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Reviewer: djcarnation (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2018 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
i hope u plan on completing this story.yor off to a great start.
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
great..... i like tutrtles
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2011 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm yours
nice
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm yours
i do love you since you didnt make jake imprint on anybody
nice chapie. on to the next
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: Space heaters are my favorite
am i invited to the party? i would be devastated if not. i want paul to be ther if jacob is taken. 0_o
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Space heaters are my favorite
am i invited to the party? i would be devastated if not. i want paul to be ther if jacob is taken. 0_o
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Stupid Babbling Idiot
i would have told jessica this: "look jess. i know that jacob is attractive but if you didnt notice that day by my truck he was leaning forward to kiss me. now i know we used to be friends but when you move in on a girls boyfriend that girl is sure to get pissed off. see you at the party."
but thats me. your style is awesome
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 5: The best 'hello' ever
sweet. great job. on to the next
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 4: Proper goodnight
i do not like jessica and lauren is a queen bee with a side of itch
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: A good day
super delux awesomeness with a taco filled with karate kid awesomenessfulness full of awesome
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 2: Survivor after a shipwreck
and the night went on. do i detect romance in the future for then or is it my stomach longing for a taco? probably both
Reviewer: Bella_Gurl_ (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 02:31 AM · On: You are not alone
great chapie. my taco and me aprove. (tacos are my random food)
Reviewer: MrsJacobBlack0028 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
I think Jessica should get thrown in the ocean, just because it'd be funny and she deserves it. But I was so disappointed to see that the story was over for now...I'm really into it!!
Reviewer: Lyra810509 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
Good story so far; are you still writing it?
Reviewer: JakeandBells (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
write mooore .. please? =)
Reviewer: JakeandBells (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm yours
:'D
Reviewer: ShadowPast (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
I added this story to my favorites even before I read past the first chapter. Edward is pretty, but real men don't sparkle. They smolder. Please write more.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2011 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
Are you going to write any more of this story? If not I will deliete it from my favorites. Thank you!
Reviewer: mal005 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 3: A good day
Ah, Jake is soo sweet! He's the best. Sure wished someone loved me that much.
Reviewer: mal005 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 09:28 AM · On: You are not alone
Poor Bella. I hope she wakes up soon and relizes what a gem Jake is.
Reviewer: Kelinafication (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 12:07 AM · On: You are not alone
I love this story!!!!! Any idea when the next update will be???!!!
Reviewer: cloudshadow22 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
Just discovered your story recently and enjoyed reading your "take" on J&B. It is nice to see them just being teens and not having to deal with all the adult problems that they have to face in other stories. Bella's insecurities are so realistic. Hope that you have found another job, that life is treating you better and that you plan to return to this story. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Navari (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
This is a really good story! Please, please write more!!
Reviewer: yemonja (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: Rollercoaster
Girl, this story is great. I am so ti-red of stories where she agonizes of losing Edward for 1/3 of the story and never tries to get her swerve on with Jake. On a side note, I know where you are personally, I quit my job about two months ago because I hated it as well and hated my boss because she was not managing the place well and it has taken a toll on me...until I found fan-fic! I discovered Twilight and Jacob Black during the first few weeks of my unemployment; I used to read Backstreet Boys, Nysnc, and Hanson fanfic when I was a younger. I have even been inspired to write myself. Just as soon as I was ready to begin putting novel writing next to job hunting, I was offered a job and had to put novel writing on hold! But please keep going with this story, it is excellent. "Pine needles and warm cake", great combo of words. I am looking foward to the lemons but if you dont have any for a while that is fine, because you do a good job of showing their fervor for each other , some others cannot show it and therefore have to use a lemon. Cheers to you!
Reviewer: yemonja (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: The best 'hello' ever
hot,hot,hot, keep those fresh limes acoming! It is so nice to see Bella full of desire instead of angst.
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