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Reviewer: AnnaRebecca (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
Love this story! Hope it continues soon, I can't handle lonely Angstward much longer!!
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
I really enjoy the story. I hope Edward gives his poor hand a break so he can start sexing-up Bella!!
Looking forward to your next update.
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
I love it! I love how you have set up the characters.
You're awesome!
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
so nice to see the story in this venue! and Bit & Suit on their way here too!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
hey cool chap =]
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
Wow, girl, what a great chapter! And fast, too. Just unbelievable. So I know my last review was a tad bit harsh, but you are such a superb writer, it's really frustrating when we don't get a satisfying hit of Annanabanana. My only criticism is, don't read this chapter if you are hungry and/or dieting. The food was great; the angst was terrific, all in all a wonderful job. Now, please don't leave us dangling for weeks again. We just can't take it.
Reviewer: Greend (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
Go Bella!!!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
Loved it and I'm glas shes fighting for him, though I don't know why she would leave in the first place when its obvious he dosn't want her too.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Misery, Muscadines & a Peace Offering
Wow!!!! That was incredibly beautiful and moving. I had tears in my eyes at the pain these 2 are in. OCDward just tears my heart to pieces. I'm glad that Bella is being brave and seeking him out. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
Annette
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
I like the story so far. Just happened upon it today and will try to read the rest of the posted chapters tonight. I love an OCD Edward. It was a nice touch that Bella sits outside his door to hear him play. Keep the chapters coming.
Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
Definite Yay.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
Loved the kiss, edwards probably going nuts. More please soon.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
I love that they fantasisie about each other. They are both so cute in their uncertainty. I'm glad that Bella was able to make the first move and that Edward responded even if he did panic. It will be interesting to hear what's been going on his dear little OCD brain next chapter. I LOVE OCDWARD!!!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
Wow, this was torturous! You make us wait for like FOREVER for an update. Then you give us a long, lengthy chapter with all of 25 sentences dealing with Edward and Bella being together. You are meeeeaaaan! At this point, I don't give a rat's ass about Rose, Emmett, Charlie and Alice. Bella and Edward's interactions are electric. Edward's craziness is addictive. Bella by herself is pretty dull in comparison. You have written so little of this great story and to spend so much time on periphery characters and Bella without Edward was disappointing. I really hope you update quickly. I'm looking forward to more!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
hey cool chap =]
Reviewer: Greend (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
She's going to spontaniously combust if you don't stop being such a tease. Looking forward to the next chapter, BYE.
Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
I've just read all three chapters in one go and was just about to give up when at last they finally got together at the end there (although it was a bit strange). A couple of comments - I like that you don't duplicate scenes (hisPOV then herPOV etc) I don't mind a bit of over lap but complete repeat scenes drive me mad. There is one thing that bugs me though and it is dream sequences (especially when they don't have carnal knowledge of each other as there could be all sorts of weird things wrong with teh others peron body or 'performance').... I kind of think it's an excuse to add a Lemon just for the sake of it. If it's just a couple of sentences of fantasising then OK but these took up a lot of space. I kind of think you would have been better to move the story along then get them together for real time Lemons.... However this is just my opinion about content - your writing however is first class
Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Dead Kennedys & Cake in the Park
nope, no yelling. it's awesome, truly. i am interested to see how they work all this out. and of course, i'm sure when they make lemonade it will be the most delicious blend of tart and sweet. yep, im a pervling like that. it's a great story. i'm hoping jazz and alice get to meet to at the restaurant...
Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
Are you sure this is your first time writing? It's great, full, well rounded and very descriptive. I love the wording, every sentence is as interesting as the characters you present. It's fabulous!! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: feydruss (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Confusion, Coffee and a Cookie
yay
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Dead Kennedys & Cake in the Park
I think it's great - interesting and sexy. The more you write, the more involved we get. Please update soon!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
I just started this fic but I really like it so far. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Dead Kennedys & Cake in the Park
Good to see they managed to have a conversation and that he sounded very normal!!! He's obviously very intelligent and that often comes across as "weirdness" because very intelligent people don't think like everyone else. Still saw his OCD tendencies though, which is good because I like Quirkyward.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
I thought that was great. A little bit of everything - some angst, lemons, Shyward and OCDward altogether. What's not to like.
Reviewer: purplexbuttercup (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Dead Kennedys & Cake in the Park
Oh gosh, this story makes me giddy in a happy way. :)
I really don't have anything negative to say.
Can't wait for you to update again!
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