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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 46: Good Ole Boys Club

Wow I can't wait to see what all is going on!  I am excited and scared at teh same time I love your story keep at it I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I can't wait to find out what's going on too!  I know that sounds silly, but as I've always said--SAV writes itself.  It comes fairly easy to me.  I've barely had any writers block with it.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 46: Good Ole Boys Club

thank you for updating. i liked this chapter. hope you had a good holiday. update soon, please!



Author's Response:

I sent this update weeks ago, but with the new rules, the server switch, and the holidays, it took forever to be validated.  I'm not blaming anyone--I understand, and I appreciate my beta more than she will ever know.

Had a great holiday.  Hope you did too.  I've got to update one of my other stories next.  SAV will have to wait.

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

ooohh damnn

lol

please update.



Author's Response:

I will, as soon as I can.  Thanks for reading and Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: Twimoon (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

AWWW . Edward's such a sweetheart

can't wait for the next chapter.

great job ! 

 

=]



Author's Response:

Awww--shucks!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2008 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

Yea!  I finally got to read your update!  Your characters are so much fun.  Yes, Edward's speech was really sweet, but that's part of his charm.  I loved it! :)  Can't wait to see what happens on the hunt!

Are you really gonna let Tanya off the hook?  Really?  I kinda feel bad for her, but I am not ready to forgive the crap she put my favorite duo through.  I guess, I'll just have to wait and see.



Author's Response:

A lot of people don't want me to let Tanya off easy.  Was she sincere with her apology, or is she trying to cause more problems out of spite and jealousy?  Will Bella kick her ass eventually?  I haven't decided.  I'm thinking about it.

I loved writing Edward's speech.

Hope you are feeling better, btw.  I've got bronchitis, so I'm on a z-pack of antibiotics, and I'm doing much better.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

I liked it. I'm still wary about the whole thing, but can't wait for more..It's like a drug.



Author's Response:

What are your wary about?  Could you elaborate?  Is it the whole Carlisle becoming the 4th brother thing?  Glad you like what you've read thus far.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

it was sappy lol but really really really sweet. why else would we all love edward? i loved this chapter.

keep writing,

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked the sweetness, and thanks for the hugs and kisses--back at ya'!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BlueBella (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 39: Prankenstein

Too funny, i loved this chapter -Prakenstien payback was great fun.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: BlueBella (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

Hey, I am from Araknsas (not born here thank God) and i hate to say it but it isn't far from the truth - no offence taen. I'll let you in on my inlaws to show you how nuts thias hick state can be.

My daughter in law was married to our next door neighbor. She' bi sh had a girlfriend that lived with them. That girlfriend ended up engaged to Justin, a man from another family on our road. They split and girlfriend one moved to Loisiana. Daughter in law moves in a new girlfrien who turns out not to be bi afterall. No girlfirnd two is married to my ex son inlaw and they live next door whilr the guy thsat was girlfiend one's fiance is now my son in law and lives two hoses from my ex son in law and his new wife who was also girlfriend two.

Only in Araksas, so sling the mud all you want. We deserve it and it's hillarious if you live here :)



Author's Response:

I thought I took the Arkansas line out.  If it's in there and does offend anyone, I am truly sorry.  But I am glad that you can laugh at it.  My state is made fun of quite a lot too, so I can sympathize.

Yeah, I have rednecks in my family too, but luckily our family tree does fork a little more than the situation you sited--yikes!

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: 0nykz 3yez (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

Definately swet and sappy, but you just can't help but love it... and LOVE IT I do!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

interesting developments... Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It will be a while before I can update due to the new rules and such.  I have two other stories, but I will get to this soon.  Thanks for reading, Mel.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

wow....I love your story I have been reading every time you update but unable to post due to log in problems but I love your story and I can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Gee--thanks.  I'm glad that you are finally able to review.  I always appreciate what you all write.  Thanks for reading, sarah t.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

Gah! My teeth are so sore. But I'm allergic to cliffhangers, so if you don't want me to break out in a rash...

Author's Response:

I sent this for validation quite some time ago, and I have three stories and can now only submit a chapter at a time due to the new rules.  The switch to the new server also made things a little slow getting this out.  So, even if I write several chapters, I can only do one at a time--sorry dear.  I wish I could change things.  Cinderbella or Gifted will receive the next updates.  Thanks for reading and being so active on forums--love ya'!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers

Yes, they are perfect for each other, and that is why we all love them so much!



Author's Response:

Glad you think so.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: team_jake (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Answer and the Solution

I SAW THAT COMING! I SAW THAT COMING!

wow. that was good.  



Author's Response: Shucks!  Oh well.  One out of the bunch isn't so bad.  Glad you're reading, and I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks, t.j.

Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

*Gasp!* How evil of you to leave it there! I'm dying to read more! Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Mwuhahaha!  I'll try to write some in the next day or so.  Sorry to keep you hanging.

Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

arggg, plase write the next chapter rather quickley! i need to know more!

Author's Response: I hope to write it sometime this week.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Twilight_Luver666 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

This is really good!!!

 



Author's Response: Thanks, and thank you for reading.

Reviewer: EclipsedbyJacob (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

I loved how casual Aro's speech was.  It was the opposite of what I was expecting!  I hope the dreaded writer's block is gone and you get the next one out quick!

Author's Response: Still just sick.  I had strep--that's where I think the writer's block is truly coming from.  Glad you liked Aro's casualness.  It had to be that way so that Carlisle wouldn't expect the announcement.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

Well, I'm not gonna speculate.  I am immune to your cliffies now! Ha!  Uh-oh, now you'll do an uber-cliffie just to make me writhe in agony!  Just kidding really.  It's a wonderful cliffie, and I bow down to your powers of the mighty cliffhanger! WTF?  I am not even taking unnecessary cold medicine!  Maybe that's the problem? Hmm, whatever.

Loved Carlisle's reaction to Esme's dress, and her remark that he spends too much time with Emmett.  Classic!

Also loved Edward's line: "...it gives me so much access to your skin.  I intend to have my lips on you all evening."  I so wanted to see that in actuality.  Why do I love the idea of them necking for hours at the ball?  I wish now that I could have suggested that before. ;)  Can I make a special request where that happens later?  I want an entire chapter with other stuff going on but Bella and Edward just make out for the whole thing.  And not go off to have the snog either, but just go at it in front of everybody.  Umm, pretty please?  With Edward on top? LOL! *snickering mischieviously*  I need to get my mind out of the gutter...maybe.  But you just find so many interesting things in the gutter. 

Please ignore my madness, it's the headcold, I swear! *huffing, Yeah right!* :D



Author's Response:

Actually, I sort of have some stuff already planned for the sequel that has lots of necking and making out with our favorite couple.  I might do some in this story too, but I have the first chapter of the sequel in my head, and it is hot.  Bring your fans, ladies.

No one is immune to my powers of cliffies--Mwuahahaha!  And Carlisle rubs off on the kids--it's nice to see it works both ways.  I'm glad you liked the hotness of Edward's comment.  I wish I was Bella at that moment.  Yum! 

Get better soon, Ms. Shrew.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

Oh, did ya have to leave it there? I know how fun cliffies are though. Still, one word: UPDATE!

Author's Response:

Yep, I just had too.  I can't totally give up my addiction to cliffies.  Remember earlier in the story when there was one almost every chapter?  I've gotten better.  I'm like an alcoholic that takes an ocassional drink.

Thanks for reading, "X".  Love ya' dear.

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

what the?  Did Carlisle see this coming?  They'll stay vegetarians, but will they have to stay in Volterra?

 The ball was cute, I want to know what Tanya said to Edward and I would love to see the hissy she threw when Alec broke up with her.

Good Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Carlisle knew, but he hasn't discussed it with the kiddos yet.  As far as staying in Volterra, wait and see.  I will reveal all about Tanya soon. 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

why am i worried? this can't be good, can it? i mean it's the volturi! oh no oh no oh no.

please update soon. this was a horrible cliffie!

xoxo



Author's Response: Might be good, might be bad.  Mwuhahaha!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

Well, I want to say Aro is being serious, but I'm not sure. I'm not worried about them feeding on humans I know they wouldn't do that. I'm curious to see what Tanya said to Edward. I can't believe he danced with her. Update soon please.

Author's Response: Aro is serious.  I will tell you what Tanya said, and I hope to update this week.

Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball

I love ur chapter. It is super awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Luv the whole Tanya gets stood up thing! She deserved it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Wait until you see who Tanya ends up with.  Thanks for reading.

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