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Reviews For Three Hours at the MVD One Shot!

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really, really enjoyed your story. Thanks so much for sharing it - and your endearing (and yummy!) version of Edward.

Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful bit of fluff! Thanks for the ray of sunshine!

Reviewer: ScottishRose1028 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

I seriously said "aaawww" out loud when I got to the end - how freakin' cute was that!!!!!!! I've got a big goofy grin on my face from reading this! I loved it, it was so cute and lovely! *hugs*

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'd love to see what happens next. Great story!

Author's Response:
:D :D :D

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was so sweet! Very sexy without a lemon...I really liked it :-)

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response:
thank you so much! glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: TashavonBlackvell (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, greate ending, greate story! Made me smile:)

Author's Response:
thank you!

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Totally charming. Thanks!

Author's Response:
aww.. thanks!

Reviewer: x_theaddiction (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

amazinggg, you should do a story based on this. it was absolutly amazingg.

Author's Response:
you're not the first to ask for more... thaks for reading!

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this! I'm so sorry you missed the deadline...would have voted for you!

So...now you could add another chapter or two...right?

Loved Edward with the little old lady...and missing his number...on purpose!

Thanks for sharing...

Kathe

Author's Response:
yeah - it was a great contest. you're not the first to ask for more... we'll have to wait and see, i have a lot on my plate right now! xox

Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Brain to page in 3 hours, I'm impressed. Gotta say tasteful ink on a guy gets me every time. Great One Shot!

Nina xxx

Author's Response:
yep - freaked me out how quickly it came out.

all it takes is a glimpse of ink covered by a collar or shirt sleeve and I'm white-knuckled trying not to paw at them for a better look.... :)

Reviewer: rcselbsmn (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's so cute!

Author's Response:
yay!!

Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Aww this ficlet was adorable. I absolutely adored the sarcasm dripping from Bella's thoughts at the beginning, and mystery Edward was a delight. What a charming way to introduce them to one another. Going to the DMV will never be the same! :)

Author's Response:
thank you so much!!

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Reviewer: tiffknee (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

amazing! funny story the one time I got the nerve to tell a guy I liked his ink (he had an amazing owl tattoo and I collect all things Owl). I was at work (Buffalo Exchange!) and I was like "hey nice owl tattoo" and he said "thanks" I went on to say I collected owl stuff and then he looked up at me and I thought HOLY CRAP HE'S HOT and then I realized he was Josh Madden, Benji and Joels brother, i turned red and walked away after that.

Author's Response:
holy crap! yeah - that would set you on your ass! my husband worked in old town for manyyears and he had quite a few celebrity run-ins -it never fails to freak you out!

buffalo exchange! oh god i miss nob hill. my fave clothing store in the world in on carlisle - Celebro. *sigh* we moved to the miswest in 2006, after 13 yrs in NM (6 in Albq, 6 in Jemez). the MVD i pictured this was that enormous one up at Juan Tabo and Menaul, and my skin still crawls at the thought of that enormous waiting room.

shit, now i'm craving a breakfast burrito (red) from Garcia's... or the Range *drool*

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

"O-o-o-o-oh!!!" She howls!

I wish I could write like you, Ms. Pen! Love you...<><3

Author's Response:
you are too generous, bb. :D

Reviewer: tmr (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Never thought I'd say this: I cannot wait to go to the DMV/MVD.

Holy hell girl! Yet again, your writing had me captured. I felt like I was secretly reading a diary entry of my good friend Bella. It's so real, so authentic.

This one-shot could be a oh-so-wonderful start to yet another great story... if you are so inspired.

Bravo!

Author's Response:
LOL! i'm so glad you liked! i might continue this in the future - but i have too much else on my plate right now to think about any more stories... but then, once the idea takes hold, i become a priosoner to it, so we'll see. :D

Reviewer: Artemisia (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

... Fantastic.

I would like to be more creative, but it's just... fantastic.

Author's Response:
thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: aaa (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was great!!
i loved the ending!! :)

Author's Response:
aww... me too! thanks!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I don't have a thing for tatoos, but this story was very, very sweet.

Sorry you missed the deadline! Thanks for sharing anyway!

Author's Response:
hi, beh beh!! thanks for coming over to check it out, even if tattoos don't flip your switch. i appreciate your support, and glad you enjoyed it anyway!

Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic one shot!

Author's Response:
thank you so much!

Reviewer: Tasha083 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

very cool i enjoyed that very tense!!

Author's Response:
thank you so much! i really enjoyed writing it!

Reviewer: l80hawk (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

I have to say this was a great little one shot! I loved the ending

Author's Response:
tahnk you so much! not as smutty as some, but i think it still turned out a little citrus-y sweet! glad you liked!

Reviewer: Ellis (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

a guy with tats just makes me melt - i just wanna run my hand over them and find where they begin and end. cool story. shame there isnt a mvd in england. i wouldnt mind waiting for three hours if i got company like tht

Author's Response:
that's EXACTLY how i feel, especially when i see just the edge of a tat peeking from a shirt collar. i have to sit on my hands every time.

nice to see you!

Reviewer: tamalady (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it!

Author's Response:
thank you sooo much!!

Reviewer: MVC93 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is great :)

Author's Response:
yay! thanks so much!!!

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Reviewer: Fanfickled (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

That really was a little cutie...really it was!!

I agree with you on the tat sleeves and neck tattoos..ggrrrhhhhh.

*sighs*

thanks it was vey entertaining.

Author's Response:
thanks so much! it was fun to write!

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