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Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
i think that you should have emmett give her a car and stuff a ring in a very safe box somewhere inside the engine. you have probably written this part already, but just in case!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
oh my gosh, i love it, and you for doing it! that was totally awesome!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
oh my gosh, you just managed to send me into a fit of hysterical laughter. oh my, really excellent story!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 19: The Worst Kind of Monster
OH MY GOD! I cannot believe that Carlisle did that! Wow, you are good with the surprises and then some!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
wow, did royce ever deserve that one! thank you for that. really awesome story!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: Ride
Ok, Emmett teasing Jasper about staring at Alice made me laugh really hard! So does the title of the story, actually. Great idea!
Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
i lloved this story it was great
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
I personally enjoyed the story! A few glitches :) - I read that you would like to become a writer- I think you should try it out- maybe you will be the next Stephanie Meyer :) You let me know and Ill be in line to buy the book! I have also been itching to start a story on here- just dont know where to start if I'm going to start any. I'm not quite sure the best way to talk to you- so Im going to keep it short.
Author's Response: Lynnlin--firstly, thank you for all the comments and compliments--and finding my mistakes (you should be an editor). It's so hard to catch those little tiny things. I usually catch stuff, but not always (I'll use the cliche "I'm only human"--or maybe I should say "I'm not a Cullen"--lol!). I appreciate it when someone catches my mistakes that are pretty glaring ones (ones that will confuse people).
Secondly, feel free to email me. I don't mind. It's weird. I got your email via my phone/internet, but not on my pc. Strange--not sure why.
As far as starting a story, do what you're comfortable with. My writing is based on what's in my head, with certain character elements and situations taken from my own experiences. My hubby, as I've always said, is very Emmett-like, so his character is infused with some of my husband's zany mannerisms. Esme has elements of me. My Rose's are always nicer because I would never have that horrible of a person (as I felt she was in the books) for a friend. Alice and Edward's characters were fairly well-developed compared to the other Cullens, so they pretty much write themselves.
I haven't answered all your comments as I have been dealing with the death of a dear friend. I also have a job this weekend, so I have to go out-of-town (musician). Sorry, but I might just have to only comment on some of them. You made so many nice comments--I'll just hit the highlights for time's sake.
Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 46: Good Ole Boys Club
“Well, he’s just concerned about us. He’s tired, and his wife has been bugging him about getting out of the castle for five hundred years,” Alice claimed.
It is suppose to be Alec
I wonder what Alec is hiding- good story
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 45: Answers
It was really gushy- it was pretty good.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball
Something I was confused about- well a few things...first- human blood smelling nasty to I think Bella- Do the Girls have some sort of control over human blood now? wasnt sure about that- and at the beginning of the story when the girls first turned into vampiras :) - the guys told them that the venom smelt good- and that was why they didnt have to brush their teeth. It was either this chapter or the last one where Emmett ate a ox (?) and Rose wouldnt kiss him for 2 hours because his breath stunk...I didnt know if that was because she was a vampire and could smell it.
Author's Response: Good questions, and sorry for the confusion. Bella has control, but Alice and Rose don't.
Ya' know, I never thought about the whole ox thing and then the venom thing. Hmmmm...I guess what I was trying to insinuate is that ox is so foul that it taints even the sweetest breath. This is taken from my life. My husband loves to eat onions--the hot, yellow kind. Ugh! His breath stinks for a while after that, and there's no way I'm kissing him. I'll make some sort of ammendment to that situation. Thanks for calling me on it.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 43: Volterra
It was pretty funny- I knew the girls would hear! Loved it! Next Chapter!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 42: Common Ground
I love how Esme just took CHARGE!!! THAT WAS GREAT!! Next Chapter
Author's Response: I had fun writing that. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 41: Christmas Time
You did really well :) CUTE! I'm shocked I haven't seen a car makeout yet :) Next Chapter!
Author's Response: I don't remember writing one in this story. There's sort of one at the beginning of the sequel. Thanks for reading Lynnlin.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 40: Uninvited Guests
The chapter was ok- but it had a purpose- and it wasnt boring...you did great!! :) Next Chapter
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 39: Prankenstein
Unique- hmmm- good chapter! :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 38: Cullen Island
Oh that sucks! hahahaha- good so far!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Hilarious!! I love Bellas Powers!! YAY! She is able to do a lot apparently! Next Chapter :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
A Conveniate (SP) way to get rid of Victoria! I really like it so far :) NExt Chapter!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 35: Insanely Romantic
YAY!!! Good Chapter!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
hahaha- I LOVED IT!!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 33: The Lost Boys Leave Neverland
Some how I knew that nobody was going to win the bet on the guys side! But Sadly- I have to come back to this later! :( REally good so far!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 32: Impasse
I loved it! Next Chapter... :)
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
hahahahahahaha! I LOVE IT!! :) NEXT CHAPTER!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
My cheeks hurt!! Grinning and Laughing! I was wondering how you were going to play out the mind reading thing! GREAT JOB!!
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