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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Answer and the Solution
So, I knew that asshole Royce ran the girls off the road! Well, I am glad he was made into dinner for the mountain Still wondering who's pov that is! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: You should know really soon. The next two chapters are with my awesome beta!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 17: Tales from the Crypt
Totally loved the chapter and the stories the guys told the girls! Hilarious!! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. It was fun to come up with those little gems.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 16: Bella Finally Wakes Up
AWESOME!! Loved how Bella described herself when she became a vamp. The boys reaction to the girls in their pj's was priceless!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. It was a fun bit of fluff to write.
Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Answer and the Solution
Amazing chapters as always. It was nice that you redid them though either set were both wondereful. I think Carlisle or Esem killed Royce but I'm leaning more towards Carlisle. Again great updates. =]
Author's Response: I'm a perfectionist. I still read through the stories and edit small things like grammar and punctuation. I just wasn't happy with those three chapters, so I smoothed them out. Thanks for the kind words. Next two chapters are to my Beta. First answers the question of who killed Royce. Next one is a cliffie with a huge plot twist. Hope you like it.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2008 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
Umm did you delete the chapter??. It had a ???POV someone kills Royce but you dont know and you said that you would figure out next chapter.
Author's Response: No. What's meant by that is that I'm not revealing whose point of view it is--at least until the next chapter, which is to my beta. My concert went well this weekend. Mahler 5 is so incredible!
Reviewer: ellie910 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
this is great! plz do more!
Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
FANTASTIC STORY! I hope Esme can change their minds...
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
Edward peeped on Bella! And get caught! Hilarious but sweet and sexy all at the same time.
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing that. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
Thank God. I knew Edward was much stronger than he gave himself credit for. Plus, he's meant for Bella (even if he doesn't know it yet)! I LOVED THIS. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Something about three, hot (or cold, technically), muddy vamps equals a lot of fun. This was a fun chapter for me to write. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 4: Not her
Nooooooo! Edward's going away?!?! Nooooo!! Must read more to see more Edward!
Author's Response: Hang on. Be patient. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
Is it just me or was Em EXTREMELY hot while threatening Royce? Phew. Can't wait to read about Edward and Bella.
Author's Response: Yep. He's h-o-t, but all of them are.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 2: Ride
Woah, Emmett's way smooth. Well, I wasn't expecting Alice to be freaked out but hey, I guess, what normal human girl wouldn't? Although, it IS the Cullen boys and who can really resist them for long? Off to read more! I love this story!
Author's Response: The Emmett in this story is smooth, but just wait. He has one of the most awkward moments in the story with Rose later. She hands him his butt on a silver platter with a side of potatoes and gravy.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
HILARIOUS. The dynamic between the brothers is just too funny. Can't wait to read about their first encounter with Rosalie!
Author's Response: Nice to have a new reader. I'm glad that you like it. Yeah, my brothers act much more like brothers. Their relationship is based a lot of my husband's relationship with his older brother.
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
hmm...Royce stole the Volvo...didn't see that coming, I just thought he had one too.
Author's Response: The consensus is that it is Royce, but I'm just evil enough that I might throw you a complete curve ball. What about Elvis? Attacking Space Aliens? Just kidding. Here's my list of possible suspects, most of which everyone on this list has given me: Royce, Jacob, the Quillette tribe, Esme, or one of the boys (though how that would be possible, I don't even know). I'm throwing in Mike Newton and Eric Yorkie for grins and giggles--oh and Elvis in a UFO. Oooh! What about our "friends" the Volturi. Could they think that the boys already told the girls their secret. Hmmm... Hope this makes you smile today! Your comments make me smile everyday!
Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
OMG I love this story its soooo amazing. I can't wait for more. I believe Jake or someone who knows the Cullens are vampires ran the girls off the road. Again I love the story!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Why hasn't anyone suspected Mike Newton or Eric Yorkie? Just thought I'd throw out some other names in the ever widening list of suspects. BTW, I've just finished the chapter that reveals all. You will find the answers in Chapter 18, and another cliffie in Chapter 19.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
I hope Esme gets to them and talks them out of forming their own coven... they're so new to this new life!
Author's Response: I do know that she brings them a change of clothes, which is a step in the right direction.
Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
cant wait to see what esmes gonna do!!!
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
Did Esme run the girls off the road????
Author's Response: Hmmmm....
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
wow, hmm, cant wait to see where this goes..
Author's Response: I can't either. I never know one day to the next what's going to happen. Thanks to everyone for reviewing.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
GAH!!!!! Like the twist at the end with rose saying they should form their own coven! I totally hope that the girls do not split from the Cullens. I hope Bella wakes up soon!! Cannot wait to find out who caused the accident!Please update again. Loved this chapter and I love your story.
Author's Response: Next chapter was sent to my beta this morning and it has a cute ending--no cliffie.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
Well that was good More
Author's Response: Glad you like it. I wrote the next chapter today and submitted it. My beta, qjmom, is amazing. She's getting them out within a day. I'll be out-of-town this weekend, so if the next chapter gets validated, then you'll have a nice story with no cliffie. However, I might write a chapter tonight and tomorrow, and if I do, then you might have a cliffie anyway--don't know.
Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
Finally got a chance to catch up on the chapters I missed and wow, did I miss some action. Everyone's a vamp now! (At least, I'm assuming everyone's going to be a vamp, once Bella wakes up.) I wonder what's going to happen next...
Author's Response: Yep. Everyone is a vamp.
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
such a tease! :) can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
uh oh! I am betting that royce did it...
Author's Response: You may or may not want to take that bet to Vegas.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
Dun dun dun! You are truly evil, m'dear. But I love you anyways. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the love! I've posted chapter 15, and believe it or not, it's not really a cliffie.
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