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Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
Another great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! These reviews really do make me so happy!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great again!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really excited to hear about so many people enjoying this story. It's easy to be intimidated by the "big name" authors and their 10,000 reviews, but I am getting more comfortable and less nervous because of all the wonderful feedback that I've gotten. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
A great start!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hilarious!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Alice, hyper pixie that she is, is perfect for Disney!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hey sweet chap =] loved that we got to see a glance at my 3 fav sexiest book characters
Reviewer: strokesfan84 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
Ha! I love this story! My cousin is doing an internship at Disney, I'm definetely telling her about this story!
Reviewer: LovelyLamb (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yay, update! I so have been waiting for this. I know, I know, patience is a virtue ... but not for me. Sorry! :) I'm so thrilled the story continues. :)
Me, personally, I'm definitely not throwing up over Jasper's use of the word 'darling', so no defense neccessary! I kind of have a thing for the South of the U.S., including Southern men and their hot accents. Therefore I would love to read more of it... *hint*hint* (I'm from Germany and German men don't talk anywhere near as sexily as Americans.)
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 4
yeah! edward is captian jack. hot!
Reviewer: DramaVamp (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh I love your story! Now I really want to work in Disney World. Keep going, can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Your story is great please please update more can't wait to see what happens! LOL
Author's Response: I am finishing up a contest entry and then I will work on chapter 5. I'm 6700 words into said entry and the limit is 10,000, so it shouldn't be as long between chapters this time! Thanks for the review. They encourage me to write faster!
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter! You write the "girl time" between Rose, Bella and Alice very well. The dialogue is super and I can't wait to see what happens when they run into the boys!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. I am excited that you like the dialogue. I was most nervous about writing dialogue. I am going to get to Chapter 4 tonight or tommorow. I have had the stye from hell and haven't felt much like writing the last week. Thanks again!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ewhh Will Ferrell from Elf, reminds me of my sister's ex-husband! The girls playing MASH was really sweet. Very cute chapter. Bella would fly much better if she took a xanax or a valium before the flight.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. I love Will Ferrell :) My mom was my inspiration for Bella's flight anxiety. She does take a valium before flying now :) Thanks and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
I liked that this chapter set up the story and both Bella and Rosalie got screwed with the assignments. Working at Disney World makes me think of the Disney 10th Anniversary Special from 1981 (we had it on VHS tape). In the special, a young Michael Keaton works at Disney World and must do every job in the park in order to become a Vice President. He was also hot for Dana Plato. I kid you not.
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey, really cute start! I loved the part where Charlie was telling Bella that English majors were a dime a dozen. So true and as a former music major, I sympathize! Hard to convince those dad's that the desired major can bring in an income.
"Alice really was born to work at Disney. Everything about her screamed fairy tale - from her pixie frame to her squeaky soprano voice to the way she approached everything in life with manic childlike glee."
Great sentence and I look forward to reading more of their adventures!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
"Fuck the magic, Bella. It's too damn hot." - funniest line ever! I'll have to remember that one for next month when I'm there;)
I really love this story. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a possible Captain Jack Sparrowward, LOL.
Author's Response: :) I'm jealous that you are going to Disney World next month :) I'm going in May and can't wait! My kids will be almost 6 and almost 3, which will be so fun. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'm glad you like the story.
Reviewer: coco1984 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hm, I kinda DO see them as Belle from Beauty and the Beast, Tinkerbelle and Cinderella. It will be interesting to see how this story plays out :) Nice start!
Reviewer: mimitwilight (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
this is really good! very original plot line :D it made me smile and yes, alice does certainly belong in disney! keep on going :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. Your review made me smile. Thanks again!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 3
Good chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Reviews really are the best! They make me want to write faster. :)
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
The girls are hilarious, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that I made you laugh. This has been such a fun process, and I too am looking forward to see where this takes me next :)
Reviewer: LovelyLamb (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oooh, the suspense is killing me.... bring on the boys, please!!! :) No, seriously, I'm thrilled that the guys will finally show up in the next chapter but you sure know how to let the girls have fun on their own, too. :) The whole 'who gets to sleep next to the window' thing? Hilarious!!! This is quickly becoming one of my favorite new stories and that although nothing major has even happened yet. I can't wait to read what you have in store for our lovely ladies... :)
Author's Response: Thank you loyal reader :) I am looking forward to introducing the guys. I will start working on chapter 4 tomorrow. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
I loved the elevator part...good job!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, they really do make my day :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
hey cool chap =] lol rose made me laugh in the meeting thing lol =]
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I needed a smile tonight and you gave it to me :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
This looks like it's going to be a fun story. You have Bella, Alice and Rosalie in character without making them too by-the-book. I look forward to more.
Reviewer: VoraciousReader (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 2
WDW is my favorite place to vacation! My daughter (also a nurse) and I were there in January and had a great time. Can't wait to see what kind of trouble the six of them will get into. I do have a question though, your story has an NC-17 rating so....will somebody just get silly or will they be fucking Goofy??!! Can't wait to find out!! LOL
I am not a writer.........just a voracious reader!!
Author's Response: LOL! Ahh, the rating. I am aspiring to pop my smut-writing cherry with this story, so we shall see. My story is meant to be lighthearted and funny, but I like to read smut, so I'm going to try to write it as well. Bear with me, I'll get there. Your review made me giggle ;) Thanks for reading. Maybe you can beta my first smut chapter.
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