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Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe

I never thought it would be Edward!

Author's Response: Cool!  I'm glad it was a surprise.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

That was great! Stupid, stupid boys...they really aren't gonna last long, are they? LOL!

Author's Response: Not if the girls have anything to say about it.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Twilight_Luver666 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

haha poor boys! This is sooooo GREAT! LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Ambushed (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

Funny little bets they have going on here. Things will be fun, huh? I know there is still some drama and stuff, but this is good fluff.

Author's Response: Yeah, the boys bets and the girls "counter-bet" with Esme are going to make things really interesting.  The boys bets are based on one-upping each other.  The girls bets are just to see if they can break the boys, so they all win if they do.  They have less at stake, I think.  It will make things fun.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lenzi (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

btw. hilarious chapter :D

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Lenzi (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

Awwww! wow, the dedication is so sweet. thank you.

and i apologize for being so defensive, im just kind of that way.

but thanks again!



Author's Response: No worries.  I just don't like offended anyone, and I want to know if I do.  Glad you keep reading.  And your are most welcome for the dedication.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

Another hilarious chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks.

Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

LMAO LOVED IT!
Those boys should know never to go up against those girls. Bad Vampies.
Great update =]

Author's Response: They should know better, but they don't figure that out until it is too late.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

HAHA!

Author's Response: Happy to make you laugh.

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

Cute!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

I am so glad I read this during daylight hours, or I would have woken up my entire family I was laughing so hard!  Esme is incredible!  I am glad this was a blast to write. It was also a blast to read.  Those silly boys are really in for it.  I cannot wait for what you come up with next! :)

Author's Response: Glad to make you happy, Ms. Shrew.  I have to watch my giggles and snickers because I typically write late at night.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

I really love these last two chapters. Talk about socially awkward vampires! Those boys really do get themselves into all sorts of trouble! lol Great writing lots of fun

Author's Response: Emmett is the trouble maker, but his brothers so willingly follow.

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

Great

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

OK the guys are idiots.  Cute idiots but idiots nonetheless.  I hope their brains turn into melted goo by the time the girls are done with them.

Author's Response:

I went bowling with my husband, and we were next to a group of drunk guys who kept throwing money down on the ground to wager their shots.  They were hilarious.  Anyway, that was the first time I figured out that some groups of guys really like to wager over stupid stuff.  These guys do.  Oh, and Emmett is always the ring leader.  He's the worst.

The girls will have a great time, trust me.

Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

yay!!!cant wait to see who breaks who first!!!

Author's Response: I think I have the first one picked out in my head...you'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

FANTASTIC!!! Love how Esme is helping the girls!! Hilarious. Cannot wait to see what they do next and which boy caves in first!

Author's Response:

Esme loves her sons, but she really thinks that they need to grow up.  But she chastises them with humor and brilliance.  Glad you like it.  Thanks for reviewing and reading.

Reviewer: cdunbar (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

You're evil.

That was a really cute chapter.



Author's Response: Why am I evil?  Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

ugh! can't wait for more.....

Author's Response: Is that a good ugh or a bad ugh?

Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

I love Alias - all but the last season at least.  I have one dog named Jack Bauer and another named Sydney Bristow.  This was funny stuff. 

Author's Response:

I feel the same way about Alias.  It was brilliant.  I'm happy that Jennifer got pregnant, but I hate that it ruined the show.  I mean, how could it not?  She couldn't kick someone's butt with her belly hanging out--lol!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

I laughed so hard at this chapter that I fell out of my chair!  I like what I believed was a B&B reference "It's for pride, bragging rights, and an Aston Martin Vanquish"

Such a great story and such a great chapter!  I can't wait for the next.



Author's Response: Thanks.  I checked out a Vanquish, and if I had as much money as the Cullens, I would so have one.  I'm so pleased that you liked it and that it made you smile.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 29: Protecting Virtue

Love Carlisle thoughts about the girls! So hilarious how he is rtrying to keep them apart. Love how Esme told him to get over it!! Cannot wait for more. Way to go Alice and Jasper!Getting to 3rd base!

Author's Response: Your comments made me giggle.  Thanks for making my day a little brighter.

Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun

I love this story too much to not stick with it!!  :)

I hope you update again soon. 



Author's Response: Glad you like it.  I update often.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 29: Protecting Virtue

It was a very funny chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 29: Protecting Virtue

Very sweet.  I like the difference between Esme and Carlisle's reactions to the situation.  Dang, those boys need to be creative to outwit these new rules.  Please tell me they try to bend the rules?  I figure there are some perfectly awkward moments to come of that.  I think my favorite moment was Bella's attempt to circumvent the rules by suggesting her room, but then Carlisle chimes in to nix those ideas.  I thought that was a perfect ploy.  Then again, I also loved how the boys explained that the girls were training them.  Emmett being whipped is too funny!  Thanks for the update! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  It was hard for me to write this chapter, but I'm glad my sense of humor was so evident.  Thanks!  Oh, and if you liked this chapter, you'll love the next one.

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 29: Protecting Virtue

haha, Jasper is an evil genius.

Author's Response: Well, he has been able to get away with stuff in the past.  Thanks for the review.

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