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Reviewer: HelsBells (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 01:57 PM · On: One Down
I just found your story today and have really enjoyed it so far. I'm glad James is out of the picture, hopefully for good. Now Edward just needs to get rid of Jess. I hope Bella will explain to Edward soon what's happened between her and James so he doesn't get the wrong idea after what he saw.
Reviewer: distinctly_forbidden (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 06:47 PM · On: One Down
No more James! That's a relief, although his character is known not to give up :/
Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 05:18 PM · On: One Down
Well i hope that bella doesn't get eith james who tells their loved one after almost dying that their surviour scars are ugly is just straight hateful.
Does bella feel subconcious because if then and does edwards affection for her stay after seeing ehr with james or does he give up?
Reviewer: CMC17 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:25 AM · On: One Down
Oh thank you for a courageous Bella! This was great. I look forward to the mend with Edward.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:25 AM · On: One Down
Yeah CHarlie! HE ROCKS!
Reviewer: rOcKeRfOoL (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:22 AM · On: One Down
she's seen the light, but Edward saw her before that light appeared...i wonder how he feels now...
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 07:57 AM · On: Signs
esme scrapbooking?!?!? AWESOME!!! BOO james...hiss...get rid of that douche..lol
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 07:12 AM · On: One Down
So when will Edward find out that Jessica is a cheating whore????? :)
Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 06:08 AM · On: One Down
Yah!!!Now keep writing!!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 05:22 AM · On: One Down
*does a happy dance for Bella's ability to stand up against James* BRILLIANT stuff girlie...no wonder James was gob-smacked - he never expected that the old reliant Bella had been replaced by a girl who can now tell people what she wants.
Much love for 'scary' Charlie in this chapter, going all defensive (and rightfully so!) for Bella's sake and trying to counter-act what James had said about her scars.
Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:47 AM · On: And Then I Kissed Her
You are a great author! Much better than many on here!!
Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:59 AM · On: One Down
Great story....man i was really wanting a confrontation with Edward and James though...pretty please??? Your a great writer! Please update soon!!!!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:54 PM · On: One Down
im happy she saw the light im sorry that edward had to see james the prick kissing bella :( i just wanna give edward a hug seriously sooooooo glad bella finally sent james away
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:43 PM · On: One Down
Yeah!! So glad that dufus is outta here! Now, let's get these two together!! BTW ~ I'm really crossing my fingers that you'll take us to college with them... hint... hint ;)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:40 PM · On: One Down
great chapter!!! update soon!!!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:00 PM · On: One Down
I'm glad Bella has seen the light, but what has poor Edward seen? Update soon, again.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:12 PM · On: One Down
Well I am glad James is gone! But I have a feeling he will be back! God I hope not. Now maybe B/E can talk and figure things out for themselves!
Reviewer: RobstenLuvre (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:24 PM · On: One Down
Finally so so pleased that James is gone! Now i'm terrified that Edward will misinterpret what he initially saw and try being good to Jessica out of spite, thinking that Bella and James were still together :( PLEASE DONT DO THAT TO ME. Have Bella explain to Edward what really happened, make Edward finally dump Jess and GET THOSE TWO TOGETHER ALREADY!! you are killingggg me
Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:12 PM · On: One Down
Finally. I thought she was never going to break up with him. Unfortunately you have left us with the question, what the hell does Edward do after seeing that? And how does Bella proceed. Great job. I just read all the chapters today. I'm hooked. Please post again soon.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:20 PM · On: One Down
Great chapter! I'm definately happy about this. It's about time she got rid of that ass. I just hope that Edward doesn't do anything stupid since he saw the two of them together. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: mreese69 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:33 PM · On: It Is What It Is
Oh how I would love to see the other version....Can you please send it?
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:44 PM · On: One Down
Thank God she got rid of him. I have been waiting for this chapter. Now time for Edward to get his ass in gear and dump the wench!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Busted
hahaha that last one jasper said was a good one!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:57 PM · On: One Down
Yeah !!!!!!!!!!!!!! She finally got rid of that cheatin' loser.
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:30 PM · On: One Down
Thank goodness!! I agree to the need of having few happy chapters! So, what our Edward going to do now? can't wait for the next. nice chapter!
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