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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 23: Spilling
I see low self-esteem has followed Bella into her new life, along with gullibility. Maybe Esme can fix this mess the boys are having with their girlfriends.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: Arguments
My God, do these girls do everything together? If one's upset with her mate/boyfriend, then I guess the other two must be also. That's going to make life in the Cullen household very interesting! Maybe when the truth comes out, they all three can beat the crap out of Tanya!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Makes A Run For It
Poor, confused Edward! He can't figure out what's wrong with Bella. It doesn't occur to him that Tanya has been up to her old tricks, I guess. Hope someone gets this straightened out before Bella's heart really breaks!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 20: Denali
That was just plain mean. Tanya is the ultimate bitch. Poor Bella!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Worst Kind of Monster
Your twelve-step program may not work right away. You know what they sa, once a cliff-hanger, always a cliff-hanger! Glad as I can be that you had Carlisle lead Royce to his death. Served him right and was surely the proper thing , after he killed four girls. Maybe the truth will come out and make everyone feel better.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: The Answer and the Solution
Okay. who served up Royce to the mountain lions? I'm thinking maybe Carlisle, but I'm not positive. Seems to be the most likely suspect. How fitting that those beautiful cats helped bring about justice. Lord knows Edward and family have eaten enough of them over the years.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 17: Tales from the Crypt
I love that you have the girls adjusting to their new life so easily. Makes it a lot easier for the guys to get next to them. Still, I know they will have some problems along the way.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 16: Bella Finally Wakes Up
Good old Emmett, always good for a laugh. Rose will not be able to resist him for long, nor he her. The couples are about to have a fun time getting to know each other.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 15: What a Way to Wake Up
The boys have got to be grateful for Esme. She sure got things squared away with the girls and got them back home. It should be fun filling Bella in on all the happenings. Then they can set about solving the mystery of who tried to kill them.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
I'm disappointed, too, that neither Alice or Rose would ask if the guys really were the ones to run them off the road. One thing I do know, if Edward, Jasper and Emmett didn't do it, it must be Royce, or someone equally evil.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 13: Quality of Life
How did a battered siver Volvo come to be parked in the Cullen's garage? They weren't the ones running the girls off the cliff. By the way, Rose and Alice are sure adapting to vampirism pretty darn well! They must like their changers a lot!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Choice
He'd damn well better change her! What the hell kind of life would she have the way she is now? I hope you lightened up on his angsty way of thinking later on in your story.Pardon me, I have to read more.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 11: Aftermath
So far, so good, as far as Rose and Alice are concerned. It's sad that they would have died unless changed, but also good they were saved at all. Now, about Edward! I want seriously to smack him one. How can he think it's the right thing to do to leave Bella broken, in pain and possibly paralyzed, instead of changing her? He's an idiot, thinking that way!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 10: Addicted to Love
I'll wager a nickel that Royce King just ran the girls off the road and the Cullen boys are coming to the rescue! This is scary stuff, but I'm not the least bit surprised, seeing what an egotistical bastard Royce is.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
Ask me how surprised I am at what Royce did to Rosalie. I'm so hoping Emmett gets a chance to revenge Rose! So it's started, Jake warning Bella about how dangerous the Cullens are. From the temperature of Jacob, the shape-shifters are no doubt multiplying. Can't wait until the guys get back from Canada, and find out how much trouble they're in!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Rookie Mistakes
Little did they know how five days could change things. Sounds like that's not ina good way change either. What now? Things were going along swimmingly, too!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Notes
The Cullen boys are really good at mending fences! The notes were lovely and flattering, who could resist? Who would want to? Can't wait to see how Emmett screws up now.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 6: Adonis the Perverted
How embarassing, to be caught peeking in a girl's window! Lucky for Edward that Bella doesn't want her dad to shoot him. Maybe Jasper can figure a way to get in Alice's good graces. Ah, young love, sort of young.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
Vampires they may be, but they're also just brothers, I see. When Carlisle joined in the mud fight, it made me smile. It's basically a family, having a good time being silly. You can already tell they love each other.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 4: Not her
I always sympathize with Edward, it's gotta be tough to want to kiss a girl and kill her at the same time, poor guy! I hope you have plans of a way for him to meet and get to know Bella, without draining her. Bad way to start a relationship!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 3: Officially Freaked out
I see why you told us this chapter was not humorous. Royce King was never anyone's idea of a human being, seeing how he treats Rose. Hopefully Emmett will take real good care of Mr. King! Gross!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: Ride
That will teach Edward to strand his brothers they got to meet three pretty girls and he lost out. Noe he'll just have to meet Bella on his own. As for Emmett being a gentleman. he's always been one, just a bit goofy.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
A cross between Emmett and Jasper? You must lead a very happy life! Nothing like a southern gentleman with a great sense of humour! Bonus points if he's cute, besides. I like how this starts out, getting the 'kids' off to school and out of mom and dad's hair! Cute idea.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
excellent story.. good job 10 stars
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers
I love sweet & sappy. I also like the fact you give us a heads up for the next chapter. I really like that.
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