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Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Prologue & Running

I'm very curious to find out what's going on! A good start :)

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:06 AM · On: New Turf

looking forward to more

felt like I was there

Reviewer: Suzybear (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Prologue & Running

What a wonderful start! I really enjoyed how you gave the backstory and history of Bella's history with the Cullens in a informative, and new way without sounding like it was just repeated from the books.

I am looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you didn't find the back story waffle. I was a bit worried about putting this in, but you saying that makes me feel it was OK. Happy to see you're liking it so far! I am hoping to update soon, as next chapter's already with the beta :-D

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Prologue & Running

looking forward to this story

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review :-) I just HAD to reply as you are my very first review on twilighted and that made me very excited. I hope to update soon, next chapter's already with the beta

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