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Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Awesome Twist... did not see it coming!!! (I'm almost caught up!)
Author's Response: Wow! You've been reading a lot! It makes me so happy to know that you all like what I write. Thanks.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
perfect! :) so sweet! I love it! Jasper so far was the best, but emmett might out do him!
Author's Response: I liked both Jasper and Edward's proposals equally. I'm glad you liked what I did. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
interesting gift bella has! i definately enjoyed this chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, Bella's gift is a little different.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 33: The Lost Boys Leave Neverland
awesome way to end the bet! Another great chapter! (They all are, seriously! even if I don't comment.)
Author's Response: Thanks. I liked how the bet ended--girls won!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 32: Impasse
Jasper and Emmetts mantras were hularious! I think Jasper will win... I think Rose will give in. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the mantras. My husband always jokes with me, saying he's a sexual camel (sorry if that's TMI) when we joke like we are playing hard to get. So, I guess, that is a tribute to him.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
I loved this chapter! very funny! Bella is a clever one! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I had so much fun with that chapter. I wanted Bella and Edward to be the first one's to cave for a change. If Edward were mine, I'd let him have my car choice, no quesitons asked--I'm just sayin'--lol!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
awesome! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: Cutthroat_Beauty69 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
I love Emmett's mad that Edward joined the MHC before him...its such an Emmett thing to be mad about. Great chap and I can't wait too see what happens with the Volturi!
Author's Response: Thanks. Next up is crazy island antics with the girls and boys.
Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Brilliant !
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
I loved this chapter, what a ride. Angst, beautiful soul seering love, wonderful humour and fantastic smutty sex. What a treat !!!!!
Author's Response: I hope I wasn't too graphic on the sex. I'd rather let a person's imagination run with the imagery. No that I'm completely against smut or am judging people who write it more graphically than I do. It's just not my style. Glad you like the angst, love, and humor. That's what I want for this story. Thanks for rating and reviewing.
Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 27: The Kiss that Said a Thousand Words
I loved this chapter, very beautiful. Well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I just love the story of Bella and Edward. To me, Edward is one of the most romantic male characters in history.
Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Answer and the Solution
I am so glad, that I have found this story, I have spent most of the afternoon reading this story relently. For it has just the right amount of humour, angst and emotion. I am really looking forward to the following chapters. You have a great Mantra and it shows :)
Author's Response: You are so sweet. Thank you. I'm glad to have you as a reader.
Reviewer: Autumn Dreamer (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
LOL, Edward and Bella joining the Mile High Club. That's one way to do it. Jasper probably would've grabbed her boobs or something. Beautiful vows!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the MHC. And yes, Jasper probably would have grabbed her somewhere inappropriate. Em's mad at the turbulence, but also because he got nothin' and Eddie did. Glad you liked the vows. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Autumn Dreamer (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
That was a quick way to get rid of Victoria! I smell trouble. I loved how Carlisle was all hot and bothered and just as loud as the boys. 'Mary Me' LOL! That's so Emmett. I loved how you figured out his proposal. So unique of him.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I didn't want a big part for Victoria--I wanted her killed off quickly--no newborn armies in this story. Carlisle is as horny as his sons, and a lot of times, it's because of Jasper's throwing off lust. Em's proposal just seemed fitting. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Good chapter! The turbulence was great!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 28: Family
Yeah, I've been busy reading your story all day (in between homework and other things). This seriously is a great story. I really enjoy your writing. I'm glad you have more than one story.
Author's Response: What kind things you say. Thank you, and I'm glad to have you as a reader.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
I loved it! That is a brilliant way to have them join the mile high club. Simply fantastic that was! Oh, poor Emmett had to fly the plane instead of getting some. Ha! Well, maybe if he had just gotten married then he could complain, but since Eddie just did, I think Emmett needs to shut it. ;) I am so glad they didn't wait to get married. It was perfect just the way you wrote it! :D
Author's Response: Ms. Shrew, you are too kind. I really appreciate your comments. Bella's gift makes for some interesting and creative sexual encounters, since her bubble gives its occupants invisibility and sound proofing. I'll have great fun with that. Emmett is quite jealous, really, since he and Rose are usually so loud that it's embarrassing. I'm also really glad that you liked the wedding. I didn't want to make a big deal about it, but I wanted it to be sweet. I also wanted urgency behind it to foreshadow some upcoming events. You are my 400 review! Wow! Thanks to everyone for telling me what you think. It is important to me.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 27: The Kiss that Said a Thousand Words
Total and pure awesomeness... i feel all warm inside! And your James is super creepy...I kinda like it. :)
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 26: Truth or Consequences
THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gotta know what happens!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Aww...they got married!! The mile high thing was hilarious.
Author's Response: I'm glad everyone was happy. Bella's gut feeling just tells her she needs to do this now. I was afraid everyone would be upset that I wouldn't make a big deal about the wedding. I liked the Mile High Club too. It was fun to write.
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
haha, thats good
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 25: Making up
AAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! What is Edward going to do? And where the hell did Bella go? I'm so glad I still have a ton of chapters left! (I sneek chapters in, while I'm working on a report!) Also I think it's awesome how you reply to our reviews!! Keep the chapters comin'!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like them, and I love responding to what everyone says. I'm honored that people take time to read what I have written.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Projects
Very awesome chapter! (I hope you are not keeping count of how many times I say awesome). I loved Esme's role... I definately see it working with R/Em and J/A, but B/E??? Bella's going to have to spill the beans... or maybe Rose or Alice will... ok... I have more reading to do! I really love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that you like it. You've been really busy reading lately!
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
turbulence?? LOL funny!
Author's Response: Glad you thought so. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Ok, I am so happy to see Edward and Bella married. I'm worried about the Volturi and hope that everything will work out in the end. Ha ha, I loved Edward and Bella joining the Mile High Club (and creating turbulence). I also liked Bella's vows where she said "I sometimes think I'm living a fictional life because you're a character that seems too good to be true." Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh! And I think that the Voltui will find them on the island. That's my guess.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Bella just feels that something ominous is looming over the horizon, and she wanted to be Edward's in every way possible. Bella's gift gives Edward and her the ability to be quite creative in their sex life. Thanks for reading.
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