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Reviewer: modern_audrey (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 01:37 PM · On: 2: Love Magnet (Various POVs)
I'm not really a fan of the conflicting POVs. It just disrupts the flow, and it seems to be distracting more than it is adding anything to the storyline.
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 06:28 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
NO!! i want more pleeez!!
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:57 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
That was very interesting so far. I really wish you would finish it. There are some grammatical errors where you swapped tenses and things like that.
Reviewer: newtwilightguy (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:06 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
So close, yet still so far.
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:29 PM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
No.... not there, don't stop there. Oh my goodness...
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:03 PM · On: 8: The Sweetest Thing
They didn't catch how Jonathan called Edward 'James'? Oh my. The plot does thicken...
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:43 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
It has been a while since you updated. I was happy to see you here again. Great job on the chapter. I had to read back a little so that I could remember what was going on, but still really good.
Reviewer: zeza101 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:16 PM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
Come on!!! get them back together please!!! i don't like it when she dosn't remember him :(
BTW: great story, update soon PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:52 PM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
ooh a cliffie darn it i want more.
Reviewer: Wasbi215 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:45 PM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
please keep writing i love these stories
Reviewer: sweetiepie1190 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:40 PM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
Even if she is uncertain, at least she's getting somewhere. lol. Great chapter! Edward is soo sweet.
Reviewer: bronzeandgold (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 11:35 AM · On: 7: Blushing Freesia
It's okay, okay, okay! I will just have to double up my reviews to make up for the lost ones :) Terrific story with excellent plot twists!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:42 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
What is it with you and cliffhangers lately?
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:55 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
UGH!!!!!! please don't wait soo long to post....suspense is killing me....will she remember him....and will it work out??
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:36 AM · On: 18: Forget-Me-Not
Ah, man! Cliffies. :(
Please update soon?
Reviewer: newtwilightguy (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 09:09 AM · On: 17: Brighton, here we come!
she's back. sort of YAY
Author's Response: hah yeah :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 09:44 AM · On: 16 Part II
i like this story a lots so different but very cool
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:06 PM · On: 17: Brighton, here we come!
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 04:41 AM · On: 3: Demons of the Past
Hmmm so Bella is a self-mutilator. That is interesting, and very intense...I am interested to see how that sub plot plays out in her behavior and ultimate desire for Edward.
Very intense psychologcal material!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:31 AM · On: 16: Saints and Swans
Yuck. I don't like this at all. I understand why he did it. But how can he trust her? How do we know somehow she won't use this to keep Bella away?
Reviewer: creamandroses (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:20 AM · On: 16: Saints and Swans
really one of the better fan fics on this sight, i've read almost all of the 'au' stories, yours is up there really a fave, very well written, love this story, so exciting, please update soon, you have a place in my heart
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much! That's awesome to hear P: Woohoo! *happy*
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2009 08:51 AM · On: 16: Saints and Swans
Oooh yeah, a verbal bitch slap to the face for Tanya. Hehe
I can't wait for Edward and Bella to be reunited, though I hate that he had to sleep with Tanya to do so. Regardless fact that he called out Bella's name during the act was well worth it. Great job!
Author's Response: HAH! Oh and, I posted a chapter analysis (16 Part II) so you should check it out :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: newtwilightguy (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 08:27 AM · On: 16: Saints and Swans
Tanya may not be outwardly evil, but she sure comes off evil sometimes
Author's Response: Heh. Everyone's evil deep down inside... except to what extent and on what impulses we act on. Anyway, I posted a chapter analysis (16 Part II) so you should check it out :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:48 AM · On: 16: Saints and Swans
I can't remember, was Edward a virgin before this?
Author's Response: Yes, he was. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: sweetiepie1190 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:05 AM · On: 16: Saints and Swans
I hate Tanya with a passion. Now Edward lot his viginity to her. That Sucks!
Author's Response: Yeah, life sucks, doesn't it? Anyway, I posted a chapter analysis (16 Part II) so you should check it out :) Thanks for reading!
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