it's insane how much i NEEEEEED the next chapter.....PLEEEAAAASSSE!

I’m loving this story; nice twist with the Art student angle.  Your Edward is sensual and loving.  He deserves to be loved by Bella.  I can’t bare to see them part.  Is there any way that he can stay a part of her life and deal with the demons surrounding Tonya? 

 

What about the money (different subject)?  You eluded that he was wealthy and an only child?  Is there another side of Edward that he’s kept to himself?  Will Edward’s family accept Bella?  What was his childhood like (was it really as normal as he alluded to earlier)?

 

Also, how strange is it going to be when Edward attends the Art show where he is on display in the nude?   Could you do that with confidence?  I guess I could if I had a “bitch’n bod” like Edward.  How liberating!

 

I want more…..please update soon.

 

Karen (Queen of Obsessive Behaviors)

i can't beliee i'd kinda forgotten about this story. in the first chaps, i thought it was just another college crackfic, but there's just so much more to it. its truly one of the bests i've ever read. good job ! oh , and i'd love to know more about bella's crash.

Hooray...FINALLY!  The thought of Edward stroking himself while she got the condom...GAH!  I need a few minutes alone...

Edward, Edward, Edward, Edward!!!! I just LOVE E's pov! Glad that they finally kissed, too!

This is getting REALLY hot! I can't wait to keep reading! Great job!

YOur opening comment: They're getting in the groove now. YES!!!! I am READY for that!!!!

Hoping they get more and more TOGETHER!

I'm liking how I can picture so much stuff, given your descriptive talents. Gah!  It's about time those two got together... how much did Em say anyway?  I'm wondering if he mentioned the tie-to-the-bed thing to Edward, too.  lol  I don't know if it'll throw off the story, since it's all been in Bella's point of view, and the whole Edward thing seems like it's supposed to remain a mystery and all, but I was curious about his POV... but I'm happy w/what you give us.  I'm sure it'll all be spelled out sooner or later, and I'm willing to wait.  Can't wait for more.  I'm loving this story.

 

I really hope that you are going to be explaining this!!
" He had a patch of skin on his shoulder that looked odd, and after a moment I realized it was make-up. How strange. I wondered what it was covering."

Whew!! That was hot!! Update soon pleeeeese!! I'm loving this story.

GAH! 

I'm freaking hooked on this stroy.  So different than everything else that's out there, which pretty much makes it kick ass.  Edward is frustrating the CRAP out of me.  But that just means you are doing your job as a writer, cause it makes me want to read more!  No way am I tuning out just b/c they got it on (and very well, might I add).

And I really want some EPOV - can't wait to read that! ...'still friends'?!? what is wrong with him?!?

More please!

Well, they finally gave in to each other-but it was done without complete honesty.  Neither one of them will own up to their true feelings.  Bella knows that she feels more than just lust for this man, and wants more than friendship.  It's obvious that Edward feels more too, and is aware to some extent that Bella does too.  Can't wait to see how they cope with this new development!