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Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: Notes
this chapter was soooooooooooo the aww chapter haha i think i got a cavity just from reading it haha i really like how this is going
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 42: Common Ground
Once again, Esme is the BEST!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 34: Absolutely
*Snork*...yes, it sounded really good!
Excellent way to send Tanya packing...LOL
Kathie
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
Ah...women...those boys do not stand a CHANCE!
The girls might as well just order their cars now...
Esme...she's so good....LOL
Kathie
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 25: Making up
Ha! I can click NEXT and your horrible cliffies don't affect me...well, except for when twilighted drops out for hours at a time!
Ah, that Tanya...she's going to get her butt kicked!
Yee haw!!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: Bella Makes A Run For It
Yes, it's a good thing that you have a 12-step program for cliffies...
AND it's an even better thing that I can click NEXT!!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
I love Rosalie's DAD!!! He's a SUPER HERO!!!!!
TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY....
Kathie
Reviewer: yuriinsane (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9: A Long Day
love it yes i wish the cullens boys attack royce but probably cant becuase of treaty but ahh i want to slap/hit torture him
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Definitly would have been trying to reach throught the screen to throw things of you hadn't mentioned the "s" word--sequel! (and if I hadn't already favorited it!) :D
Thanks for the really fun ride. I just got better and better! I really look forward to seeing where you take the 'end of the vampire world as they know it! It was a real treat to get to read it straight through.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 44: The Ball
Damn! Now there's a twist! Can't wait to see how this relates to Alice's vision of B!
Thanks for sharing your talent and story with us!!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
What a way to create turbulance (liked it before, but think it will really make me smile now!)! Yeah--liked it ! lol :D
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 20: Denali
12step...cliffhangers...ROTFLMAO!!! Very nice! And good plot twist too. Heaven forbid B and E not go through the ringer, it wouldn't truely be a B andE story if they didn't. Plus, it's better than B being jelous of T just because she's beautiful.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
Can't wait to start reading the sequel. I really like this story you had an even balance of drama, fluff, and suspense! Great job!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 15: What a Way to Wake Up
Still likin' the departure from the norm. Really glad I didn't get caught by the repeated cliffies!!! Completely gratifying to read the whole thing through with only RL interuptions to slow me down!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Addicted to Love
Now here's a nice twist! *eagerly clicks "Next"*
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 38: Cullen Island
HAHAHA!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable
Loved it! Great!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 36: Futures
So far I like Aro's role, but I hope he's not the bad guy in the end.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe
I love that Edward broke first! I was sure you were going to make Emmett break first!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels
I did like it! It's fun to read everyone getting along and playing with each other. Most stories Rose is always the biggest bitch; I love seeing her let her guard down. Fun chapter!
Reviewer: ChristineMader (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
This was AMAZING! No other way to describe it! I can't wait to read the sequel, I think I might actually be in love with your characters, just as much as I am in Meyers originals! The little changes are cute and makes all the vamps more human in a really nice way. If you haven't already started it I think "New World Order" would be a great name, having the last line of this one in mind. And once again just WOW, you've bet put a lot of time into this, cause it shows in the pure awsomeness of the story :) And just as a finishing comment I really like that Rose got a power too (other than vanity lol), and I think Bellas 'adjusted' power is so cool! And with that I think I'll end my comment rant. haha :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: What a Way to Wake Up
That was cute way to wake up from being changed!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Fight and Flight
Interesting twist! Too many cliffies; I so need to go to bed but I always have to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: smil0514 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 47: The End of the World as We Know It
I really enjoyed reading this story! I can't wait to move onto the second half!!!!!!
Reviewer: breakingdawntfan28 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 11: Aftermath
That chapter was a total cliff-hanger! But, I love chapters like that, and i'm sorry I haven't left you a comment on your story yet! I'm not done reading it yet, but I have a feeling it is going to be one of the best stories i've ever read on here! Thanks for writing it! It must have tooken ALOT of time, considering it's like 42 chapters! But, I am going to stick to it till I get done reading it! I will also try and leave more comments every once in a while!
Author's Response: If you like it, then read some of my other stories, especially "I've Been Waiting for You for Forever." Thanks for reading.
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