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Reviewer: siggynic (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 11
Definitely one of my favourite stories on this site! I can't wait to find out how Edward handles this one.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 11
Wow. I'm intregued. Ohhh whats gonna happen?!?
And they're finally CLEAN!! lol
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
Powerful chapter. Very well written.
Reviewer: no-emmett-i-punched-a-werewolf (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is amazing!
i have read this, and ALL of your other stories you have on here, LJ and ff.net!
:)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Well, this story is certainly not progressing the way I thought it would. I am constantly challengend and provoked. In a good way.
I continue to want to read more and more of your story in an attempt to put all the pieces together. It's like a puzzle that I don't want to stop working on.
More please...
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
This is an AWESOME story!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 11
I can't wait to see how all of this plays out!
Reviewer: jaomwlt (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow. Couldn't stop reading. Excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
omg, wow!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 10
Erm, what the french, toast?
LoL
Reviewer: AdrienneRose (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh, wow! Simply all I can say. WOW!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 10
What?!?!?!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 10
damn!!!!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 10
Well, this is some new form of f**kery I hadn't anticipated.
From withering ferns to this? I think I'm getting whiplash...
Dying to know what happens next though...
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 10
That was A TWIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lal08 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 10
sorry that I did't review sooner. this story holds a very interesting premise. edward kidnaps bella, the reasons are maybe to succeed in his plans of infiltrating and proving that his dad is innocent, and also probably to gain very needed cash for family. I guess what he didn't plan was falling in love with bella along the way. I wonder how Bella will forgive him and how he will clean this mess. Scenes with his family will be intense and interesting, too, I am sure. very interesting story, I do hope you will update soon.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hey OMG TWIST totally loved it =]
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 10
wow! wasnt expecting that
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
wow! wasnt expecting that
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 10
wow! wasnt expecting that
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
So I wonder at what point he "fucked it up." Answers please in the next chapter; I'm dyin here!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 10
aw hell!
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