I like how you wrote B talking in her head and how she wanted to snort because she called E her 'beloved' and E called her his 'love'.  That was cute.  :)

Author's Response: I just think Bella's a snorter.  She just seems like the type.  Thanks for reviewing.

Can't wait to see what happens. Hope he hurries to change her for her sake. Nice writing

Author's Response: Thank you.  You are very kind.

OMG!! He has to change bella for gawds sakes! OMG!! DYING for more!!

Author's Response: He doesn't have to change her.  She's still alive.  So maybe he will, and maybe he won't.

I love this! I may be biased, but it's good. Do you wanna give me any hints, although i think i figured it out. Well done and nice cliffie :-)

Author's Response: Okay, here's a hint:  Bella may or may not be changed possibly by Edward and possibly not.  Is that helpful at all?

ooooh...is someone going to bite Bella for him?

Author's Response:

Possibly yes or no.  Sorry, I'm not giving anyone anything.  I love leaving you all hanging.  I know it's twisted, but I can't help myself.  I'm a monster--lol!

This is a fantastic story!  Won't Bella be ticked if she's the only one out of the loop?  She won't be able to even see her best friends during the newborn stage.  I think Edward is making a huge mistake!

Author's Response:

I'm sitting here, reading these comments (which are so lovely btw--thanks), and I'm already plotting my next move.  I don't think you'll see it coming.  I'm so excited!  These comments have added the creative fuel to my fire!  Thank you, thank you!

Now, to answer your comment--Bella has just woken up.  That leaves a lot of room for good old fashioned Edward manipulation.

I was not expecting the story to head in this direction.  Good job!  Poor Edward!  The others had a clear choice to keep the girls, but not Edward.  That would be too easy wouldn't it?  He has to suffer through an ambiguous philosophical dilemma.  What a shock.  I am so looking forward to more.  Especially with the new direction for the story.  Now we get socially awkward moments from the boys with vampiric consequences.  Yea!!!!  Ooh... do the girls get some socially awkward  newborn vampire moments?  I hope so.  Thanks for the update! :)

Author's Response:

I just didn't want to be so easy.  The relationships, especially the Bella/Edward one, are not going to be as simple as you would think.  There will definitely be bumps along the way.  I haven't quite decided where I will turn next. 

I am so happy that the story isn't predictable.  I guess I like taking you all on a ride down a windy road without any lights on to see where you are going.  Sometimes, I don't even know where I'm going until I sit down to type. 

The girls will have some socially awkward newborn moments.  Those will be fun to write.  Thanks for the review.

Great story!  I saw it the other day and decided to read it. I'm glad that I took the time, it was truly worth it.  I am a little frustrated with Edward being Edward. AARGH!!!!!  Keep the chapters coming.  I look forward to reading them:).

Author's Response: Edward is as Edward does.  He is so complex, and that is why we love him.  He has a soul, even if he doesn't think so, or else he wouldn't dissect every action that he makes.  He's such a human vampire.

I was a little nervous from the title, but the cullens are not embarassingly socially akward, just normally so, haha. This is a great story, can't wait to see more updates!

Author's Response: I really struggled with the title for this story.  I could have probably picked a better name.  I'm glad it didn't keep you from reading it.  Thanks for the review.

Woo-whoo!  Rosalie's dad rocks! Rose can totally take care of herself, but I am glad that her father knows that Royce is an ass.  I wonder what 'dear old dad' will think about Emmett?  Te-hee!  That'll be fun.  

Alice is wonderful in this chapter.  I love her response to what she had been up to recently-- "Looking gorgeous."  What a fabulous answer.  

I also liked Bella's thought "Not as yummy as Edward." Well DUH! Reading on...  :)

Author's Response:

Rose's dad will like Emmett.  And yes, Rose can definitely take care of herself.  She's so confident.  It makes her really fun to write.

Alice is always fun to write about.  She's such an amazing character.  All of the Twilgiht characters are really good (except some of the ones I didn't care for in book 4).

No body is as yummy as Edward.  He is delicious white chocolate.

Thanks for the review.

Somehow I have missed this story being updated! I love the awkward Cullens. They are so much fun. I love how Esme is teaching them with chick flicks, that is priceless!

Now that you have left us with a huge cliffie I'm dying for more!!

Great stuff! 

 

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it.  I am working on it a little tonight (I actually finished my practicing--my brain was so fried after all that music).  I hope to have it done soon.  Thanks for the review. 

UGH bastard Royce! Too bad Emmett wasn't around to pummel him to smithereens, but at least Rosalie's dad stood up for her!

*Gasp!* How evil for you to leave it there!

Great writing! I'm totally hooked on this story. Please add more soon.

Author's Response:

Mwuhahaha!  Gotcha' hooked, don't I?  I am so glad that you like the cliff hanger.  I had fun writing that part and picking the point where I'd stop.  It was really cool.  I feel like the villan in a melodrama--I need a fake handlebar mustache to twirl--lol!

Thanks for the review!