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Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
What the heck is the deal with Bella? Strange. Oh, and I had the funniest mental images of Rose and Alice when they were going ballistic on the guys. :-P Poor Volvo.
Author's Response: I'll let you know what the deal is with Bella later. I think you'll get a kick out of it. She finds a very interesting way to escape the pain.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
Okay, I admit, I knew that cliffie was coming, but dang it! Now the girls are gonna think it was our good old Cullen boys and not that jackass Royce. Poor, poor Cullens. I can feel the persecution coming...maybe. I am interested where you will take this next. My fav line belongs to Edward, "Because we didn't want to live without you," I said quietly. "None of us wants to live in a world if you are not in it." Awww! That's so sweet! Beautifully stated. So glad Eddie manned up and changed Bella. :D
Author's Response: Everyone has their different theories as to who stold the Volvo. I'll give you a list of suspects: Mike Newton, Royce King, or one of the Quillettes. I'm glad that you like Edward's quote. Too bad Bella didn't hear it. She's sleeping through everything. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
My friend Barbarito recommended your story and I love it! I read the entire thing last night and I can't wait fore more! :)
Author's Response: That's so nice. Glad you like it! Thanks Barbarito for recommending the story. I'm truly flattered. All of you are really a great boost to my ego. I appreciate everyone's kind comments.
Reviewer: Autumn Dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
Uh oh! I can't remember from the first chapter, but the Volvo must be Edwards. Who would have stolen it? One of the people off the Rez? And LOL at Emmett imagining Jasper and Edward as drag queen strippers. Now I need to get that image out of my head!
Author's Response: I'd say I'd sorry for planting that image, but I'm not. The boys harass each other all the time in this story, and this is so them. As for the first thing you said, you'll find out soon.
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Rookie Mistakes
Awesome chapter...can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: It's been posted to my incredible beta, qjmom. You should get it soon. I'm trying to update a little everyday because I will be gone all weekend long with no computer access. Ugh!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
OMG!! Loved this chapter! I was laughing so hard at Rose and Alice's reaction to being changed! So glad Edward realized that Bella would have zero quality of life had he not changed her. I was a little tripped out at the messed up silver volvo!! OMG! Did royce steal and cause the accident to frame Emmett? Or was someone closer to home, the cause of it? I love this story so much and am telling all of my friends about it! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for telling your friends. That is so sweet.
Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
cant wait to see why edwards cars like that
Author's Response: That chapter will be coming soon. Until then, I'll give you a little hint. In four or five chapters, I'm going to drop a huge bombshell that will shock all of you. It's not about the Volvo, but it is related.
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
I really like this story so far. keep it up :)
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
hmm, i cant wait to see where this goes...
Author's Response: I can't either. I'm making it up as I go, but I do know where this part of the plot is going.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
WHAT?! No way the Cullens could have done that... no freakin way!!!
Author's Response: Mwuhahaha!
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
I was wondering why in the world you made that car a silver volvo. I'm still wondering, even more now that I know its the same one.
Author's Response: Good! I've got you stumped. I was afraid this part of the plot was way too obvious. It will all become crystal clear in Chapter 15. Chapter 14 was just posted to my beta. Chapter 15 will deal with the mystery of the silver Volvo. I'm glad that you have no idea where this is going! I've got you right where I want you! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
Uh oh! Edward has been naughty....
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I know what you mean by that, but okay.
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
i just spent and hour reading all the chapters up, it is a fanfreakintastic story!!!
Author's Response: You are too kind. Thank you. I am thrilled that you like it.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
He better change her...lol. Its a great story, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I keep getting threats. Well, you'll see what happens soon.
Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
bah! another cliffhanger! lol. Oh, Edward, just change her. Stupid shiny volvo owner! update soon, i want to see what happens!!
Author's Response: I'm addicted to cliffhangers. I'm sorry. It's a sickness. I think I need a twelve step program--lol! No, I don't need a cure, just more good ideas to keep you all wanting more. I am formulating one chapter with no cliff hanger, believe it or not. It will be a bit of fluff, but it will be hilarious.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
OMG!!! GAH!! I hope he changes her!! This story is freaking awesome and I love it!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it. You are very kind.
Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
hurry i have to know what happens to bella!!!
Author's Response: Coming soon...I promise.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
OH he SO has to change her... she can't even speak now, and he can't hear her thoughts either... so... she won't really exist if he doesn't...
Author's Response: Such a dilema. Hmmm...
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 11: Aftermath
Oooh... why is Edward SO stubborn?
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
What do you mean will he change her or not?! That boy better change her or else! Or else what? I don't know, but I'll think of something. Short and sweet angsty goodness. My favorite line is Bella's -- I just called Edward my ‘beloved', I snorted inwardly. And you included the happy dance again (or at least the thought of it). Yea!!! Beloved Edward + inward snorting + happy dance= 1 happy shrew! Thanks for the update...not so patiently awaiting more! :)
Author's Response: I may or may not probably answer that question in the next chapter. Nice threat--or else what? Teehee! Glad you like the snorting. I just think Bella is a closet snorter. She just seems like the type. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Autumn Dreamer (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
Uh oh! I had a feeling the story was heading this way after the boys found the car in a smashed up condition.
Author's Response: Well poo! I didn't get you with the cliff hanger. Maybe in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
I'm going to give you lots stars. I really am enjoying this story and your quick updates. I'm really not enjoying the cliff hanger though. I'm really trying hard to grow out my nails!!!
Author's Response: Sorry. Maybe acrylics would last longer--lol! I'm a musician, so my nails are kept short anyway. Thanks for the review and the stars.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
Hold on is he letting her die "One last kiss" No she cant die no Update soon Im confused
Author's Response: Good. That was the point of the cliff hanger--to keep you in suspense so that you'd keep reading. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
that was short u evil person lol good though update fast please
Author's Response: Mwuhahaha! That's all I'm sayin...that, and the next chapter is done and I will submit it to my beta tonight.
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
Gah! Another cliff hanger! Darn it...he'd better bite her...stubborn vampire... Well, if it makes you feel better, I'd give you 5 stars...course, I haven't figured out how to do that yet. I know it's probably really obvious too...it took me a while to figure out how to add stories to my favs... I'm frequently prone to blonde moments.
Author's Response: I hate to say it, by I sadistically love leaving you all in a lurch. And thanks for the 5 stars--you are really sweet. All of you who are reading and reviewing are.
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