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Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Great chapter! I loved seeing the entire family (including Carlisle and Esme) together and interacting, having fun. I was a bit suprised to see the Volturi come into play, but I do think it will make the story interesting. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that you were surprised to see the Volturi make an appearance. I like surprising you all. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Emmett, Emmett, Emmett, please, don't tease your brother and sister because they had hot aeroplane sex.
Author's Response: He might--just a little. I'm sure he's pretty envious, and he's also probably a little jealous that Bella's field generates invisibility and can keep the inside noises in and the outside noises out.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Worst Kind of Monster
clever twist! :) I guess I was wrong, but I don't mind. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the twist. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Answer and the Solution
I'm guessing Edward because of the lion den... I really liked this chapter. I wonder how pissed Carlise is going to be... and Bella is going to meet Tanya... I'm excited!
Author's Response: Mwuhahaha! It might be Edward, but it might not be...keep reading. Thanks.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 17: Tales from the Crypt
Hurray! I liked this chapter! I enjoyed the stories of when the boys were new borns! I wonder if Alice will have her powers.
Author's Response: I had a good time coming up with those stories. Edward's was hard because he's supposedly such a prude. As far as Alice goes--keep reading.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! AwesomeCliffe!
Author's Response: I liked that one too. Thanks.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: Aftermath
Amazing! how did you come up with that!
Author's Response: The accident? Well, I wanted something dramatic that could happen in that area. I did a little research to find the highway I wanted between Forks and Port Angeles. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
AAAWWWW... Rose is a daddy's girl! I'm gald her dad stuck up for her... Royce is a bastard... I hope Emmett get to kick his ass.... yes, I want to see a fight! :)
Author's Response: Yes, Rose is a daddy's girl. I don't want to spoil things for you, but I will say that things with Royce are unfortunately not finished for a few more chapters. Thanks for reading. So glad you like it.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 8: Rookie Mistakes
I would love to see Rose kick Emmetts ass... I think she could! :) Em should know better! :)
Author's Response: She could. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 7: Notes
pure awesomeness! (awesomes is my favorite word). I loved the notes!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm so glad you liked them. The boys truly are sweet.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
I loved Emmetts part in this chapter! I hope Esme whips these boys into shape!:) Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Esme is a force to be reckoned with, for sure. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
great story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
I love your end notes! R/Em are my fav... I cant wait to see Em social awkwardness! awesome story!
Author's Response: Nice to have new readers. I don't recognize your name as one I've seen too often before. Thanks for the compliments. As I have said many times, my husband is quite Emmett-esque.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Ride
Love this story and its only chapter two!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, and good to have a new reader. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
i lOVE dis story
Author's Response: I'm glad. Nice to have a new reader.
Reviewer: Cutthroat_Beauty69 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Uh-oh Aro! Glad to see that he had Vics killed though. Hahahahaha.... I always wondered what would have happened if Vics had gone to the Volturi about Bella...
Author's Response: Glad you liked how that turned out. I didn't want the whole newborn army thing, so I thought this was a good alternative. Thanks for reading. Next chapter, #37: Delaying the Inevitable is being posted today. Hope you all like it. Teaser quotes will be in forums in the Alternate Universe section under this story's name.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Not a small cliffy by ANY means.
Author's Response: I didn't know how important that you all would think this was. Glad you think it's important, because it is. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Twilighter 4 Life (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Thats what I like to see...Victoria's evil ass coming in and out of the picture very quickly! This was a great chapter. I thought it was very cute that Emmett still managed to mess up the proposal a little :) and yes, Rosalie having that sorta gift can get a little out of hand, especially with her mood swings lol. It should be fun to watch.
Author's Response: Yeah, Victoria's awful, and she's also such a sad character. James is emotionally abusive, as far as I am concerned. Glad you liked the Emmett proposal. I thought that was very "him". Rose's gift--it will be explained soon, and Bella's gift is quite incredible--there's still more to hers. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Loved it! Here comes the Guard!
Author's Response: Yep. To quote Poltergeist, "They're here..." Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Dang! Aro had no patience with Victoria. I cannot say that I blame him, but that was an expeditious death. Glad the writer's block is gone; I don't know what I would do without a SAV fix! ;) Emmett's proposal was so cute! To have him misspell 'marry' is the perfect touch! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Ms. Shrew. Aro is a villan with morals, as long as they are within his rules. I do see him as a "Godfather" (mafia-like) personality. Emmett's proposal took me a long time to figure out, but I liked it when it finally came to me. Thanks for the nice compliments.
Reviewer: Autumn Dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
OMG, Edward and Jasper's proposals were so sweet. I can't wait to see what you figure out for Emmett. Maybe somehow incorporating a car? Like something is wrong with the car and she finds the ring and that's what's wrong? Ignore me.
Author's Response: I thought of the car thing, but I am sure that the enormous diamond would have gotten chipped. I found something that is really sweet, grandios, and in total Emmett style--so there's humor too. I can't wait until it is validated! I want you all to know. BTW, there is a thread for this story on Forums under the Ulternate Universe section. I included some of the quotes from my latest chapter as teasers.
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
This is an absolutely amazing story! I loved how Edward and Jasper proposed! I wish I had an idea about Emmett, but I don't. Hopefully someone else does and you can update soon!
Author's Response: I hope you like how Emmett proposes. It's bold, but it has a funny twist to it. Thanks for the compliments and for reading. Oh the next chapter, in which we find out how Emmett proposes and if the girls accept the boys proposals, is to my beta.
Reviewer: ellie910 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
This is such a heartfelt chapter! Get rid of that writer's block soon, cuz me wantz more!
Author's Response: Gee thanks. I'm working on it. Haven't seen your name on the list. Thanks for reading--always nice to have new readers.
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
Edward is quite the romantic... Jasper's idea was so personal and sweet... Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the ideas. I thought they were sweet. Emmett's up next, and his is classic Emmett.
Reviewer: KatieWasBornForThis (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
OMG amazing!! lolz
Author's Response: Thanks for reading--nice to have a new reader. So glad you like it.
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