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Reviewer: jgonzales304 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wait. I'm confused. What was Bella's "Oh shit," referring to? I think I may have glossed over that part.
Reviewer: scooby9932 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hey, there! I've followed you over from the disboards. Hee Hee - you now have your very own cyber stalker. J/K :D
I've managed to catch up finally! I'm loving this story - especially like the dialogue & back/forth between the characters! I can't wait to read more.
Dawn
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 4
you haven't given up on this have you?? I love this story and I'm dying to see what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 4
yay! Edward is jack sparrow! SWEET! I should have figured that out with all the love for my depp and all...i thought he was going to be prince charming. I am so glad you didnt go that route! Too predictable. But jack sparrow??? perfect!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
oh poor alice...no makeup or jewlrey...so harsh LOL
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 2
mmm johnny depp
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
I found this on the review for a review thread and i have to say that it sounds like it could be rather funny i am looking forward to seeing what you have planned
Reviewer: FanOfTheFang (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
They attended cast parties, and marveled at drag queens who could perform standing back flips in 6 inch stiletto heals.
Was that a call out to REnt? love that musical
Author's Response: It was actually a reference to my college days. My friends and I would go to "straight night" at the local gay bar and watch the drag shows. One of the performers was famous for this particular move, and I've never forgotten how impressed I was. I'm totally one of those losers that's never even seen RENT. I will have to remedy that soon. Thanks for writing! :)
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 4
mmm....southern boys melt my butter.
Author's Response: I agree :)
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 3
omg, "fuck the magic" had me dying with laughter. I had to stop reading for a bit I was laughing so hard.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for telling me that. It made my day. I'm so intimidated by writing humor, and I'm glad that I made someone laugh. Thanks for taking time to review. :)
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
mmmm....Captain Jack. makes my toes tingle.
Author's Response: mmmm....mine as well :)
Reviewer: lovemyedward (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
ha ha, ride maintenence! Did she have prior work experience at a garage?
Author's Response: I guess this was kind of a nod to the Rosalie character in the series. She was always working on cars, so it seemed to fit :) I also felt like it was pretty opposite of the kind of job she wanted. :)
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hahaha. Captain Jack is sexy. This is making me want to visit Disney World... I haven't in 18 or so years. And my husband has never been!
BTW after reading the first three chapters, I had a dream I was offered the role as Snow White and Rosalie was pissed. Ha. So congratulations, your story made it to my dreams.
Author's Response: What a cool review! Seriously, this makes me smile! It's cool to know that I've infiltrated your dreams :) I agree about Captain Jack, and about the need to visit Disney. My family will be making the trip down there in April, and we can't wait! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
Sounds like it's going to start heating up! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have just finished up a contest entry and will now start focusing on Chapter 5. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just had to read this story...we're going to Disney World in a week! :D
Author's Response: Yay! Let me know how it went. We're going back in April and I can't wait!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 4
I am a true disney lover! I am so excited you have decided to write about disney world! I cant get enough of it and I think I would love to do the summer job there! That would be a ton of fun ... and you get to meet people from all over the world ... and you get to work in the happiest place on earth! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: raindrop0620 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
you have combined my two favorite things: Twilight and Disney! Great job so far, can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: Leilal (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
I have been transported to my dreamworld Mahalo=TY hanahou Aloha,Leilani
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 4
I am aDisney lover all the way ... i absolutely love disney ! i am so excited to read more of this story !!!!
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 4
yes! I knew he would be Jack!!I hope Edward does it better than the guy I saw last time I was there...
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 4
Cute chapter! Edward as Jack Sparrow is pretty hot!
Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 4
Adventure land indeed!!!LOL. Can't wait to see whzt sparks fly
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 1
Promising start :)
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