awe! poor paul :-(. really like your spin on him.  hope he and rach kiss and make up soon.

I swear I've read this story somewhere else. Like Fanfiction.net, maybe? Any ways, It's such a shame that a piece of art like this has been abandoned. I love this story. I think it is the second time I've read it and I can never get enough of it. Please!! Update soon!!

I have been enjoying your story since the begining.  I look forward to each new posting.

if they phase at a certain age and it was first Sam, and then Jared and Paul, then Embry and then Jake... i think it has to do something with age too, so i think Paul is a little bit older than sixteen, not that much more but some...

Author's Response:

It's a common misconception that Paul's much older than Jake - I certainly though he was before I wrote this fic! The books actually say that he's the same age, though...and when you consider the fact that first Seth (15) and then Collin and Brady (13) join the pack, imprinting can't have everything to do with age.

Hope you're enjoying the story! And thanks for the message - hope that clears up the question xxx :)

*tap tap tap* Heeeelllloooooooo???? Are you there?? I was just kinda wonderin' if there was going to maybe, possibly be any more to this fic? Please? Pretty please with all the sugar, cherries, chocolate covered strawberries and whipped cream (the real kind!) on top?

 

*bats eyelashes*

I just finished reading the whole story. It's awsome. i love Paul <3 and i love the way you write the characters. And yeah Rachel must be intresting to write since we dont know what her character is like. Im just loving this fic. Plz plz plz update soon :)

I don't watch/read another vampire series. But I do read another shapeshifter series by Rachel Vincent. Check it out... kick ass. P.S. This story rocks. I really wanted to see Sam & Leah get into, but I'm kind of a Leah lover. Well, Team Shapeshifter in general, but I do love Leah. So snarky in here. Love it! <3 Also, Paul is freaking hilarious as are just about everyone else! <3 <3 <3

Amazing. I never really thought about Paul & Rachel much. I hope you give Leah a little something else. I always feel like she gets a bad rap from all the guys. It's not her fault Stephenie is a bitch... am I right? lol Anyway, love your story... Now, on to the next chapter! <3

"I peeked." Perfect!

Great chapter!  So happy for the update.  Seems like Rachel is really getting the hots for Paul, eh?

On to the two wolf packs now! 

Aw, they like each other. :) Great chap

Really and truly--American's never say "fortnight"!  lol!  We just say "two weeks".  :-)  (My bro-in-law is from Cornwall and he told me how long a fortnight is since I had no clue!) 

Things are moving right along and it's very enjoyable.  Can see that we're progressing to the splitting of the pack......looking forward to more Paul/Rachel time in the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

I don't think anyone ever really realises just how different American and English actually are until you're trying to work with both...I've learnt such a lot from writing fanfiction! I hadn't thought about it, but 'fortnight' is 'fourteen nights'...I just like it as a word lol XD

The chapter I've just submitted (sorry it's been so long! I suck) has a lot of Rachel and Paul time, and it's probably one of favourites so far! Thank you so much for your review - I love hearing from you! xxx :)