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Reviewer: JNik4444 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2014 07:18 AM · On: One Shot

Alright, Boy Scout come here. I loved that line. It's sad that there aren't a lot more Jacob fanfictions. I really loved this one because it was so natural. This is the way Jake and Bella were meant to be. They have an inherent passion that throughout the series is hinted but never really explored. I think you did a great job of showing that. Great story!

Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:18 PM · On: One Shot

Ok, so again, this is just sooooooo wrong, but it is really gooooood too. One of those, I don't want to see it but I can't stop looking things. I am firmly in the Bella/Edward camp. Its nice to see Jake getting some just the same. Would love to know what came later. Think Edward would step it up or lurk off?

Actually would love to see the scene in the tent when Jake keeps Bells warm all night, they have that conversation about Bella while she sleeps and Edward can hear his thoughts/dreams...Did you write that one?

Reviewer: MZmanda (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 01:16 PM · On: One Shot

Dang right that is how it should have went down!  lol I LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: Toxic-Chi (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:40 AM · On: One Shot

Bravo! I've been searching far and wide for Jacob/Bella fics and you would be surprised at how Edward-centered the fandom has become! It is so nice to find a good Jacob fic. =)

I love your writing style, just detailed enough to leave thing up to the imagination as well. And you captured their relationship perfectly, right down to Jacob's 180s between uncertainty and downright cockyness.

In short - I loved it!

~Toxic-Chi

Reviewer: NaWiSi (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:12 PM · On: One Shot

just one word.......awesome

Reviewer: cherryb (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:07 PM · On: One Shot

Yeah i well fancy jake. LOL.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 09:26 PM · On: One Shot

This was definitely how it should have gone. I think it was perfect

Reviewer: Moonjenn (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:50 AM · On: One Shot

Bravo! Thanks for writing this. I happen to be a new Edward>Jacob convert. I got online today (after a.. um.. nice dream last night) hoping to find a story like this. Do you have any more stories? Rest assured I will be keeping an eye out! :)

Reviewer: TwilightSeductress (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:53 PM · On: One Shot

I couldn't agree more than when you say this SHOULD have happened! I'm with ya 110%!!!

Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:51 PM · On: One Shot

awesome...u have to continue...i want to know what happens when bella goes back and what edward does

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 04:13 PM · On: One Shot

ah what could have been  huh?!!!!!!

Reviewer: Leilal (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:18 PM · On: One Shot

Awww the way it should be Mahalo=TY

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:13 AM · On: One Shot

Great story!  (But i am soooo team Edward!)

Reviewer: PulpAddict (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 08:53 AM · On: One Shot

Hurray!

I absolutely would have chosen Jacob.

Reviewer: KayKay724 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 05:01 AM · On: One Shot

Totally hot one-shot!  I'm usually Team-Edward, but with good smut like this...  Team Switzerland all the way!

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