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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2015 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
My daughter told me about this one-shot, saying it was the hottest thing ever, and she did not lie! I like all your stuff anyway so I'm a believer!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well fuck. That was beyond the hottest lemon I've ever read in my entire life. Thank-you. =) I loved the story too, what a damn long one shot. I loved it! I laughed my ass off quite a lot! It was cute too, and obviously beyond erotic as hell. =)
Hi Kimpy! I was just favoriting your new story, and was looking over all of your stuff again, and thought I'd read this. I'm so glad I did!
I hope you are doing well and not working too hard. Take care. Until next time, xo Kelly
Author's Response: The hottest lemon you've ever read? Well, fuck. That's just awesome! :)
Thanks for giving one of my other stories a chance... they're so old they don't really garner any attention anymore.
Reviewer: CrimsonIceGoddess (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
So so hawt. I don't usually favorite stories on here, because I don't really read that much fanfic anymore, but I decided to look up your story, The Nightingale Journals, and found this.I'm glad I gave it a read. Very hot, very sexy.
Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my God, this was so fuckin' HOT. Shockingly graphic and detailed. LOVED THIS!
Author's Response: Well, great! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I did warn ahead it was graphic, but I'm glad you gave it a chance anyhow!!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well done. I love these two.
Reviewer: newborntwifan (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Luv it! The ass play was a very nice touch...no pun intended. ;)
Author's Response: Oh dear, I caused you to branch out, didn't I? ;) I'd apologize for that, except I'm not sorry!!
Reviewer: Breaking Aurora (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Looked up your profile after today's Friday One-Shot. It was hot and I must say that this story is very hot and I'm not even into tats and piercings! :-) At this point, I feel sort of like Bella with regards to her Noah's Ark comment!!! Thanks again and I'll be sure to check out your other work.
Author's Response: Well, awesome, thank you so much for giving me a chance after just reading one story! I really appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I'm combining it together with another one shot, "The Green-Eyed Monster Comes Out to Play," and making it a multi-chapter fic called "The Nightingale Journals," in case you're interested.
Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
THAT WAS AMAZING!! THANK YOU!!
Author's Response: Well, then, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ;)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, wasn't expecting that one :-)
Author's Response: Uh, yeah, this one is kind of... out there. Just felt like doing something different. But thanks for venturing forth anyhow. You can't say you weren't forewarned. ;)
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Too awesomely HOT! Got anymore...going to check now~
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, there is plenty more where this came from...read at your own discretion!
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
Too awesomely HOT! Got anymore...going to check now~
Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
I clicked on your profile after reading your Smut Monday one shot and this story was great!
Author's Response: Lisab, thank you so much for giving me a chance after you liked my Smut Monday submission! I really appreciate it. I have a ton of stuff on FF, too, under the same penname, in case you are curious. ;)
Reviewer: BandE4eva (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Amazing story!
Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
holy crrap . Great one shot with it's story line and lemony goodness
Reviewer: TraciSnow (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
fuck. they need more than a one shot. they are hot, hot, hot
Reviewer: RosieKiss85 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
holy hottness batman!! probably one of the most erotic stories i've read yet. and i loved every juicy bit of it.
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Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
hmmm....spanking, rimming, and anal all on the first date. Really? Don't get me wrong, it was hot, but really?
Author's Response: Well, this was a one-shot, after all, so it isn't like I was able to string it out into a number of dates. Plus, it is FF, which always stretches the boundaries of reality. So, to answer your question: Yes, really. They're consenting adults who felt comfortable with their sexuality and wanted to share that with each other. Yep, it is a tad unbelievable, but that wasn't my point. It was mainly just to write a red hot lemon. Remember, this was a contest entry, and the subject matter was tattoos and piercings; it fit the parameters of the contest requirements. Sorry if that offended.
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
holy hotness. My hubby thanks you for your lemon. Seriously. He doesn't even know it yet. Can't wait for the multi-chap story!
Author's Response: Then you need to go read the story I just posted, "The Green-Eyed Monster Comes Out to Play." The story will be based on that, too.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Girl you got a gift for kinky!!! Must say it was really hot though......all i can say at this point................
Author's Response: Why thank you, amym, I think...;) I have more kink on FF.net, it you're interested. I did have a big old warning in the A/N, didn't I?? Thanks for reading, btw.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
holy hannah...!!!!" fans self intensly
Reviewer: darkling (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
Smoking hot!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
DAmn that was hot!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Whew. That was really hot. Wow. Can you write another one?
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I have a couple other one-shots available on FF.net. I'm also going to be doing a multi-chapter story based on this o/s and another one I have. It will probably start in late Sept./early Oct, once I'm done w/my other multi-chapter story, "Desiderata." Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
damn that was hot with a plot!lol
Author's Response: I am physically incapable of writing a lemon o/s without a plot. I wish I could, but I can't. So I'm grateful my idiosyncracies make for good reading!
Reviewer: Jilli90 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is great you should make it more then a one shot.
Author's Response: Actually, I've gotten a lot of comments about this story and another one-shot I have on FF.net. I'm committed to melding the two together to create a multi-chapter story. Keep your eyes peeled, will probably happen sometime in late Sept.-early Oct., once my other multi-chap story, "Desiderata," is complete.
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