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Reviewer: reneegonzales (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Busted

Oooooh, good story!  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:59 PM · On: It Is What It Is

i do i do haha i love this story i cant wait for the next update and hope that we find out whether or not james can go and if he does i hope edward stays around again love this story you are grrrrrrrreat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!  I should be submitting the next chapter today, so hopefully it goes up soon!

As promised, below is the alternative start to chapter 8....enjoy

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:58 PM · On: It Is What It Is

ooh i would love to see the other version it was really good uh how much longer till e and b hook up?!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Below is the alternative start to the chapter.

Don't worry, I won't string it out for too long!!

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:48 PM · On: It Is What It Is

I'm glad that Edward took the shot!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!! So am I, it kind of shows he has respect for her if he's now willing to take the heat from his friends about it (although he still tried his hardest to hide taking it!).

 

As promised here's the alternative start to chapter 8....enjoy

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:54 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Trust Alice to save the situation.

Poor Jasper, though. "Sometimes you just can’t have what you want"...well, as the Stones say: But if you try sometimes you may find you can get what you need. And that guy needs some Alice :)

 

I'd be really interested in reading the other version you wrote.

Don't give in to pressure though. Your story, your way of telling it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, it cracked me up.  Yes, the Alice Jasper situation just breaks my heart....poor little Alice is not her usual self in this fiction, she's so defeated the poor little thing!!

As promised, here's the alternative start to chapter 8....enjoy

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:30 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Isn't it time for Jessica and James to be dumped?  I know, how about having Jessica and James hook up....and Edward and Bella catch them!!!! That would be a total WIN WIN situation - the assholes together, the good ones together!!!!!!!  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!  I couldn't agree more, definitely time to get rid of them....but then the story would end too quickly.  I'll kepp working on it for you though!!

As promised below is the alternative start to chapter 8....

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:40 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Stick with your story. Don't let others dictate it to you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the advise!!  Just in case you want to read it, below is the alternative start to chapter 8....

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: wophers (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 01:08 PM · On: It Is What It Is

OMG can I please please pretty please see the alt version? I don't mind them not getting together I just want Jessica and Edward to split up. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'll keep working on the Jessica/Edward thing for you.

As promised, below is the alternative start....

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:53 AM · On: It Is What It Is

Wow, was so impressed Edward managed to avoid discovery. I love the suspense being maintained. Every time I think Bella has discovered Edward's feelings, she misinterprets, I love it! Thanks for the quick update.

By the way, I'm glad you stuck to your plan. Speaking as a reviewer and not an author, I love getting my predictions wrong and constantly being surprised/challenged. It's what makes fanfiction fun!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Yes, I'm still trying to figure out how Edward slipped his way out of that one.....Emmet & Rose must be really hammered not to have noticed!!

As promised, below is the alternative start to chapter 8....enjoy

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: Tori80 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:44 AM · On: It Is What It Is

I think I prefer it this way, but I won't complain if you send me the other chapter...LOL!

I know I probably should think Bellas being stupid to stay with James, but I think I get it. After being devastated like that so suddenly, you take whatever comfort you can get and don't ask too many questions about where it comes from.

So when Bella is feeling better, the gratitude of having him stick by her overwhelms any misgivings she might have. Gratitude and affection have been mistaken for other feelings before and besides, how can she leave him when he stood by her?

Not saying I agree with it, but I think I get it.

Sorry am rambling a bit, looking forward to the next chapter  :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Yes I prefer it this way too.  The story would end too quickly if I went with the other version (which is below as promised).

love your ramblings....you are spot on.  Please send through more, I really enjoyed your perspective, sometimes you get so bogged down in thinking about what's coming next that you lose some perspective on their feelings.  So your review helped bring me back to where Bella's head is at!! thanks

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:29 AM · On: It Is What It Is

Well I wouldlove to see the other version!! You gotta love a lkittle more drama and Emo!!!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review.  Sorry it took so long to respond....too many great fan fics to read!!

As promised below is the alternative start to chapter 8....enjoy!

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:09 AM · On: It Is What It Is

i think i would have liked to see the other version come out, and have Edward and Bella squirm a bit. They need to stop hiding and get their act in gear, and kick Jessica and James to the curb. I think this Valentine's Day party is going to be interesting and I have a feeling that James will be a NO show .... just a feeling ...

keep up the great writing though, i am really intrigued by this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.....hmmmmm, I suspect you could be onto something, but you'll just have to wait and see!!

As promised, here's the alternative start to chapter 8.  Sorry for taking so long!!

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 05:02 AM · On: It Is What It Is

I love your story and it's killing me that Edward is with Jessica! Maybe something will happen when James is in town to make Edward realize he shuld be with Bella??

I'm confused as to why no one would notice Edward took a shot. That was a pretty uncomfortable question-did they all just assume that none of them had bben with each other? Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I can't stand that he's with Jessica either!  I'll work on that for you!

Jasper, Alice and Bella all noticed him take the shot, but Rose and Emmett were skulling their own and Alice was distracting them so they wouldn't notice, so their attention wasn't on him when he discreetly took the shot and discarded the glass at his side.  And jasper didn't say anything as he's Edward's best friend and wants to have a quiet conversation with him about it later.

As promised here's the alternative start to the chapter....enjoy

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:39 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Great chapter! I hope Bella gets rid of James soon because I cannot stand her in that relationship. Write more soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I can't stand to see her with James either!!  So I'll keep working on getting rid of him....I mean Edward will keep working on getting rid of him!

As promised here's the alternative start to chapter 8....enjoy

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:54 PM · On: It Is What It Is

So did E hear the whole conversation between J and B (i.e. her luke-warm description of her relationship with/feelings for James) or just the very tail end?  Also, I would love to see the other version: gaylynnlynch@gmail.com.

Thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!  Yes, Edward did hear some of the rest of the conversation, but he doesn't really want to think about what she actually said.

Anway, as promised here's the alternative start to chapter 8:

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:32 PM · On: It Is What It Is

I know Jasper has to have noticed something.... I'm sure it'll all come out eventually.  Great B/J interaction in this chapter...I'm glad Bella knows Edward was a virgin that night, I hated her thinking he was lying to her.  I can't wait to see what happens at the party...if Bella goes, and I'm also glad to see Jasper does really have some feelings for Alice! (which we knew all along he did).  Once again great chapter!!! can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Yes, I'm loving the Jasper, Alice aspect of this story....I'm looking forward to a scene I already have written out coming up between them soon.....it's a bit heart wrenching but will definitely move them in the right direction. 

As promised, here's the alternative start to chaper 8:

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:06 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Gaw, Bella is stupid. Obviously she doesn't love James, it's more than obvious from this chapter. So he put her back together? He's states away and seriously, he wasn't faithful when she was around, what makes her think he is now? I've always wondered of his intentions anyway. I don't trust the fucker. And I think she puts too much in him.



Author's Response:

Yes, she's a little deluded at the moment.  But she's still grieving the loss of her mother...well, actually she hasn't really been given the chance to grieve her yet.  But yes you're right, she doesn'tlove him, she just doesn't know it yet!

As promised to everyone who reviewed here's the alternative start to Chapter 8....enjoy

Thanks for the review!!

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:03 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Well really Edward needs to rethink that because I have a feeling James is just going to hurt Bella agin and he needs to be there for her.



Author's Response:

Couldn't agree more!!  thanks for the review.  As promised here's the alternative start to chapter 8....

 

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: Deex (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:40 PM · On: It Is What It Is

Hello, bonjour, salute!!! 

I would really really like to see the other version too!!!  Pretty please?

Really loving this fic and I can't wait for Jess to get dumped and B/E to sort it out!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Sorry it's taken me so long to respond, I've been very distracted by some awesome fics!!  Here's the alternative start to chapter 8 as promised....enjoy!

 

Alternative Start:

Oh fuck.

Oh fuck me dead!

How in the hell was I getting out of this one? And why in the fuck did Jasper say it?  Bella looked at me, her beautiful eyes wide open with shock, waiting for what I was going to do.  Do I lie, and not take my shot?  But then Bella will think I lied to her.  Do I drink and ‘out’ us, although the boys would automatically assume I’d lost my virginity with Rosalie or....Alice. Eew.  But even still, they’d be extremely pissed that they didn’t know the real details.  Not that I’d ever technically told them about the girl they assumed it was with, but whatever.  It was still a lie by omission. 

But it was about time I manned up.  I just prayed to god that Bella didn’t have a problem with it.  But she’s the one who suggested the game, she understood there were consequences.  I reached out and picked up a shot glass.  While there were dozens of full shot glasses on the table at the start of the game there were none in front of me that had anything in them....I skulled all of those already.  Couldn’t be more obvious if I’d had to fucking pour one for myself.

Rose, Emmett and Jasper just stopped and looked at me.  Jasper had a knowing look on his face.  How the fuck did he know anything?  I heard Rose whisper what the fuck under her breath. As they watched me take the shot.

They all looked around at each other dumb founded, trying to figure out who it was, obviously knowing it wasn’t them, but clearly confused as to who it was.  It was almost funny, and if I wasn’t so fucking nervous I’d actually be laughing.  The thoughts that must be going through their heads must be comical.  Rose was surely assuming I’d slept with Alice.   Emmett was probably about to get up and beat the shit out of me for fucking his girlfriend.....

“Back the fuck up a second.......what the fuck Cullen.  Are you telling me you either fucked my girlfriend or fucked your sister?  Either way I’m going to beat the fucking shit out of you.”

Both Alice and Rose squealed “It wasn’t me” in unison.

“Then who, it couldn’t have been Bella she........” but as he turned his attention to her the look on her face gave it away.  She was bright red, and she looked incredibly awkward.  Emmett and Rose looked between Bella and I with stunned looks on their faces. “Bella, little Bella.  When the fuck did you and Bella get together.”

I looked up at Bella to make sure she was OK with me revealing what happened.  I was expecting that she’d look angry, but I couldn’t quite place the look on her face.  She nodded her head as if to indicate she was OK for me to reveal what had happened.  But I wasn’t sure I wanted them to know.  I hadn’t told them them for a reason, I wasn’t going to reveal too much now.  It was too personal, too special.

“Bella visited Forks in Summer before moving here.  Let’s just say we met then.”

“Get the fuck out of here Cullen you can’t just leave it there?”

“Fuck off McCarty, Bella’s sitting right here you know.”   Just then Bella raised her hand and gave a little wave so people could acknowledge her presence.

“Sorry, Bella.  But I don’t understand how I missed that shit.  I don’t remember seeing you.”

“I do,” chimed in Jasper.   What the fuck?  I looked at Jasper incredulously.  “What?  As if I wouldn’t have noticed her, she’s good looking.”

“Guys, I’m sitting right here.”

“Sorry Bells,” replied Jasper.

“I was at Edward and Alice’s party just before school went back.  I came with Angela.”

“Sounds like she’s not the only person you came with.”

“Emmett!!”  More than one of us shouted at him.  Bella just looked a little embarrassed but we were all drunk enough by now that hopefully she didn’t feel too bad about the comment.  But it did take me straight back to that night and her comments about experiencing her first ever orgasm during sex with me. 

 

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Busted

Great cliffie! Not the question I thought it would be, it's so much better! Can't wait to see if Edward tells the truth or not, and how Bella & co. reacts!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Now you've got me puzzled as to what you thought the question would be??  Next chapter has been submitted so it should be up in the next couple of days!!

Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Busted

That was great - Jasper is such a hose.

Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Busted

OOOOO FUCK pdate soon

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Busted

i need an update like i need water and the air that i breath this story is so good has lots of humor and just everything a girl needs to cheer her up cant wait for the next update dear



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your lovely review!!  It's so nice to know people love my story.  Next update has been submetted, my validator normally takes a couple of days to put it up so hopefully she won't take too long!

Reviewer: aeb12484 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Busted

OH COME ON!!!!! You left it like that!!??!! BUT WHY???? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I effing love this story!!



Author's Response:

You're hilarious....so many capitals, I can just imagine that whole review being shouted at me!!  Made me laugh.  Next chapter has been submitted.  My validator normally takes a couple of days so should be up soon.

Reviewer: kaystu (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Busted

Oh shit!!! Omg that was amazing and I cannot wait to hear how this is handled, but honestly I would love if they had to spill to their group and that hilarity! I just love this story, keep it up girl ;)
Xox

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Reviews always make me write faster.  Next chapter will be up soon (it's already been submitted, but it usually takes a couple of days to be validated)

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