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Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Somewhere Down in Texas

Great story. I am from the south as well and catch myself saying things that are very "southern". I am so interested in finding out the why's behind Bella's comments and thoughts. I think it's great that the Whitlocks are helping take care of her and I know she loves Jay (or thinks she does) however, he is not good for her as a boyfriend and it seems he is trying to keep her from Edward. Is he jealous or just being protective????? Waiting to find out.

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Somewhere Down in Texas

wonderful chapter, shows a lot of potnetial, I can't wait to see what happens, expecially with Emmett acting as the protective big brother, and Jasper acting like the jealous best friend, I think Edward will have a long way to go before he gets to know Bella and make anytime with her.

A lot of potential, I can't wait to see what you do with it, please don't leave us waiting to long for the next update.

Reviewer: eliana cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Somewhere Down in Texas

Hi, my name is eliana and I'd just like to say that I am really enjoying your story. I'm from texas too but I'm live in miami,FL. What I loved most about your story is how it reminds me of my 1st home. You're an amazing author and I can't wait to read the rest of it. :)

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