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Reviewer: dave (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
are you finishing this story??
I really loved it!!! please continue!!!!
Reviewer: icygirl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
hi! just picked up this story and now i'm begging for more :) waiting for The Tenderness and Need. 'hope you'll update soon! keep feeding our fantasy :)
Reviewer: iluvanyandalltwilight (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
Very nice! I love it! Small suggestion, wether or not you take it is completely up to you. Edward tied down on his bed. But plug, Bella with a riding crop using his body for her pleasure. If your not into BDSM that's cool. Haveing him fuck Bella up against the wall downstairs in the club making her be quiet or they would get caught is just as hot! LOVE your work!
Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
:)
Reviewer: Shano (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
I've been itching to read this story for ages now but never did cuz it wasn't complete. I finally broke down and i was NOT disappointed. But really, you need to update. Its been over a year. Very soon has long come and gone. At least post some of what you already have to tide us over. Put us out of our misery plzzzzzzzz. So far its great! so pllzzzzz im begging. Your soon is not soon enough.
Author's Response: My soon sucks I know that... I'm glad you gave me a chance. Sorry for making it wait in misery. I know people are wanting to know what these two crazy kids will get up to next. I'm in the process of finishing the remaining chapters. I want to have them all done so that when I post again there won't be any wait. Bare with me for a bit longer... I promise it will be worth the wait. XXX Whit
Reviewer: DivaMommy7 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
Love naughty Edward and Bella. Refreshing change.
Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
i have not been reading ff for awhile, would say Forever. also RL:) and sometimes :( but now i try hard to catch up with my fave stories. hope to read soon, waiting patiently, will be right here when the next chap comes out.
good luck!
just me
Author's Response: So patient and of cousre I could never foreget you just me. My loyal fan. Bare with a bit longer... it will be worth the wait I promise! XXX Whit
Reviewer: sapho99 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Your last update was Feb of 2010. I do understand RL getting in the way
of everything else but damn it's been a year! Let me know if you are going to update in the near future, thank it was a good story with lots of hot smut
LOL
Author's Response: I know it's been a long time... I'm trying my hardest to get the rest of the chapters done and over before I start posting again. I don't want to keep everyone waiting a long time again. Soon I promise. Thanks for the support and understanding. XXX Whit
Reviewer: ginkgo00 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
MORE, MORE!
Author's Response: Soon, Soon! Thanks for reading. Glad you like it. XXX Whit
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
Fuck Me Edward
Author's Response: Yes Ma'am. Thanks for reading. XXX Whit
Reviewer: BurchGirl (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
ummmmmmm. i'm waiting.....
Author's Response: Glad you read it. Thanks for waiting. Just a bit longer. XXX Whit
Reviewer: JodeoRodeo (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Love the diiirtiness of this story! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. RL has kicked my butt majorly. I'm working on it a little each day. Thanks for reading! XXX Whit
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
Love this story! Can't wait for the update! Great smut too! I love Edward being so rough and dirty with her....I hope there's lots more of THAT!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review. It inspires me on crappy days. RL has been a pain but I'm just about done. Soon, very soon I promise. Thanks so much for checking my story out. I love my E&B too, they are different and keep people on their toes I think. XXX Whit
Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
this story is so freaking good - when the hell are you going to update - please don.t keep us waiting to much longer!!!
Author's Response: I thought I lost you... so glad you like it so far. I'm close to done with the next one. RL has sucked lately like you would not believe. I loved your reviews, thank you so much for taking the time to review. Soon I promise. Very soon. XXX Whit
Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
man o man - My Panties are wet!! lol
Author's Response: These two are yummy together and more wetness is promised. I hope you continue to read and enjoy. Update will be coming soon. I hope to hear from you again. Thanks so much! XXX Whit
Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
whoa!!! that was crazy!!!
Author's Response: Edward is a little brash but I wanted to show that he's no the same sweet lovey dovey Edward. He's a manwhore for a reason. Thanks for giving it a shot. Hope you continue to enjoy it. I love hearing what people think so thank you for the reviews.
XXX Whit
Reviewer: fanfanjustme (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
i miss The Best Man.. *sigh*. hope the next chapter will be ready soon xoxo:)
Author's Response: You are sweet and wonderful and we're almost there. Soon. Very soon. XXX Whit
Reviewer: SweetAngl1604 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
OMG Love This! I am anxiously waiting for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I love new readers! Next one is almost done. C you soon! XXX Whit
Reviewer: Asianfly74 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Dang girl that was Hawt!!!! glad to see Edward getting his jizz off with other women other than Bella
Mahalo For that!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for giving me a shot. Variety is the spice of life. XXX Whit
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
I will be adding this to my list of favorites. Can't wait till the next chapter. Domniant Edward is always my favorite. Extra creamy goodness.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I love when new readers come along for the ride. Chapter 12 was one of my fav to write, it was my first attempt at Domward. I'm just about done with the next. RL just really sucks right now. I will always come back though.
XXX
Whit
Reviewer: ram2001 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
WOW!!!!!!!!!! that's all I can saw can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving me a shot. I love new readers. Bare with me, life is rough. I've been just about done for awhile now. I want to finish though and have promised to make myself to do so soon, very soon. XXX Whit
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
Really enjoying, thanks for the fun read!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. RL is crazy but I'm just about done with the next one. Hope to hear from you again! Thanks again XXX Whit
Reviewer: lil_1991 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
girl, you left me panting hot and bothered... stairs sex mmmmm, not quite comfortable but alway exciting. Hope you will update soon, for my hornyness sake! See ya
Author's Response: Could've sworn I replied to your review already but I'm glad you liked it. I love new readers. Real life has been kicking my butt but I'm just about done with the next one... you won't have to pant too long. Sorry. XXX Whit
Reviewer: dorothybert (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
Wow - how hot was that? Thanks
I want to see where these two take it! Who will dominate?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I love new readers! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing I appreciate it so much. U don't have to wait too long for the next one, just about done and then off to my beta. So hopefully tomorrow sometime.
Dominate... who will dominate? Maybe they can share the responsibility? Thanks! XXX Whit
Reviewer: curiouscat (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
Wow! This story is the perfect blend of naughty and nice...love the lemons, love the interesting backgrounds on the characters. I constantly want to learn more about them. I can't wait to see where you take it next!!!
I am having trouble sometimes picturing exactly what positions they are in? Does that make sense? They are very well written once in the middle, but I sometimes find myself turning my head trying to figure out how she is kissing him when he is much lower than her lips or vice versa. Gimme more detail girl! I won't be disappointed!
I'm so excited for the next chapter! You rock!
Author's Response: Haha... that makes me laugh. Cause I guess I get what you mean. In the middle the details flow but in the beginning I need to give you and trust me I can do that.
I'm glad you like my blend, these two are super fun to write and I enjoy writing them when I have time. The next update is on it's way I've just been in one hell of a shit storm lately. RL kicking some major butt. Thanks for the review! XXX Whit
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