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Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:13 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

Great chapter as usual.

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 09:54 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 09:12 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

This is a great chapter full of promise and progress looking forward to your next update. I do love your story!!

Reviewer: mysticmemories (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 09:04 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

omg this is getting exciting..please try updating sooonnn

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:52 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

Continue to want to read more and more of your story.  It seems things continue to be on a low simmer for Edward and Bella.  Wonder what is going to tip the balance.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:21 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

Seems as though Bella and Edward are getting closer.  And we find out a little more about his mysterious midnight run to Santa Barbara.  I'm interested to know what Edward and Jasper spoke about while outside...

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:03 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

i really loved this chapter....more please!

Reviewer: aaa (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:13 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

This story is great!
:)

Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:06 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

They finally touch, and it made me tingle!!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 06:56 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio

I can see how each and every time Edward gets naked for her it has to be a shock to her system.  And I can see why she suddenly wants Kate to get knocked over by a pack of inline skaters.  And I can see how she fell alseep inside the Edward cocoon that she made.  Now, I can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up!

Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:39 AM · On: 9 Picasso

Ahhh. Great story to get lost in. And funny;)

Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 03:55 AM · On: 6 Kirchner

Haha. I love rocky horror! I go see it every year. Givin myself over to absolute pleasure! Haha

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:54 AM · On: 9 Picasso

Ah - I so love your story and your Bella. I love the mystery of your Edward. Also what is up with Jess - is she really gone and who is her baby's daddy?? One of my fav story is finishing up and I was disappointed until I started reading this and I know that I will have a new fav to get excited about when I see an update has been posted. I just do a little happy dance when I see your update. yeah!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:32 PM · On: 9 Picasso

I am really enjoying this story. The concept is so fresh and enjoyable. Personally I am a modern art fan - one of my favorite things in Venice was the Peggy Guggenheim museum. I was quite excited to see a Rothko that was more than blurry squares.



Author's Response:

Rothko can't be appreciated in any reproductions, it has to be seen in person.  My personal favorites are the Rothkos in the Tate.  I'm not much of a modernist, but I do love Rothko, his paintings are transcendent.

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:34 AM · On: 1 Michelangelo

I like this AU/H universe you have created. Very different. Naked Edward? Yes, please.

Reviewer: ace1219 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:42 PM · On: 9 Picasso

I cannot wait for the next chapter.  I am glad that we learned more about his girlfriend Tanya, but there must be more to the mystery. I love the twist with Jessica and wonder how it all fits in.  Cannot wait for sparks to fly with Bella and Edward.  Till the next Chapter.

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:17 PM · On: 9 Picasso

oh god - i just love this fucking story.  you know i love your visuals and the slow simmer between them....

Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:08 PM · On: 9 Picasso

i felt like half the chapter just confirm tanya as edward's mystery santa barbara girl... interesting.. i wonder... if edward is older than tanya... is he?

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:14 PM · On: 9 Picasso

Great chapter, I'm wondering what is exactly up with Edward and Tanya and why Jasper is so concered. You're keeping up the mystery aspect of this story and I'm loving it.

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:15 PM · On: 9 Picasso

Hmm...the plot thickens. I'm trying to piece together the bigger picture as you slowly reveal hints, but i'm probably way off base.  Thanks for another great chapter :)

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 08:04 PM · On: 9 Picasso

hmmm who is the daddy?

Reviewer: brown eyes (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 07:33 PM · On: 9 Picasso

I am so loving this story!  Great work...the UST is fantastic.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 04:28 PM · On: 9 Picasso

huh, this is kind of a pleasantly puzzling end, like portent or somehow?  anyway, thanks.

Reviewer: effleurage (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:53 PM · On: 9 Picasso

Thanks for writing this. I feel a lot better about the Tanya situation just hearing it come from Edward's mouth.

"Well, I'd certainly never marry a man who wanted me to give up art to stay home and pop out babies!" I scowled.

Yet, even as I said it I suddenly had a flash of cradling a baby with Edward's green eyes.  Must be the fucking ovary goggles messing with me again.  I suddenly wanted to reproduce with Edward.  It was to be expected, I supposed, because he was gorgeous.  Surely he would have gorgeous babies and my genes were responding to that.   It was all very evolutionary.  I took a long swig of my coke to hide my discomfort.

Note to Bella: Open mouth,  insert foot.



Author's Response:

that is Bella's normal position with Edward.  Poor thing.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 02:52 PM · On: 9 Picasso

It seems Edward was a little more proactive today about spending time with Bella.  He seemed to want to know more about her, and even though he was more forthcoming with his story-he's still holding back.  Maybe he's afraid that Bella will judge him?  Can't wait for more!

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