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Reviewer: brunette-lady23 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
Just finished the last chapter and even though I don't think you're planning on updating any more I just wanted to let you know... I loved it! I really enjoyed how Dove and Edward's relationship started to develop and I think you dealt with the Cullen's reation to their relationship realistically. This is such a sweet story. I would love to read more so if you ever feel like updating please do! I would love to read what happens next and I'm sure others out there would too.
Reviewer: brunette-lady23 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: Dance
I have just read the first three chapters and I am in love with this story! If I didn't need to get some sleep then I would carry on reading but alas I'll have to wait til tomorrow. Anyway I realise that this story isn't completed and that you haven't updated in a while but I look forward to reading the rest that you have posted.
Reviewer: frickandfrack09 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
I am in love with Edward and Dove!!! Keep it Up
Reviewer: lily_moon (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
Lovely story so far.. please print more..
Reviewer: escargotpudding (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
Oh my goodnes. Just sat here and read all of your chapters in one sitting. Please update soon! There is definately a lack of good Edward/OC fics, and yours is amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Yeah I'm not sure if a lot of people particularly like Edward/OC fics because of no Bella. This story unfortunately has a pretty small following, but I still love writing it, and am glad when other people stumble upon it and like what they read :).
New chapter will be out sooon.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: eamcims (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
This is so well written. And I absolutely love the characters. Your Edward is perfect, as is Dove.
Author's Response: Awww thank you. My Edward is perfect to me but i'm so glad he's perfect to you too. Heheh. There's so many different characterisations of him out there! I try to keep it close to the book, but with the liberty of exploring a lot of stuff unsuitable for young readers :)
He so dreamy.
Where was I? Oh yeah. Thanks for the review :D
Sam.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
So glad to see you have updated, love this chapter, though I expext some rough times ahead between the sisters.
Author's Response: Thanks, i'm glad to have updated too :D
Oh there'll be rough times ahead, yessiree. Perhaps next chapter, maybe the chap after, there will be big stuff happnin'.
Thanks for your review and glad you're enjoying it.
xoxo
Sam
Reviewer: deargirl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
whaaaat?! oh, juliet. girl, who can blame you? i cannot wait to see what happens with this!
i have so many things i need to say about this chapter. first of all, when you said something about a shower scene, i had no idea--NO IDEA--it was gonna be that HOT. plus, it kinda made me laugh. i guess i never thought about someone living 100 and some odd years without even a good wank. poor fellow. dove, have mercy on him and TAP THAT. second, "muffin" and "honeybun" happen to be my two most favorite pet names in the world. so, yeah, edward, get used to it for when we fall in love. also, i like that dove likes jessica enough to have her around. i mean, i don't think jessica will ever be the consummate bestie, that's just not really how she's ever going to be written, but it's nice that dove can have a friend. and finally, and most importantly! NANAAAAAAA! in honor of our favorite dancing fruit:
It's peanut butter jelly time, peanut butter jelly time, peanut butter jelly time
(Chorus:)
Where he at 4x
There he go 4x
Peanut butter jelly 4x
Do the peanut butter jelly, peanut butter jelly,
Peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat 2x
(Chorus)
Now, break it down and freeze 4x
(Chorus)
Now tic tac toe (uh-huh)
Tic tac toe (let's go)
Tic tac toe (you got it)
Tic tac toe (let's ride)
(Chorus)
Now, freestyle, freestyle, freestyle, freestyle, freestyle, your style 2x
Where he at 4x
There he go 4x
Author's Response: THERE HE GO, THERE HE GO, THERE HE GO, THERE HE GO. You know, I never actually knew what he was saying, so I just said DAIGO, DAIGO. Hhaha, yep that reference was totally for you.
The shower sceeeneee. Hahah! I have to admit, I giggled like a little girl when I started writing it. Then I got REALLY into it. Edward, you studmuffin.
I'm enjoying Dove/Jess. They're a bit different, but they get along well, and it could be a great friendship. Also i have plans for Jess. She'll be one lucky girl by the time I'm done with her. *zzzzzzip*
xoxo
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
Oh wow. Sisters......Wow. Can't wait for more....
Author's Response: :D Who can blame her? Sigh.
Thanks for the review
Sam
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 9: Everything Reminds Me Of Her
I had just been wishing that you would submit a new chapter foer this, and then I looked in the queue and there it was! Good job. Edward's discoveries in the shower were both sexy and kind of sweet, and the situation with Juliet really complicates things. Good buildup of tension. I'll keep my eye out for the next update!
Author's Response: Hi!
Glad you like it! I'll try and update more frequently now. Life has been hectic.
Thanks heaps for validating :D
Sam.
Reviewer: Fanfickled (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
Sam,
I loved the way Edward left the notes on her notebook...so cute. So, Aliceeeeeeee saw didn't she, huh? Yeah, she so did! Hehehe
I know I tell you every damn time I review, but jeez girl, you got the talent!! I so love this fic.
BTW I have your new banner in my siggy, I hope you don't mind. It's first up and it really stands out. Good job!
Update soon...pleaseeeeeeee?
xoxoxo
Reviewer: deargirl (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
hot.
i'll be back to leave a better review, but, uh, i have some things to tend to first.
Reviewer: eamcims (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
I love this.
Reviewer: mothlights (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
Another great chapter. The family meeting has such a different dynamic with Dove actually there to explain herself. And I love love love the notes throughout the day. They're sweet and a little sexy. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
OOO OOO SHE TOTALLY SAW THEM DOING IT!!!!! AM I RIGHT!?!
god i love this. i love bella, most of the time, but dove is fuck awesome.
i love this lady, i really really do!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
Wow! I'm glad you've updated can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
Really enjoying this story, its very very good! So looking forward to your next update! Like your Banner too!
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: Words Out
I'm so glad you updated; I've been missing this story. I loved the whole thing with the notebook--how clever of both you and Edward! I like that your Edward lets his lust show a little more and takes some liberties. I did sort of wonder what happened with Dove in the cafeteria after Edward outed them, though...will you write about it later? Oh, and I liked the CPOV, and Dove perving on Edward's dad. I perv on Carlisle frequently. Good chapter!
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 7: Boyfriendorwhatever
hellooooo new addiction. nice to meet you.
Author's Response: Hellooooo to you too. And welcome!
New chappy up very soon.
Reviewer: RainerNight (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Goodbye
this story has me in tears, gah. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME WOMAN!?
Reviewer: Fanfickled (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Boyfriendorwhatever
Sam,
That was epic girl......what a brilliant chapter. You are just so damn talented and I wish more people were aware of this fantastic and clever fic of yours.
I love where this is going I really do! You're so clever!
Thanks I love it and I look forward to reading each new chapter...no matter how long!
Lesley xx
Author's Response: xoxoxoxox
:)
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Welcome
Okay, I love Dove! Hope that doesn't sound too cheesy! LOL! The scene in the parking lot, and her putting the top down? Priceless! I would have loved to see Edward's face too! LMAO!
Reviewer: reejero (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 7: Boyfriendorwhatever
The facebook note had me rolling on the floor!! Awesome
Reviewer: reejero (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 5: Goodbye
LOL This is good..
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 5: Goodbye
Wow. Dove is really endearing. She seems like a great match for Edward. That would seriously be frustrating. Great writing! I especially love the colors and imagery you use. The musical, colorful thougths, too sound wonderful. If I could read minds, I imagine that is what I would like to hear.
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