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Reviews For Our Forever
Reviewer: meltingpoints (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Our Forever

I loved this. Very well done!

Reviewer: purplespiderscalling (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Our Forever

God. This was so effing beautiful.
You're a magnificent writer, and
your work should totally NOT be
on the internet.
Granted, if you were published, it
probably wouldn't be Twilight stuff.
But still. Turn all of this into something
similarly different and you've got the next
Twilight!

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Our Forever

I really loved it!!!!! Did Rose, Emmett or Esme became part of the alliance??? And who represented the nomads?

Reviewer: corya75 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Our Forever

Wonderfully written. I love your writing style very much. It was nice to read a one-shot about the peaceful times to come for our amazing Cullen family!

Thanks!

Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Our Forever

Bittersweet, really. Great work.

Reviewer: LucyLu (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Our Forever

Simply...beautiful!

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Our Forever

awwwwww well done!!!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Our Forever

This was wonderful.  I thoroughly enjoyed ths glimpse into their futiure together.  I am sure they would be as happy as you described them to be!!!

Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Our Forever

Awww, how absolutely lovely! Thank you for sharing your stories with us and providing more of the magical world we've come to know and love.

As always You Rock!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Our Forever

This was so sweet! It's nice to think about how their forever turned out. Thanks for sharing this! It was great, as your stories always are. I feel a little bit of heartache wanting more.

Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Our Forever

I swear I have read this already, but I got an email that this was a new story. What's going on?  Did I miss something? 

Reviewer: TwilightMundi (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Our Forever

This was great.  I haven't given much thought to what life would be like for the Cullens that far into the future, and I haven't read any fics that do that.  I think you did a great job of spelling it out.  I like the idea of the Volturri being gone, and having a council to manage vamp affairs.

When people talk about immortality, I don't know that they really understand what it would mean to never die.  I think that LolaShoes did a pretty good job of beginning that exploration in <i>A Life Extraordinary</i>, but, as that doesn't go far beyond Bella's change, it's only a start.  To think about what E&B are doing on their 100th anniversary is a really neat place to begin.  And, at that point, I think it leaves the fantasy realm and moves into science fiction, when you think of what the world will be like in 100, 200 years.  Maybe that's why it hasn't much been tackled in the fan fiction world.  But, please correct me if I'm wrong about that.  :)

Reviewer: ariateh (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Our Forever

That was nice =) You should write the story of the Alliance in more depth

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Our Forever

Nice to know that Stefan finally got a chance to smirk at Aro and that Caius got his.  Marcus probably was more than ready to go when the time came.  As to the Cullens, well, what can you say -- they are leaders and do what is necessary and productive.  Jacob and Resnesmee -- still don't like it, but what can I say?  I didn't create it so I guess there's not much to do about changing all of that. 

Now with all of that drivel out of the way, I want to compliment you again, Ms. Laura, for doing an excellent job of writing and entertaining your loyal readers.  This was a bit fluffy for my taste, but in keeping with summarizing a few decades, right?  Thanks again for all that you do!

Reviewer: twilighter008 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Our Forever

yet another piece of excellent work i love reading your work

Reviewer: julesames (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Our Forever

That was amazing. I've been looking for fan fics like this for ages. I'm so curious to  know what happens after...

You're a great writer and I am now going to see what other fan fics you've written as well.


Great job!

Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Our Forever

Awesome and beautiful!

Reviewer: artbeatsandlife (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Our Forever

that was SO beatuiful. i love the bit about the allience, plus, im so happy to see that each member of the cullen family, jake inlcluded, are having such full and wonderful lives, (will ness and jacob have any children, i wonder?)

you are an excellent writer and i'd love to see this story extended to include more in-dept details over the past 100 years, or, perhaps a follow-up. keep writing and you've done the storyline and characters proud!

Reviewer: starla_1979 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Our Forever

I am so glad you finally posted this story on Twilighted (I had read it at fanfic.net).  You definitely tied things up together that SM didn't really touch on and I see this as a beautiful companion piece.  I too hope you'd consider doing this as more than a one-shot but you have 2 other compelling unfinished stories that I am dying to finish reading!  You are a great writer, keep it up!

Reviewer: Tasha083 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Our Forever

That wqas very sweet veiw on how their lives went together!!!

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Our Forever

aw cute... i SO dont picture Rpatz as edward. Who do you think edward looks like?

Reviewer: Run_Joanzie (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Our Forever

This was very interesting and so beautiful. I'm thrilled to see that Edward and Bella had/have a full life. I'm sorry that Jacob and Renesmee didn't have any children though. Ah well, these things take time. *g* Great piece!

Joan

Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Our Forever

I love this!!

It's kinda weird to see it all from a further perspective like.. 80ish years later!!!

Niiiiiice =D

Reviewer: DramaVamp (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Our Forever

Oh that was awesome! I love what you did with the story line SM so thankfully laid out for us.  This was the first fic I've seen that went so far out in time, and I think you did a wonderfull job!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Our Forever

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

BEAUTIFULLY!!

I enjoyed every sentence.

The last line, was perfectly crafted! Yes, I'm basically clapping my hands for you right now. I loved every sentence of it.

I actually would love to see this become more than a one-shot...just saying.

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