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Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Spilling

tee he, insensitive Jasper...

Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Makes A Run For It

Aww, poor Edward and Bella...

 

Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

whens tanya gonna tell edward what she did!!

Author's Response: Not when, but if!  Mwuhahaha!

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

i love esme more now. great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks.  I love her too.  She and I have a lot in common.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 23: Spilling

SO happy that Alice and Rose forced Bella out of the room to go hunting and I am thrilled that Bella told them about Tanya! Cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!!!! YAY for Esme and her way of thinking.  Come hell or high water she is going to get the 6 of them together and restore happiness in her household!

Author's Response:

I got warm fuzzies writing this chapter too.  I love Esme because I'm that kind of mom.  I love my children fiercely.  I came up with the whole internet school and project things as I was writing, and I loved how it turned out.  Thanks for writing and reviewing.

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Arguments

hah, rosalie.

Author's Response: She's such a diva, isn't she?  Spoiled rotten to the core, but we love her anyway, because she's a Cullen.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 22: Arguments

I loved how edward went to Esme for help with Bella! Jasper 's libido working over time andEmmett being stubbon and used to getting his way! WOW! Loved it and looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Thanks.  Glad you liked it so much.

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

that was interesting more please

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm focusing on another story today.  I'll try to get SAV out tomorrow.  Glad you like it.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

Tanya that whore!  I can't wait for Edward to find out how manipulative she is being.

I love Esme and her sneaky little plan. :)

great chapter!



Author's Response: You all are going to be so surprised as to how this plays out, and especially when the absolutely most perfect revenge is exacted.  I can't wait to get there myself.  But SAV has a mind of its own, and I'm just writing as the muse inspires.  I have a direction, and it just takes off.

Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

Amazing updates! I love Esme as a matchmaker shes freakin amazing. I love her. Can't wait to see what happens with all the kids and their projects. I hope Edward finds out about what happened with Tanya soon.

Author's Response: Thanks.  Everyone is anxious about the whole Tanya things.  Patience, my pretties, patience.

Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

Thank you for starting my weekend off so right!!!! My kids were late to school because I was too busy reading, LOL.

I am very much enjoying this story. I can't wait to see how the projects bring the couples together....humhumhum.



Author's Response: Then I have some writing to do over the next few days.

Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

Awe, very cute.  Go Esme!

Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

Good on Esme.

I doooooo want to know why (if?) Jasper wasn't sensing how achingly miserable and in pain Bella was. Surely an empath would pick up on that, eh? And maybe help his brother out with what she's feeling?

Then again, they are acting more like typical teenagers, so maybe not. :)



Author's Response: Jasper's drowning too much in his own testosterone and horniness to pay attention, but he will.  Right now, he's to busy with Alice.

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects

I like your Esme!  I want the truth out in the open and I want it now!!!

Author's Response: Sorry.  You have to wait a little while. 

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 22: Arguments

Jasper falling off the bed... good stuff!

Author's Response: Jasper got his hand crushed, but I never made him fall off the bed.  Now that you mentioned it, I wish I had.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2008 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Makes A Run For It

This is frustrating, I just want him to punch Tanya in the face.

Author's Response: Glad to get such a strong response.  I feel the same way, but what's the fun in writing that--lol?  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: blueeyedshorty (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

ahhhh your killin me smalls!!!!!!!!!!

update update update haha.

poor bella :( I hate tanya I hope that edward rips her a new one!!!!



Author's Response: I've updated.  I have four chapters to my beta.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

Tanya is the biggest BITCH ever! OMFG! I cannot believe she told Bella that Edward sent her the gifts!YUCK! I hope rose and Alice find out what she did and beat the shit out her! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm glad I evoked such emotion.  But no, Alice and Rose don't do any beating.  The revenge I have planned is much, much better.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Worst Kind of Monster

I am so glad that Carlisle led that asshole Royce to the slaughter! Cnanot wait for more. 

Author's Response: I liked writing that.  He's normally such a kind and passive individual, but everyone has his limits.

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2008 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

 I know you updated like yesterday but it would be awesome if you could get a twelve step program for writing faster. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! I love this story....

Author's Response: Wish I could, but I've got a part-time business, two kids, and an adorable husband.  All of that takes my attention.  I write as much as I can, but I have too other stories and I need time to think.  Maybe I should clone myself--lol!

Reviewer: Autumn Dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

Just catching up with your marathon of posting!  You're doing a great job on this.  So glad you had someone off Royce cuz your portrayal of him was just a total bastard.  It was fitting that it was Carlise, really.  I always end up hating Tanya in any Twilight fic.  I hope Edward can make things right with Bella.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that I portrayed Royce as the true total bastard that he is.  I didn't really know who was going to kill him off until I started writing.  I don't like Tanya, and as for the last thing...we'll see.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

Holly Cow!!! Where will Bella go?? How will Edward deal. Oh my. I just love this story line. Em and Jaz are just how I think of them. 

Keep up the great work. 



Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm glad that you like it.  Emmett and Jazz remind me of my hubby and his brother--both egg each other on and are as goofy as can be.

Reviewer: Nicole_Leah_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

ohmyjesus!!! I so excited to continue to read this...please continue it as fast as you can. i really like it.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I try to write a little every day--almost.

Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

wow tanyas evil!!! wonder what edward gonna say when he finds out what tanya did!!!

Author's Response:

It will be a few chapters before you find out.

Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: Denali

more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Gwarsh!  I'm Bella blushing!  Thanks!

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