that starting at all is a feat.  Jasper was just the nudge she needed.

 

EPOV is up next and it *will* answer your questions!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Awwwwwwwwwwww! I love some Jasper time.  ;)



Author's Response:

Jasper is the bee's knees, isn't he?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: songster51 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Some people just take that charity thing too far.  I was about to kick her sorry butt and say stop feeling sorry for yourself and get the frigging help you, for Christ's sake, so obviously need.  You can always pay them back.  Gah.  Yay for Jasper.  Smart guy and of course he has connections and a female therapist is just the ticket for poor B with all of her abuse issues.  Ok, so just drag out the damn Rain and EPOV, I'm still thinking 'asshole' until I see different!!  Happy Sunday, you two.  I do not own a pitch fork so you're safe.  I could probably do some damage with the snow shovel though,  Hmmm.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... well imagine it was your good friend suffering. Someone you knew that was this depressed and needed help. Would you be frustrated with having to be patient with them? Probably. Would you be angry with them? We doubt it. She doesn't feel sorry for herself so much as her fear and panic control her, at this point.  Jasper was just the medicine she needed

 

And we didn't mean to drag out Rain.  You will get the answers in the next chapter.  Promise!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Delandora (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Very very glad that she's FINALLY gonna try to get some help. And it was really cool how it was Jasper that helped her see the way. Really curious as to what happened with Edward last chapter and can't wait to see what's happening with him. Awesome chapter, loved it, and looking forward to the next one. Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Bella really wants this, but depression and panic that pronounced are hard to work through alone.  Jasper gave her just the amount of support she needed.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

edward better not screw this up



Author's Response:

Hang in there!  The question will be answered in the very next chapter!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Yeah, Jasper! Absolutely perfect! She needs to be kicked into gear, she's so buried in her fear.

I'm so afraid to read the next chapter, but how can I not?!!



Author's Response:

She is completely overwhelmed and panicked.  She wants this, but she needed a nudge and a little support.  Jasper was just the guy for the job:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Yay Jasper!

Author's Response:

Jasper is definitely the man of the hour!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

yay! Jazz to the rescue! He was awesome; he just took things into his own hands!

Bella needs to get a grip and do something! At least Jazz is really pushing here.

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Hmmm... well imagine it was your good friend suffering. Someone you knew that was this depressed and needed help. Would you be frustrated with having to be patient with them? Probably. Would you be angry with them? We doubt it.  It's not Bella doesn't want to do something, she just needed some support and someone to put her on the right track.  Jasper was the perfect guy for the job.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

I'm so glad Jasper stepped in.  Hopefully this is a step in the right direction to get her back home where she belongs!!



Author's Response:

Bella needed a little support and a nudge.  Jasper was just the guy to do it...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Belize123 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Jasper is the bomb digity! 



Author's Response:

He is!  We love him!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Jasper is helping her. Bella can't do it on her own. Hopefully getting help will show her that she doesn't have to everything by herself and that it's ok to ask for help sometimes.

Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Bella definitely wants this, but she needed a little support and a nudge.  Jasper was just the man for the job...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

~is still chanting HEA from last chapter~

 

you are so good at writing Jasper ... LOL loved it honey can't wait for the next one!!!



Author's Response:

I lurve writing Jasper!  He's a blast!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

I love this story but I want E's POV. :)



Author's Response:

I know.  I do.  But we can't change the way the story is written at this point and it was Bella's turn...

 

Edward is coming soon, though.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

You don't have to hide. Your Edward better watch it though, although my aim with a shotgun will probably have innocent bystanders running for cover.
Jasper is perfect. I love that he came for her. It is just so sweet that he would think it should (and he is right it is very fitting) be the one to help her move in the right direction. It is too bad that she couldn't just go to Seattle or somewhere a bit closer to home just so that she is not so far from the life she wants eventually, but I get it. She would probably just give up and run home to Forks if she were too close.
This story has taken a wonderful turn. I just hope Walloward can keep it in his pants. Geez, dude. You have a hand. Use it.
Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

LMAO!  Yes, Chubward, remember the fine art of self-pleasure!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

I am still enjoying this story even though the last chapter threw for a loop, but after reading this chapter I am wondering if Tanya is a shrink in disguise.  Or am I clutching at straws and just hoping he hasn't done the dirty deed.



Author's Response:

Who could blame you if you were?  Hang on!  All will be answered in the next chapter!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Running to Stand Still

2 words : LOVE Jasper!



Author's Response:

Us too!

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