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Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:03 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

I love the way this is playing out... I want to beat Edwards ass with something *really* heavy right now, and barbed....

Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:59 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

It's probably my fault cause I didn't explain myself very well!

So I can design the clothes they wear with polyvore. Par example let's say for a day out (u know shopping, lunch,cinema...):

http://www.polyvore.com/bella_day_out/set?id=11963960

 



Author's Response:

hey, that'll be great!

Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:50 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

I can't wait to see what Bella has in store for Edward! Great chapter!

Reviewer: fairytail_dreamer (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Prologue

luv it - i'm off to read more!!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:04 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

"I was waiting for Bellatrix to pop out of nowhere and “Crucio” me in the middle of the floor with a cackling Edward behind cheering her on. " LOL!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 05:02 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

Edward says he got to the judge???? Well, he obviously couldn't get the judge to dissolve the marriage........Hmmm...maybe more here than meets the eye? I know this sounds totally off base, but could Edward, at least in part, actually want to stay married? 

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Prologue

I'm loving it..Edward wipes down the chair?? OMG!!! This will be fun... I know they hate each other now, but I'm hoping that will change in the future and maybe they'll realize the reason they got married is due to more than just drinks- real chemistry, sexual attraction? 

Reviewer: Lyxa (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 02:12 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

hey!

great start to the story :D

hope you update soon

xoxo

Lyxa

Reviewer: Karah5406 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 10:09 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

I love this story so far! It's really intriguing!  I thinks it's Jacob who sent the text, but only because he is the first that comes to mind when calling her "Bells".   As far as the EPOV chapter, I would definitely like to see that, but maybe not until after this is finished from just Bella's POV.   I think it will be much more interesting attempting to figure Edward out on our own, rather then read it through his POV.  That's just my opinion.  Edward sure is a snob at the moment, I am looking forward this story greatly. You are a fantastic writer!

Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:19 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

this is hilarious and totally fresh! i like!

Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 07:38 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

I really like ur story! u know! can I make their outfits?



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know this might sound like a stupid question but what do you mean by outfits?

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 06:18 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

no it was not it very good can't wait for the next one

amazing

i think its jacob

please write fast

PLEASE I'M BEGGING

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:24 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

This is so funny!  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:34 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

HAHAHAHA! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: kisses (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:26 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

this is gonna be a fun journy!

cant wait for the next chapter!! =]

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Prologue

I like the start to this story. keep it up!

Reviewer: ueppi (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:17 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

Wow. I am really starting to love your story. So please continue updating! Can't wait for the more exciting stuff. :)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:17 AM · On: There's Something About Edward

Great chapter. I liked how you introduced Edward into the story. Can't wait to read more. Who's J? Please update soon.

Reviewer: ueppi (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Prologue

Love it!! I love your humor. This is interesting. I'm gonna read it till the end, so just keep it up!! :)

Reviewer: obsessiveimagination (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:57 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

Wait? James? Really?

Btw, love the fact how you are both a Twi-fan and an HP fan. Hahaha Bellatrix. Ugh I hate her.

 

Please update soon. It's really good.

Reviewer: Justcurious8 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:53 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

Great story! I'm really interested in it. Edward is an F'n jerk! I love Bella though, she knows how to get back at him even if he doesn't respond how we would expect.
Please let 'J' be Jasper! I love the stories were Jasper and Bella are really close or siblings. Speaking of siblings who is Bella's sister? How often do you update? Just curious. LOL like my name!
UPDATE SOON!!

Much Love, Emelie

Author's Response:

Thank you! Um, i don't have a regular time to update. I just usually update when my computer isn't toally fizzing up, but I do usually post teasers on my live journal account.

Reviewer: jhrbrown (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:11 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

Ah-freakin-mazing!!!! Gimme more!!!!

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:10 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

I loved this chapter! It was hilarious!

Reviewer: sol cullen (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:09 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

LOL love the Harry Potter reference , i like this Bella very much!!! all the funny coments make me laugh . Can't wait to know more about Edward and  think that J is.......... Jacob he has to be , that's what i hope , i'm not team Jacob at all , i am a complete Edward girl but this Edward is a bit of a jerk so he deserve a little suffer ......ja ja ja

Well Ilike this history a lot  , great chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!

Ps:Sorry about my inglish is not my lenguage :D

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:07 PM · On: There's Something About Edward

Good work.  So, Edward managed to con the judge into them getting their own home.  I see lots of bad things happening for Bella.  Hmmm....I can't wait ot find out who J is!

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