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Reviewer: open_arms (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
love it love it love it! just read the ten chapters and totally didn't expect that AHHH!! Cannot wait for a new one :)
Reviewer: danarst (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
Holy crap! So the plan was to snatch Chief's daughter and hand her over. Now the question is was he really lost in the forest or was he having a change of heart? Great story.
Reviewer: siggynic (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 10
ok, that was unexpected! Awesome!
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 10
ho
ly
shit
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 10
man he is a good actor.
Brovo.
(he better be acting or i swear he's going become a she.)
Love the chapter. cant wait for more.
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well, what the fuck was that? I mean seriously .. I realize he has issues but he had better be joking or at least able to get her out of this mess. What a dick.
Love the story though.
Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
cocksucking bitch! he better fix this...
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 10
What the --?!??
Sooo... was he waiting 4 her on the road to kidnap her, but she wrecked into him instead?
I'm SO confused...
Do they get to shower & clean up now??? At least a toothbrush?
LoL
Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
omg!!
what a dickhead!
oh my... GOD! poor bella!
that was so mean!
i can't wait to see that jackass' excuse! stupid... lying piece of crap!
not the story... no the story is amazing. But just Edward in general =]
i feel so bad for Bella. Kepp writing because now i really want to know what happens
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 9
hey cool chap =] loved how it started out then like totally vhanged =]
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
loved it =]
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter!! I am getting anxious though... When do we learn the secret???
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
Well, some of the walls are down.
Wonder shy Edward is still so closed off. What secret is he hiding? Is he engaged to someone? Married? Whatever the hell is going on with him, I want him to come clean and "Say it". Even if it's painful for Bella.
Or do I?
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 9
That was one heck of tryst for being nearly fully-clothed. I hope Edward will not close back up in the light of day.
Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 9
Way to leave us hanging.
I absolutely love this. COMPLETELY.
Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
Criminal? Seriosly?
I like this Edward. Sexy.
Reviewer: siggynic (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great story! I'm really enjoying it so far!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 9
Awesome
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
Very well written!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
awwww, that was perfect. well done.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 9
that was HOT!
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 9
that was HOT!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
Kewl
Yes they do have alot in common. Hopefully both of them will realize this, tho it seems Bella already has
Have you considered doing a chapter or two from Edwards POV?
I hope that when they do get found, Charlie listens to Bella & helps Edward clear his father.
...and that B & E get to shower soon...LoL. Will they ever find that blasted cabin?
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
W O W that never even occurred to me that he was in it to help his dad. Wow. I’m still wondering what he was doing stopped on the highway, if it was more than it seemed or just crazy coincidence.
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