Reviewer: Jenna (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
That was awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 32: Impasse
Yea! You updated. I think I have been going through withdrawals for your stories! This is awesome! A four and half hour make out session with Edward?! OMG! I want that for Christmas! I love that their relationship is progressing in the physical sense, and I also love that they are able to torment the others for once. Poor Emmett and Jasper. They really are foolish, but oh so adorable being so. I love their mantras about being sexual camels. I have to say that I look forward to Alice and Rose tormenting those boys some more. It's just so darn funny! Your term 'manpire' is fab. I give it a snort of approval. Thanks for the update Fangs! Reading on... :)
Author's Response: I updated several days ago, but I think my beta has been in Vegas with Elivs--lol! (Love ya', qjmom). Glad you liked it. I was rather proud of "manpire" myself. Anyway, I'm so glad that you got a kick out of it. I had fun writing it. And yes, I want the same Christmas present that you do...is that what you get for being naughty? If so, maybe I'll get it--lol! Thanks for reading, Ms. Shrew.
Reviewer: Quirkyalice (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
AHAHAHA! I wonder who will be next to bow out of the bed? CLEVER BELLA!!!
Author's Response: Haven't yet decided how that will play out yet.
Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
OMG! That was a good chapter I think I'll read it agian.
Author's Response: How sweet. Thanks.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
XD Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: Kingslee (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Great chapter. I didn't expect Edward to be the first to cave.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. And I'm glad I surprised you. Thanks.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
OMFG! That was amazing! I am so stoked about the first person to bail out of the bet. That was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! Loved to nod to Wayne's World. Alice as Esme's apprentice, hysterical! There were lots of great lines to this, but I coose to point out this one: "Oh hell yes! I mean no! Down Little Eddie! Down boy!" Fabulously funny, and what a tease at the end! Please update soon. I want details Fangs! Lots and lots of details! ;D Your story rocks!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I had a fun time with this. The next chapter is to my beta, and it's fairly funny too. Thanks, Ms. Shrew.
Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
hehehhee such a cute funny chapter. The girls rock! haha Edward. I'd be surprised if Emmett wins the bet, but I'm still placing my money on him. I can't help my love for the Bear. Can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean when it comes to Emmett. I married an Emmett, so he's sort of a favorite of mine too. My husband, when at home, has very little filter. It's hilarious. I'm always laughing.
Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
No keep the fluff comin' lol This is definatly a fav of mine:)
Author's Response: Gee thanks! I appreciate you.
Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
I think this is the first time I have ever read a story where Edward & Bella were the first to do something! Bout damn time!! LOL. It was great!!
Author's Response: I thought it would be a nice change too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
It might be fluff but it is great fluff. So much fun, so sexy. Very nice.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks.
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
LMAO! "Down little Eddie! Down boy!" That was great, I love how devious Esme is.
Author's Response: I'm glad to make you smile. I love devious Esme too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
haha edward's out first!!!cant wait to see who's next!!!
Author's Response: I have not decided that yet, so we'll both be surprised.
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
OK. now that I have had a chance to reread this chapter and had no kids to distract me I can really tell you what I think. I love it! I love how Bella took control. I loved that she figured out how to push Edwards buttons. They all did a great job. I was surprised that Jasper did as well as he did. Can't wait for the next chapter. More drama??? Weddings???
Author's Response: No weddings, yet. But there is drama on the horizon.
Reviewer: Mimoza (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Gimme gimme gimme gimme! How can you do that to us?! Its not cool at all.
Author's Response: Just wrote the next chapter today. If you liked this one, you'll love the next one. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Twilight_Luver666 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
haha Edward loses! LOVE IT!!! MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: Edward is actually a huge winner in my book. He's happy, Bella's happy--he get's the girl and the car.
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
haha, wow it was a lot easier to break him then i would have though!
Author's Response: He's a hundred-year-old teenage vampire with raging hormones! And he's terribly in love with Bella. He's also the least stubborn of his brothers. So all things considered, it was a very easy decision for him.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Great.Fantastic.Amazing This is awesome I love it its getting pretty good Keep on goin'
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words.
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Bella is a smart girl! I am glad Edward was the first to drop out of the bet. Loved this chapter. It was so funny watching the guys squirm. Esme is hilarious helping the girls!! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm so pleased that everyone likes Esme so much. She's loosely based on me and my personality, though I'm not really very devious--just funny. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
I bow down to your writing powers! I completely adore the way you have written Esme, and I don't think I've ever laughed so hard as at the line with Alice mentally bowing down to Esme chanting "I'm not worthy. I'm not worthy."
I never would have guessed Bella and Edward would be the first ones out, but then again, they are both extrememly smart and I should have known they would have figured out a compromise. ;)
I'm eagerly looking forward to more!
This chapter is so a 10, just for Esme's sake!!!!
Author's Response: Gosh! I'm not worthy of your compliments! You make me feel like I'm actually able to write something decent. Thanks. The reason why Bella and Edward were able to compromise is that Bella is selfless and she cares nothing about cars. She'd rather be sucking face with Edward than be a part of any stupid bet, so it was actually very easy for her. Esme is very proud of her. Thanks for the 10 rating! I'm honored!
Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Your story has me smiling. This chapter made my morning. Such clever girls. "Esme was now the Pixie's mentor" LOL :-)
Author's Response: I thought it would be cool to make her more devious than Alice. With those too, "world domination is just around the corner." Glad to make you smile. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Wow, Bella played that really smart...I can't believe that Edward was the first to cave...
Author's Response: I'm glad I surprised you. It makes me so happy to know that I don't always give you what you expect. I like keeping you guessing.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Bella's so smart! Seriously, that was excellent and now they both win! And Edward finally gets some action too. I thought it was so funny that Carlisle was expecting the least trouble with him, but what he doesn't understand is that Edward is all prude on the outside but raging sexfiend on the inside.
Author's Response: You got that right! Those 100 year-old seventeen-year-old hormones have never had their needs met. I'm glad you liked how it played out.
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
once again.....I"M LATE! I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read it again when I can take more time. LOL Great job
Author's Response: Thank you. I am so glad that you liked it. It was so much fun to write.
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
Whoo Hoo!!! Go Bella.
Author's Response: She's a smart one.
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