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Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 43: Volterra
You know this story is funny and intersting. So much drama is sad. This has balance.
thanks,
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 28: Family
tanya well she never disapoints does she? James in Twilight hesitated before he started to hurt Bella he had a look and said something that made me think he might rape her. Then he didn't ! I think in Twilight Mike, James, Felix and Edward were all attracted to Bella. Only Edward was her true Mate!
Good job, keep going!
Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 32: Impasse
Love the "manpire"!! Creative!
Reviewer: crystalline0821 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: Not her
This story seems like alot of fun. The only thing I noticed is you wrote that Emmett had blue eyes.
Reviewer: TraciSnow (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
I've read IBWfYfF twice now and I finally decided to read SAV. I am so glad that I've started reading this! I nearly pissed myself on this chapter! My husband thinks I'm crazy now, btw. Haha! I just had to go ahead and review this chapter. Things have sucked in rl lately and it was nice to laugh like that. Thanks!
Traci
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
its nice too see edward act like a 17 yr old
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Ride
lol ive never heard of alice even as human frightened of jasper!
Reviewer: RenesmeeandBellaRock (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Awesome story, my friend recommended it to me, and I love it. :D
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Only good thing is I don't think Aro is the on in the sequel to try and go against Carlisle and the rest of the Cullens. I think when the rules aren't broken that Aro, besides Marcus is one of the more reasonable of the brothers. I guess if you can, you can compare Aro, Caius and Marcus to three Greco-Roman Gods, at least personality wise; Aro would be Jupiter/Zeus, Caius would be Mars/Ares, and Marcus would be Pluto/Hades.
Reviewer: Randi1857 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 42: Common Ground
And I get to see jacob!
Reviewer: blue rose 411 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
*pout*
ur leaving too many cliffes
as for the title
i guess i have to say no
dont take this wrong
but i have that as a title in world history
which i pesonally think is boring
but i'm sure u'd come up with something great
after all
it's u who has written 47 chappies without a break
and i'm looking forward for ur next chappie
ls send it soon
pls*puppy dog eyes*
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
I liked how Edward and Bella healed each other after what James did. Well done.
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 7: Notes
This story is interesting and fun, I look forward to reading the rest. Thank you.
Reviewer: medadem (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Notes
I think the story is developing amazing so far that I've read!! Its like they are real teens I'm just so glad its not an all human fic! LOOVE IIT!!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
this was an epically amazing story!!!
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
MORE!!! PLEASE!!!!
Reviewer: GarrettsGirl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 29: Protecting Virtue
um, i really love this story. it's funny and great, and i felt so sorry for bella. stupid tanya!
one thing i wanted to say though, is about the redneck thing. i live in Alabama, and while i realize it wasn't really ment to be offensive, a lot of people i know really hate things like that. it's a really awful stereotype.
Reviewer: tesa (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Why the Bloody Hell no one can end story happy ending
Why always supposed to be The End of The World????? WHY
this was such a lovely story till last chapter, now i hate it :( hate it ,hate it :(
Reviewer: tesa (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Why the Bloody Hell no one can end story happy ending
Why always supposed to be The End of The World????? WHY
this was such a lovely story till last chapter, now i hate it :( hate it ,hate it :(
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
LOVED THE STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 17: Tales from the Crypt
A very long day for you Edward,I have heard girls have more restraint.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: Bella Finally Wakes Up
What Alice should've said after Jasper said "Alice...you'll be the death of me. " She should've said "You've died two times. First when you were changed,second when you met me me. You're in heaven now."
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: What a Way to Wake Up
Wow Bella first thing you say when you're a vamp is: "What a way to wake up in the morning." I think you should wake up that way every morning.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
That doesn't mean she's gonna go A-WALL does it? But if she does she should do it on Royce.
Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
WOW!! YOU'RE FORGIVEN!!!
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