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Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 12:05 PM · On: The Reaction
LOVED IT! You really can pack a whole lot o' story into 2 chapters! Awwww, this first time 'do over' is even more sensual than the first. What a lovely scene, we should all be so lucky to have such a beautiful experience. GREAT WRITING. Thanks again! :D
Author's Response: Well, thank you. :) I've never really thought of it as a lot of story, but I'm pleased that you thought so. I only tell the story that's in my head, regardless of length. Usually, they are very compact, like this one.
Rob & Kristen are always so lovely together--so lovely to each other. :) I, too, hope that everyone can have such a beautiful experience.
Thank you for reading, and thank you for leaving a review. :)
<3 from the shrew
p.s. I saw that you have left reviews for Ever After, as well. I cannot reply to those reviews, but I thank you for reading and reviewing that story. :)
Reviewer: christig42 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 07:47 AM · On: The Reaction
Wow! I came across your stories last night and I can't stop reading them, they are so great!! I should be finished with them all today soooo.... ;) lol. Seriously, awesome job, you are a VERY talented writer and I have a reading additiction so I know the difference.
Oh yeah and f the haters
~ a new fan
Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you very much for taking the time to read these stories. I'm pleased that you've enjoyed them. Thanks for adding me to your reading addiction. (Only in this fandom does a sentence like that make sense. ;-P)
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 05:21 PM · On: The Reaction
Good song choice! I loved both chapters! Rob is as sweet and considerate of Kristen as our Edward is to his Bella! I still love the way you zoomed in and zoomed out of Rob and Kristen's minds. This was a great romp!
Author's Response: The song choice was from a fan account of that night. No clue whether it was true or not, but it was fun to incorporate because it made for a great joke.
Rob has always seemed sweet and considerate. Especially with Kristen. His love has been written clearly on his face since the beginning. :) I think Rob brought some of himself into that aspect of Edward. It seemed something they have in common -- how they love their women. Good men are good men. ;)
I'm glad you liked knowing what both of them were thinking in this story. I think this story was my first attempt at writing 3rd person omniscient. Gotta learn somehow, right?
Thank you for reading and for your comments. :)
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 04:10 PM · On: The Secret
Kristen and Rob have strong, mutual, pre-set agreements about what gets revealed of their romance; neither of the 2 of them betrays each other's trust for his or her gain! I think what we all love so much about Rob and Kristen is that their romance is like a real-life fairy tale within the fairy tale of Twilight; it's a romance that has such potential to become an incredible marriage if the media will not try to tell us everything Kristen and Rob do! Yes, I only occasionally want to hear something really interesting/unusual they enjoyed; as long as their private time isn't exploited!
I liked that you used alternating first-person and third person narration throughout this first chapter! I sometimes felt like we are guardian angels (= the third persons,) watching a beautiful, sensitive and steamy love affair unfold!
Author's Response: I am happy with whatever they are willing to share with us. I respect that they keep so much of their private lives private. It's for them. Not us. And that's the way we like it. :) We respect them for what little we know of them. RPF is designed for the "idea" of them. RPF is our wishful thinking, our hope, that their lives are wonderful. A positive projection into the universe, if you will. :)
If I slipped from first to third person POV, then that was a mistake. I'm not supposed to do that, but I'm very glad that it worked for you. :) This story came to me like a movie, like watching the scene unfold on screen, so that's how I had to write it. Except that we got to know what they were thinking, too. ;)
See, this is why I need to just write stories; I can make more sense interpreting a character than I ever can trying to explain myself. LOL.
Thank you for reading the story and these replies. It means a great deal to me that you would enjoy them enough to invest the time in leaving me feedback. :)
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: pumpkinpie26 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 03:49 AM · On: The Secret
you are a great writer!! do you have a follow up story to this one??
Author's Response: Thank you! That's very kind of you to say. :)
Alas, I have no follow up to this particular story. Just various other R/K one-shots.
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 05:28 PM · On: The Reaction
I was worried for awhile about what would happen, but I'm glad it worked out! I loved it :)!
Author's Response: It could have gone many ways, but I went with what the characters told me.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 05:12 PM · On: The Secret
Aww that was cute! I love them :) lol!
Author's Response: I love them too. <3
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 11:02 PM · On: The Reaction
loved it! more?
Author's Response: I'm sorry. I don't know that there is more to this story. Will you take "other?" I have other fictions, perhaps they can wet your whistle? ;-)
Thank you for reading! <3
Reviewer: dannakelly (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 11:19 AM · On: The Secret
This is my favorite story.
Author's Response: Well, thank you. I am so glad that you connected with it. :) Thank you for reading and for letting me know how you felt about it. :D
<3 from the shrew
Reviewer: LIZDESMOND (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 05:38 AM · On: The Secret
Great story!!! Only it leaves me wanting more, guess that's the way it's supposed to be. I'd really LOVE to see the conversation written between the two of them.
This is very well written, can't ask for anything better.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the rating. I appreciate your honesty. :D
Can I clarify with you what conversation you are refering to that you wanted to see? Did you mean that you wanted me to include an additional conversation, or that you wanted to visually see part of their conversations from this story? Forgive me, I am not trying to be presumptuous, but I want to make sure that I am understanding your comments fully.
Thanks again for reading and for your comments. :)
Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 05:40 AM · On: The Secret
Oh my goodnes! I've had this story on my favorites list for months and months, and I just realized that I haven't left a review for this story. Sorry about that. LOL!!
Anyway, I do love this two part story. I liked how you made Kristen a virgin in this one. And I of course I enjoyed hers and Rob's first time together. :) Poor Rob seemed at a lost of words when he realized Kristen was still a virgin. LOL!!
I just love those two. And I love how you write them.
Now I hope to get caught up on your story "Wake Up Call" soon.
:)
Author's Response: :D When I wrote this, I had never read RPF in which they depict Kristen as a virgin, but then after I posted it, I encountered a few that wrote her that way too. I was pretty stoked about that. It goes along with the essence of this story -- we really don't know anything about people behind closed doors, and I LOVE that!
Thank you so much for leaving the review. That you would take the time to go back through to leave a review is very flattering as a writer, and I treat it as a great compliment.
Thanks for allowing me to share my versions of the wonderful people with you. It is my pleasure as a fan to do so.
I hope you enjoy Wake Up Call too. I hope to get Rob's POV before the end of the year. lol. He is proving tougher to write. Well, I have to figure out how he is going to give his opinion on what has occurred without boring you all by being repetitious. I will get it eventually. Stick with me, and we'll get there. :D
<3 <3 <3 from the shrew
Reviewer: suebee1948 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 12:39 AM · On: The Secret
I would rate this a 10++++++++++++++!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 11:38 AM · On: The Reaction
Hi, any plans to write more chapters??
Author's Response: For this story? I am sorry, but not at this time. I am currently working on the others. This one is complete.
Reviewer: TwiredJen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:47 PM · On: The Reaction
I really love all of the Robsten FF's that you have done. They're by far my favorites! Can't wait for the next chapter on this one. I'm a HUGE Robsten fan and have my own blog... www.sotwired.blogspot.com
xo Jen
Reviewer: KristinPattinson (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 08:14 AM · On: The Reaction
That was absolutely amazing! You portrayed Rob and Kristin as very real people. Nice job. Oh and the sex scene had me cumming my pants. VERY nice!
Reviewer: milehi767 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 11:20 PM · On: The Reaction
I loved it. Thanks for writing it....It was sweet and sensual and the same time.
Author's Response: I am stoked that you loved it. I loved writing this story. Ah, Japan. What a lovely time to be a shipper, but I think that it's ALWAYS a good time to be a shipper! ;-) Thank you for reading. I am pleased that I conveyed to you both their sweet, tender side as well as their newly unleashed passion. :) Thank you for your thoughts. :)
Reviewer: dsfq (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:26 AM · On: The Reaction
LOVED it!! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading it! I am so pleased that you loved it. :)
Reviewer: twimom143 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:43 PM · On: The Reaction
You are the reason I joined Twilighted! I love your work and look forward to reading more!!!
Author's Response: Seriously?! WOW! Well, welcome to this lovely site. It houses some excellent stories. Let me know if you ever want any recommendations. I have been here for awhile, so ...
Thank you for the lovely compliments. I am truly pleased that you like these stories. I love writing for them, and to know that people like to read about them, is really fucking cool to me. Thanks so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts. :D
Reviewer: Colena (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:47 AM · On: The Reaction
I loved it!!! A really good idea for "the secret" of Kristen!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you bb! So glad that you enjoyed. I secretly adore them in this story. Thank you for reading and commenting. :D
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:37 AM · On: The Reaction
wow that was so sweet, not too smutty, but "perfect"
Author's Response: thank you for reading and commenting. :)
Reviewer: angie9319 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 01:50 AM · On: The Reaction
OMG!! I love!! her first time!! that is so sweet! and may I add hot too!!
I love your stories, their are great and so are the lemons!! lol
please finish Wake up call!! I love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. It's a different scenario, but I really liked this story. I am really stoked that you enjoy both the lemons and the stories. I was hoping I was getting better at those.
I have about 6 pages of the next installment of Wake Up Call. There is more chapter to tell, but it shouldn't be much longer. They are finally talking to me again after the long dry spell this summer. Thanks for your interest. I really appreciate it! :D
Reviewer: p00ckee (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 03:26 PM · On: The Reaction
Great job--loved it!
Author's Response: I am glad that you enjoyed it. thank you for reading, reviewing, and rating. :)
Reviewer: GoEdwardGo (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:07 AM · On: The Reaction
As always, it was wonderful.
Author's Response: Well, thank you for your kind words. I am very pleased that you enjoyed this. :D
Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:23 AM · On: The Reaction
You're a great writer.fun story! you should write more!
Author's Response: thank you. I am still writing. Can I ask what I could do better to make this worthy of 5 stars? I need to improve my skills, and any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading and reviewing and rating! :D
Reviewer: Lscott (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:36 PM · On: The Reaction
I loved it!!! Your stories are the best! Please keep writing them, I'm a big fan!
Author's Response: Oh thank you. That is very kind. I am still writing. Have you read the collaborations I have with jakeward? EA will be updating soon. :D
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