Reviewer: twilightluver96 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2013 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 11Predators & Erotica
hey hey,
i know you didnt ask this time and i am probably a few chapter late but , i think the ?pov is mikes pov....
also, i really like your story...
xoxo, eunice or twilightluver96
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 8 Flirtacious Floozies & Pervy Baristas
i like the story, but its taking a long time for things to movee forward
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 20 Snuffalupagous F@cks my Shit up!
OOO is creepy officer the stalker? I had all my money on Mike for a while until we found out he's already in jail. I still don't trust James since he is pure bat-shit crazy and we didn't see him around for a while, and I definitely don't trust 'professor' Laurent. But with the officer calling her Bella instead of a more formal name when they went to pick up the keys and now the line "He seemed to be around a lot--Officer Nichols" I'm thinking he may just be the psycho.
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 26 Interview Interpetations
are you kidding me? do you know how many times i've tried to figure out who it was? at first i thought Mike, then James, then Eric, then Nichols...and it was LAURENT? i briefly thought that it was him earlier on, but not seriously...holy crap...you're good at red herrings.
Reviewer: apl (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Passing Days & Timeless Lays
enjoyed your story very much, loved the little trickery you did making us think it was one person not the other. :)
Reviewer: Mya Ray (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 27 Straight Mate
I guess I am a creeper LOL I love to watch my children sleep (but then I don't know of a mother that doesn't) I also like to watch my husband sleep. We have 5 children (ages (almost 11, 13, 13, 15, and 17) and he works HARD at a VERY STRESSFUL job to enable me to stay home with them. The cares of life melt away when he sleeps and I am able to see the boy I fell in love with when I was 13 years old. So call me a crazy stalking creeper if you will. I just think I am a woman very much in love with a very good man :D
Reviewer: Mya Ray (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 19 Alice--C*ckblock Extraordinaire
Yes my Dad!
Reviewer: Melrae (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Passing Days & Timeless Lays
Loved it!! I wasn't sure when I read the summary and it mentioned untrustworthy frat guys since I'm greek but I gave it a chance and I am SO glad I did. Just fantastic, I can't wait to read more of your work. On a personal note, I have to say that i loved it that you had bella fall to her knees with edward during the proposal because that's exactly what i did and I always had to laugh at it when I told people about it, so I'm glad I'm not the only one (even if the other person is fictional). Great job, it was a wonderful story
Reviewer: Melrae (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 26 Interview Interpetations
Literally laughed out loud at this chapter, twice! Not sure if that was the appropriate response or not but for some reason I just found it so damn funny. The first one was when I realized that he didn't want bella, so I had to go back and reread his statement and then again when I read a little further and saw that it wasn't even Nichols. I was just too caught up in the twist I didn't even read the last bit. Great writing, love it
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
great start very well written
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Passing Days & Timeless Lays
I LOVE EDWARD - NUF SAID
Oh - apart from I love your fic and I am glad that you kept it going and saw it through to it's beautiful end - xxx
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Passing Days & Timeless Lays
What a sweet proposal! What will happen in 15 years when Laurant comes back? Scary!!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Passing Days & Timeless Lays
Awesome story. I really enjoyed reading your twists and turns. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 27 Straight Mate
creepy
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 26 Interview Interpetations
tricky
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 26 Interview Interpetations
Oh tricky
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 25 Valentine's Melee part2
great chapter
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 24 Valentine's Melee
nice
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 22 Bella's Liberation
Go Bella
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 Snuffalupagous F@cks my Shit up!
Officer Nichols...huh?
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 19 Alice--C*ckblock Extraordinaire
Dang.... I'm wrong again.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 Raging Poet
Alice is too obivious...Charlie?
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 Alice's Reveal!
great chapter
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 Raccoon Eyes
Now I'm thinking ?POV is Laurant
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 13 Shakespearean Smackdowns
great chapter
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