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Reviewer: klumsybella31297 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

i really liked it. it made me cry but its very good. cant wait 4 the next chapter

Author's Response:
I'm glad that you loved the story. Unfortunately it was a one shot. I have more one shots and have continued Second Chances and Love Lies and Lullabies on fanfiction.net. Here is the link. http://www.fanfiction.net/~aerialla1 I look forward to hearing from you there as well.

Aerialla

Reviewer: Niniel (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

Hm, I can see why Edward would kill himself because of Bella's death, but I don't see the rest of the family following his example.

Obviously they would be incredibly hurt and sad I am sure, loosing both Bella and Edward, but they would after all still have their soul mates. I would have liked it a whole lot better if you had ended it with Edward off'ing himself and then had the rest live.

Reviewer: averageblonde (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

That's horrible! Even if Bella DID die, Dcarlisle would never agree to that, they wouldn't have gone to Jacob, and Edward would have wanted revenge for the obvious murdur!!! Thogh I suppose it waswell-written...

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

I think people should warn readers at the start if it is going to have a sucky ending.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

This is so unbearably sweet! I love how you included the lion and lamb thing on the tombstone!

However, I just don't understand two things: How Bella died, and I don't understand the crater and bomb or whatever.

Anyway, keep up the fabulous work!

Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Bella died due to the fall down the stairs. She broke her neck. The bomb was a suicide pact. It blew up the Cullen house while they were all inside.

Reviewer: livin_it (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

Wow.just...wow.

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

How grim and sad! But I guess everyone gets tired of happy endings from time to time. I just wish I knew if the explosion killed Edward or if he got to die some other way.

Author's Response:
Edward died with the Cullens. It was a suicide pact for them all.

Reviewer: sjm300 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

Umm........well, that was different, and very disturbing.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

speechless.

Reviewer: DaintyGoddess (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

I'm not sure I understand. How did Bella die? Why was there a bomb and who set it off?

Author's Response:
Bella died from the fall down the stairs. Jacob was the one who set the bomb. The bomb was a suicide pact between the Cullens. The bomb went off at the exact minute Bella died killing them all.

Sorry that I confused you, thanks for the review.

Aerialla

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Nine Thirty-Three

Oh. My. Word.

I didn't expect a bomb.

Goodness.

Evil? No. I have this little one-shot fic wherein I kill them both off, too. Sometimes, it's positively cathartic. ;-)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I was feeling rather morbid. With the stories I have going on right now and two future ones, it is no wonder that I wanted to kill them off for once.

Aerialla

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