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Reviewer: Karennn (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Shotgun
Reviewer: rrensmeyer (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Mud Wrestling
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! was laughing out loud at the mud fight scene. If this were in the movie, I could just see RP, KL and JR tackling PF! Great story! I can't wait for what's next!
Reviewer: fanicki (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
like the changes you have made with the characters..
and i really enjoy how you gave them a whole more familal feeling especially with them calling esme and carlise mom and dad all the time.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Gotta love that Emmett!!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Too cute!!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
Yeah, Tanya's dead!! Can't stand her.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
Loved this chapter!! I hope you know which chapter I am talking about. Not sure how this review thing works. I'm sad I'm getting towards the end. Hope you keep writing. Can't wait to read more. Take care.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 27: The Kiss that Said a Thousand Words
Loved this chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball
LOL It just hit me on the 6th read through....
When Edward makes tht comment about how much he likes it when Bella calls him "her manpire" and his reaction to it, it's like Gomez and Morticia Addams when Morticia speaks French or does something that makes him excited.
Reviewer: CeeClearwater (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
I AM TAKING YOU DOWN A NOTCH ON YOUR RATING BECAUSE OF ALL THE DANG CLIFFIES!!! they make me anxious
:P
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
I have just finished reading this story. When it was running I was fixed on canon and not reading AU (Now I am writing AU!). Then I saw that there is another story that is a follow up, so I tried to read this first. It has delighted me. I had the pleasure to read it as a book, not having to wait for updates, and of course the cliffhangers had no effect. (ha)
I love your Cullens so much that I would like to be a relation (No, not be part of the family, there are no available males left). I really like your disinhibited (is this an English word?) Edward, the less than perfect Carlisle and the awesome Esme.
So now I try the next one
Reviewer: CeeClearwater (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: Denali
OK so my friend and I are going to write a companion piece to this story where Tanya gets her ass kicked by Bella for doing this to her. I hope you dont mind but it will be so funny.
email me at lportillo@moreaucatholic.org to tell me what you think of our idea
Author's Response: I would appreciate it if you wouldn't. I will deal with Tanya in my own way. Write it for your own enjoyment, but please don't post it.
Reviewer: CeeClearwater (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: What a Way to Wake Up
i love Emmett how he just totally killed the mood with "was it a porno dream?' wow what a dork LOL
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
I loved this story & I'm also looking forward to part 2.
This kept me guessing all the way through. I'm glad that Carlisle took care of Royce. Little pain in the arse needed to be taken out & Rose didn't need that pain again.
I'm assuming in the next story there will be 2 more weddings. :)
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
You left us hanging....How could you?
Now, to catch up on the sequel...
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 46: Good Ole Boys Club
Hmmm, Felix still wants Bella...
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 45: Answers
Helping Tanya?? How?? Taking her to the zoo and pairing her with the chimps??
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball
Great party; Carlisle's family will be on par with the Volturi, as right now, they are stronger. I'm thinking there'll be some kind of reciprocal arrangement.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 43: Volterra
Peep show! Peep show! Get your tickets to the Edward and Bella Peep show!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 42: Common Ground
I hope that the guard will make things in the Cullens' favour, if it should come to that.
I wonder who got Tanya?? LMFAO
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 41: Christmas Time
Naughty, naughty! *oh my*
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 40: Uninvited Guests
No tainting here. I'm amazed of Alice's sacrifice for her family, but did she have to tell them everything???
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 39: Prankenstein
Um, I'll need a more descriptive explanation for the names...er...ya, I think so. Maybe a demonstration or two...?
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 38: Cullen Island
Can Bella use her gift to enter the house and get more clothes?
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