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Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 01:37 PM · On: This is Your Life

I'm glad you didn't bring Jacob (at least in this version). I don't like him :P

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 11:55 AM · On: This is Your Life

hey really cool chap =] it was really sweet with the party and stuff =]

Reviewer: kellyodonoghue (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:12 AM · On: This is Your Life

really good cant wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 12:35 AM · On: This is Your Life

can't wait for more

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:27 PM · On: This is Your Life

Great update bb! I was waiting for Charlie and Jake to pop out too, but at least I was correct in assuming that we'd see them at some point...

Can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Don't Change Your Plans

Oh I just love Edward for putting in his two cents worth and feel it will be a party that Bella will love! I don't know if I can take the suspense for to long...so please don't leave me hanging to long...Pretty PLEASE

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Don't Change Your Plans

Hey cool chap its sweet to see how much alie cares =]

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Don't Change Your Plans

I think that Edward's taking Bella home to Washington for her actual birthday. Just a thought from the earlier conversation. AND I think she'll love the party, and it will be filled with some surprise guests...

Hehe, love it! Can't wait for your next update!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Spectacular Views

Wow so much going on...

Glad Edward brought Bella over...LOL Alice, birthday parties, and dresses...OH MY! Poor Bella is gonna go insane. Wonder what's up with Jake?

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Spectacular Views

Wow so much going on...

Glad Edward brought Bella over...LOL Alice, birthday parties, and dresses...OH MY! Poor Bella is gonna go insane. Wonder what's up with Jake?

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Spectacular Views

...

i dont like the jacob situation...

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Spectacular Views

Sweet chapter. Is Jacob going to muck it all up? It's okay if he does but I like the fluff

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Spectacular Views

Great update bb! I wonder if Jake will reply...

I can't wait for your next one!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Inches and Falling

Wow a wedding to plan and a proclomation of love...How could I not love this! It was very interesting how this all came about. Glad Edward is not as anxious and is finding some peace. I can't wait to see where thier relationship goes from here.



Author's Response:

 Thanks so much! It's definitely all been a process for them.  There are actually only like six chapters left, so they have some more ground to cover :)

Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: marybeth315kcfan (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Inches and Falling

New to the story.....Love it so far. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear that you like it, that's really nice. 

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Inches and Falling

heeheee:)♥

that was great!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Inches and Falling

qhey cool chap loved alice



Author's Response:

Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:28 PM · On: There Is A Light That Never Goes Out

Not over reacting there is a huge difference between a brooklyn-ite and and a manhattanite. Huge. Plus Edward lives above 14th street and that is a major difference (even if it is just a few streets). She was lucky to be able to get a cab to brooklyn though.

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Waiting

Love the burger place at the parker meridian but personally i prefer the Five Guys just down the street. yum. Also great chapter and you have fantastic taste in music.

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Inches and Falling

Aww! They finally said the "ILY'S" Yay! Alice and Jasper are getting hitched! But what ever happened to Rosalie and Emmett? Shouldn't they have been there at dinner too?

I can't wait for your next update, great job!

Author's Response:

I can't remember if I posted the explanation to them on FanFic, here, or in a comment to someone... but basically after I wrote the chapter with Rosalie and Emmett I knew that I didn't want to use them as occasional props and I wasn't interested in really exploring the characters.  So, it was pretty much a mistake to use them in that chapter and I should probably delete them out of it.  Sorry for the confusion!

Thanks so much for the kind words! :) Great review as always.

Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Inches and Falling

so i downloaded the FUN. album and i'm loving it!! ALSO loving this story!



Author's Response:

!!! YES!!! fun. is sooooooooooo good! Do you like the Format, too? Nate (the lead singer/ I believe main lyricist of both) is a genius.  I listened to the CD on my drive home today and I was in the best mood :) "The Gambler" would be a great song for a first dance at a wedding.  I'm so random!

Thanks so much for reading and for the review! I'm really glad you like it :)

Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Brighter Than Sunshine

Very nice chapter! I love lemons...


Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, as always! The chapter's in the validation queue, so hopefully it'll be posted soon :)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Brighter Than Sunshine

Hey cool chap =] i loved the ending it was so sweet =]



Author's Response:

Thank you! Oh, Edward.  If only he were a real boy :)

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Brighter Than Sunshine

I had missed several chapters and had to catch up.  This story took some unexpected twists -- that surprised me.  I liked it!

Good to see things progressing between Edward and Bella.  It will be intersting to see how they do now back in NYC.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that it surprised you! One of my major focuses is to keep things fresh and to keep the reader guessing; there are definitely some familiar ExB fan-fic elements, but I like adding twists :)

Thanks so much for reading and for the review!

Reviewer: kellyjaxn (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:38 PM · On: History Sticks to Your Feet

LOL!! Smuttery. Nice word. Makes me giggle like a 12 year old. BTW, loving that you're including music. :)

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