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Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 11: Aftermath
WHY? THAT IS ALL I ASK. WHY? POOR ROSE AND ALICE,AND EDWARD, WHAT ABOUT THEIR PARENTS? ROYCE FUCKING KING WILL PAY FOR THIS. MAYBE ALICE CAN HELP.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 10: Addicted to Love
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! YOU DON'T DO THAT!!!!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
Yes! Yes! Yes! But Royce would have also got punched and pused into the pool.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 7: Notes
Wow you can call cliche' all you want but that was like a modern-day prince charming thing that just happened.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
That is such a freaking understatement!!!!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
I've nerver had a mud fight,I wonder how it would be?
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 4: Not her
Well that just freaking swamps!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
Very nice twist on how you included Royce in. And he is gonna be in for a surprise when him and his frineds try to jump Emment. He's gonna have a ball!!
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: Ride
Jasper & Emment can thank Edward for leaving them.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
Wow! Edward flipping people off,mysterious babe calling vamps over? Hell yes!!
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Worst Kind of Monster
i love me the doctor
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
Absolutely wonderful. Romantic AND funny - what more can you ask for?
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
This was fabulous. The part where Bella and Edward are healing together, and they take a shower together -- it brought tears to my eyes. Would that every woman molested by a man should have such healing and tenderness from her lover.
And the ending was terrific fun!
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects
Brilliant. Esme is brilliant; you are brilliant.
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Worst Kind of Monster
I never thought it could be Carlyle! Great plot move!
Reviewer: Mimigrace (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
great first chapter! i'm pmsl, although i now have images of little-jazz bouncing around in my head - just a tad disturbing ;-)
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
I'm having some trouble with the plot here. The Cullens shouldn't be so calm about letting the girls go off on their own -- the girls are still vulnerable to killing humans, and I'd expect the Cullens to go after them immediately, in force -- not just send Esme alone some time later.
Otherwise -- still fun and interesting! Thanks!
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
Way to go Rosalie's dad!
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
Fun! This is not a shy, low self esteem Bella! Takes a little getting used to! But quite charming -- both Bella and the story.
Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
This is so sweet! I love the relationships among the boys.
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Ok, you killed it with that ending. It was actually a really good story. Their was alot of humor and the drama that Tanya created was great. You are very talented. James almost raping Bella was also a super nail biter and Edward saving her from him at the last second was thrilling. But the end could have had alittle more closure with the possibility of the sequel. Very funny though.
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
The story and writing got better as it went along. Had fun reading it. On to the sequel. THX
Reviewer: Dimetriaj04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Another amazingly awesome story. Im reading the sequel right away!!!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Just read all the way through... yeah, it took a few days. Loved the story (I am a huge fan of your other stories also). Immature E, J and Em were hilarious... Loved how the girls changed them. :) Looking forward to reading the sequel, although it looks like it hasn't been worked on in a while. You are an amazing writer! :)
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects
haha my goodness true edward bella moment arguing over Shakespeare gotta love esme and carlisle poor emmet and his brothers especially edward that would be a bleach worthy experience seeing your parents like that however as they are both :carlisle and esme: so beautiful im sure it wouldnt have been that bad to any one else haha
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