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Reviews For Zenith
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Nightmares

Bella's a witch right? A charmed one? When will she change? Let's get the show on the road please?

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Scab

Hells yeah. Jacob can dazzle with the best of them

Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Into the Woods

Aw I can't wait! LOL Normaly any story that has Bella and Jake romance I turn it down lol but Ireally like your story so far XD Can't wait for more chapters!



Author's Response:

It brings this huge, glowing smile to my face when I hear that E/B people give my story a chance even though there's a good, hulking chunk of J/B action. :D

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Into the Woods

nice...i love your story.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for letting me know!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Into the Woods

Welll I happen to like the bond you have placed between Bella and Jake, so I hope Eddie doesn't ruin it.  What happens with Leah? 

 



Author's Response:

Eddie, Eddie, Eddie. So many mixed feelings it seems.

And Jake will--very colorfully--let you know what's going on with Leah next chappie. (I just uploaded it.)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Into the Woods

14!!! We are almost there!  I can't wait.... Great update.  I have to admit that I am a little afraid of Edward staying away so long.  I can't wait for him to come home to her!  Great update!



Author's Response:

Okay, I'm gonna be honest w/ you.  Edward DOES return in chapter fourteen, but the chapter got soooo long (five pages longer than any other one I've written) that he's not in it very long.  :(  He's part of the cliffie, and then there's much more of him in 15. (But you're the only person I'm letting in on this tidbit of info.) I'll do my best to post chapter 15 not too long after 14 to make up for it.

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Into the Woods

ok i'm hooked! i lov it!

Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Into the Woods

EEEEEEEEEEEEE I loved this chapter!

So good! You had me all worried about Bella! Poor thing :(

I loved Embry being the one to find her. I like the special bond they seemed to have made in this chapter. Gee, Jake as a boyfriend and Embry as a bff? I think I hate Bella :p

Chapter fourteen? So soon? Boo.

Heh.



Author's Response:

LOL! People in general have certainly changed their tunes about Edward. Earlier I thought people would throw confetti when he came back, now I'm expecting they'll be throwing pop bottles.  I might have to hire some security...

Yes!  More of Embry and his amazing self in the next chapter!

Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Into the Woods

I really liked this chapter!  Great job!  I am so excited you started posting updates again!



Author's Response:

lolz...I didn't realize I'd ever STOPPED posting updates.

Slow and steady wins the race!

*silence*

Right?

*crickets*

Yeah, no...

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Into the Woods

Love the chapter!  Can't wait for more!  Is this a B/J or B/E story?



Author's Response:

Well, obviously there's been some B/J and mention of B/E, but we'll just have to see what circumstances come up and what Bella decides. I can't give it away!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Into the Woods

Forks hospital has a Dr. Tines?  Was that intentional?  Good story.  Can't wait to see how it plays out when Edward returns



Author's Response:

I figure that a hospital has multiple doctors, so I felt okay with introducing a new one. Hope that sounds realistic.

Thank you for the lovely compliment!

Reviewer: crymzn (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Into the Woods

LOL good chapter!! Jacob is awesome

>.> Edward... Eww >.>

Author's Response:

lol...I think I've scared most of the Edward fans away.  Which is sad, because I really like Edward, and I'm doing my best right now to write him in character. (It's been a bit of a struggle.)

Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Into the Woods

Boooooo Edward!!!!!!! I don't really like Edward very much or at all really!! hahaha but I love all the rest of the Cullen Guys!!! great chapters keep updating!!!1



Author's Response:

Mmmm...Cullen guys...sigh...

Awe, give Edward a chance. I might just change your mind about him!

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Into the Woods

Oh man, Leah messed her up pretty good. I bet she feels horrible about it though.

I'm glad she finally told Jake how she feels about him.

But anyways, that was a cute end to the chapter. It made me giggle. :)

Can't wait for more!

 



Author's Response:

You'll get a couple of different perspectives on Leah next chapter.

Glad you like the ending! Drugged Bella is a fun Bella. ;)

Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Into the Woods

whoo hoo awesome story



Author's Response:

Thank you much for reading!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Forgiveness

hey its been afew weeks and I've been hanging on this cliff you left me on please get on with th story it was going good now it's stalled write i check ever so often to see if its been continued please give us a hand we're hanging here.



Author's Response:

Okay, um, I submitted the next chapter about a week and a half ago, but I sorta didn't put my validator's name in the chapter title (yikes! Because I just found out this is a pretty big no no).  I just fixed that, so hopefully It has a better chance of getting validated now.

Please don't slip and plummet to your death!  I need all of my readers I can get alive. ;)

Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Forgiveness

Well, I must say this is a very interesting take.  You're right, most of the stories are Jake attacking, and like you, I cannot picture it happening.

 

Good twist, and I look forward to how this plays out.

Reviewer: IndieTokhie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Forgiveness

This is great! can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

So glad that you're enjoying this!  I submitted the chapter a few days ago, so it shouldn't be too long before it's posted.

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Forgiveness

It's a different twist.  I don't think I've read a story where Leah ever attacks Bella.  i like it.  I just hope the damage isn't too severe; then the story becomes Bella recovering.  Anyway...glad to see you posting again.



Author's Response:

No worries, I would never let something like that consume the storyline.

Thankyousomuch for taking the time to let me know you're reading!

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Forgiveness

I'd decided to give this story another chance when I saw that it had been update and I am now effectively intrigued with its unique story line. Please update soon; I'm definitely hooked.



Author's Response:

Yay for second chances!

I've already submitted the next chapter.

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Forgiveness

I can't believe you feel compelled to defend your plot - it fits perfectly and has been built up to be possible.  It felt absolutely natural and I loved it.



Author's Response:

I love my readers, and I just like to make sure we're all on the same page (aside from the obvious fact that I already KNOW what's going to happen).  It makes my heart soar to hear that you think the plot is believable!

Thank you.

Reviewer: JasperBella0015 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Forgiveness

OH MY GOD, THIS STORY IS SO GOOD. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE SOME MORE. I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!

IF THE RATING WAS HIGHER THEN 10 THEN I WOULD GIVE YOU LIKE A 50; IT WAS THAT GREAT!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

*staggers back under the weight of such a magnificent complement*

Wow. I...gee...wow.  THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Look at you making me feel all good about myself. :)

As far as more stories...there is multi-chaptered one in the works for when I finish Zenith. Also, you can check me out on LJ, the username is: majestamoniet.  There are a couple  of my Twilight one-shots there.

Thanks!

Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Forgiveness

*gasp*

A new chapter?! No way!

Yayyy!

Poor Leah :(

Ohhh what's gonna happen with Bella??? Post again soon!



Author's Response:

Just submited the next chappie, so you'll find out (hopefully) soon!  And I agree:  Poor Leah :(

Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Forgiveness

LOVED IT! ! !



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for letting me know! It keeps me going.

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Forgiveness

This is a great story that I am absolutely loving. The humor is refreshing, because it matches perfectly to the humor between Bella and Jacob in the actual books.

Great job on the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

You think I'm funny???  That's fantastic!  I try so hard...and sometimes I fail splendiferously.

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