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Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:13 PM · On: 7 Grosz
I'm hoping there isn't going to be too much angst ahead. I cry very easily. I do appreciate that you do add such wonderful licks of humour.
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:44 PM · On: 6 Kirchner
I am looking forward to your description of their visit to the Rocky Horror Picture Show with Emmett on stage.
Can't get over what these people bet - and the consequences of losing those bets - really funny.
Enjoyed the sketching session with Bella and Edward and the chinese dinner with adding "in bed" at the end of the fortune cookie message. Wondering what secrets Edward is keeping and surprised at Bella's attitude toward real relationships and marriage.
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:05 PM · On: 5 Manet
Well you are certainly throwing a wrench into this budding relationship.
I'm hoping there isn't anything sinister in the works for Bella - she could use something more meaningful in her life rather than fuck buddies.
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:55 AM · On: 4 Basquiat
Thank you for arranging Edward to be Bella's model. I love it.
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:39 AM · On: 3 Toulouse-Lautrec
Thank you for the laughter you provided me with Bella and Edward overhearing Alice and Jasper's amorous coupling.
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi
I am loving the direction your story is heading. I am hoping that Bella can get Edward to pose some more for her for the body of work for the scholarship.
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:58 AM · On: 1 Michelangelo
I am really enjoying your interpretation of Edward, Bella, and your choice of storyline and location.
I want to see where the next chapter leads me.
Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 09:39 AM · On: 20 Whistler
My friend referred this story to me the other day. I've been nonstop reading till I was caught up. It's great!! Can't wait for the next update!!! :)
Reviewer: twilightlover909 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 09:51 PM · On: 20 Whistler
Amazing story, I cannot wait for your next update, Im so eager!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 09:59 AM · On: 20 Whistler
Loved it!
Reviewer: momtokyle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 05:57 PM · On: 20 Whistler
I'm really curious about the line "Alec wasn’t there, which made me a little nervous, a premonition that something was off." It sounds like foreshadowing but is it about her artwork or Edward or something else? Update soon please.
Reviewer: Kourt17 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 09:43 AM · On: 20 Whistler
Alec is up to something I KNOW IT! Maybe just maybe Edward will come to the show?
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 03:29 AM · On: 20 Whistler
It was nice but it wasn't Edward.
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:23 AM · On: 20 Whistler
I'm finally caught up and quite addicted. I love your beautifully painful awakening story for B x E. Going to vote for you in the all human nomination. Totally agree with the category for which you've been nominated! Love it!!!
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:22 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
I'm still trying to catch up on your story. Stayed up til 4:00 this morning reading. I absolutely love it although I'm sitting here now with tears as Edward rode off. I've always loved art and you have inspired me to do SOMETHING artistic. I live through my children as they are both so much more creative than I imagine I can ever be. But who knows... I just need to find my niche. Anyway, love, love, love the story. Edward is so deep. I've not gotten over to read his view yet and there's something about leaving a bit of mystery to him for now (at least until I get caught up to where the last update is.) I hope you'll continue to develop this and finish it out and not give up like I see a lot of authors do. It's like they tire of their beautiful piece of work and never give it its beautiful finish. So again, I hope you'll continue to the end but finish it out with a graceful finish (whatever you see that to be) as the beautiful work that it is. Thanks!
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 07:07 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo
Just started your story... don't know why I haven't seen it before! Love the first chapter.
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:18 PM · On: 7 Grosz
Uh, oh. What the hell did Jessica do? It's not just the tire, is it? I'm afraid to read on but I just can't help myself.
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:50 PM · On: 6 Kirchner
How could any review about this chapter be bad or indifferent? I am totally hooked on this story! You deserve to be worshipped like a goddess for writing this.
Things are really starting to get interesting too. What's going on with those scars and her move at 16? What's his tattoo and imminent departure all about?
I have tons of guesses and lots of completed chapters yet to read. Yum! This is better than dessert. If I can restrain myself and drag my reading out long enough I might lose a pound or two :)
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:25 PM · On: 5 Manet
This "not a guy" man is making me crazy for him and that dream was so fucking HOT!
Thanks for writing this!
Reviewer: 1smartcookie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:44 PM · On: 3 Toulouse-Lautrec
This chapter made me laugh so fucking hard! My whole family was looking at me like I was deranged.
Loving this story.
Thanks for posting it.
Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 02:02 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo
Hi, I love this story. I love how you've portrayed all recognisable characters. Edward is how I imagined him, moody but gorgeous. Bella is exceptionally talented and that shows in how you write her. I really feel her pain in this latest chapter. I hope Edward comes back, and soon. Hugs Clare x
Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:26 PM · On: 20 Whistler
great story, i hope you will do more of epov in outatke i would like to know what happened after he left bella,
Reviewer: Alyssafan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 01:34 PM · On: 20 Whistler
Please finish this story. It's one of the best - I've been reading it for quite awhile! I'm really glad other people have found it as well - it's really one of the best stories on Twilighted.
Thanks!
Reviewer: bigsis0829 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:37 AM · On: 20 Whistler
What in the world is up with Edward? You say your leaving but stay three more days and drink the whole time.....? WTF!?! See, this is way we need an Edward POV because I want to know what is up with him! Bella is a wreck...which is expected. I would be too if the love of my life just stumbled into my life, then when I realized that I loved him he runs away like a coward. I'm very much disliking Edward right now but I'm sure he has his reason. Anywho, you difenitely deserve to be nominated for that award! I couldn't stop reading. Update soon please!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:09 AM · On: 20 Whistler
Reading about Bella trying to paint Quil is just painful. I keep hearing the song "Ain't nothin' like the real thing baby". I admire Bella for trying to move on. The truth though?...I want to know what's going on with Edward. Where is he? What is he doing? Thinking? Does he miss Bella?...
I know that not all stories have HEA. That doesn't mean I don't want it though. In fact, I want it more and more....I want Bella to be happy- truly happy- not just some sort of settling sort of happy.
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